I'd like some constructive criticism on my work, as i'm not getting that many messages on my account.
[url=http://theshadowbrain.deviantart.com/gallery/]Click here for my gallery![/url]
Anything from "It's crap." to a wall of text is accepted.
My god that's beautiful.
[img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/053/7/8/Rorschach_by_TheShadowBrain.jpg[/img]
Needs more value.
Nice.
[QUOTE=Heroms;22108444]Needs more value.[/QUOTE]
That was as dark as the pencil I drew that with would go. :V
I need to get a 10B...
Go get some tortillions, make that shading better.
[QUOTE=Swebonny;22108339]My god that's beautiful.
Rorschach [/QUOTE]
Favorited.
[QUOTE=Newbienice99;22115553]Favorited.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for that.
I do wish however, that people give me some better feedback rather than tell me you've faved it, or telling me i'm doing good.
Like Heroms said about the value.
To be honest I'm not too keen.
They're not necessarily bad, just meh.
The faces aren't the right shape and they're not symmetrical.
Look at this:
Original:
[img_thumb]http://th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/099/7/9/LiteGuardian_by_TheShadowBrain.jpg[/img_thumb]
Mirrored:
[IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/8ygmjn.jpg[/IMG]
Mirrored and edited so the nose looks right:
[IMG]http://i48.tinypic.com/ziq1s6.jpg[/IMG]
Oh, so your saying everyone's face looks symetrical in real life.
And the picture that one was based off of wasn't an exact centre shot.
Your drawings are in the average range as of now.
Ways to improve:
- Clean up the lines. They have a very sketchy look so they come off as not finished and look overall a bit sloppy
- Use line weights. When your lines are clean you should be able to apply this one properly.
- Take your time. Another form of messiness comes from how your shading is done.. It looks like you just scribbled at a high rate of speed.
- Learn proper values. Everything in there, with the exception of a couple of pieces, is extremely flat.
- Anatomy.
-perspective
Keep on working, you're off to a decent start.
[QUOTE=1chains1;22125448]Your drawings are in the average range as of now.
Ways to improve:
- Clean up the lines. They have a very sketchy look so they come off as not finished and look overall a bit sloppy
- Use line weights. When your lines are clean you should be able to apply this one properly.
- Take your time. Another form of messiness comes from how your shading is done.. It looks like you just scribbled at a high rate of speed.
- Learn proper values. Everything in there, with the exception of a couple of pieces, is extremely flat.
- Anatomy.
-perspective
Keep on working, you're off to a decent start.[/QUOTE]
Thanks, I'll work on all that as soon as I can.
[QUOTE=pvt.meh;22125661]*pic*
fantabulous. :fuckyou:[/QUOTE]
I really should upload a high-res version of that thing, it's too awesome to not have high-res.
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