• Slender Man Ripoff
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[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o4xpIxZVP0c[/media] Maybe it's real, maybe it's not. Does it have potential? Where would you like to see the story go?
That's so bad.
[QUOTE=Fancy Kitty;18602121]That's so bad.[/QUOTE] thanks
Cool I guess.
If there's one thing I like more than an ARG, it's a badly done ARG.
49 you see him walking D:
Sorry if you guys don't like it, I'll try to make the next few better, I have never made a video in my life.
Next time you use dolls don't make them Bratz dolls.... /criticism
[img]http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/1866/afafawegargharg.jpg[/img] Holy cuntsauce
[QUOTE=Fancy Kitty;18602482][img]http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/1866/afafawegargharg.jpg[/img] Holy cuntsauce[/QUOTE] D: [editline]07:05PM[/editline] Shit just got real, I'm sorry for doubting this omg
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[QUOTE=Fancy Kitty;18602482][img]http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/1866/afafawegargharg.jpg[/img] Holy cuntsauce[/QUOTE] oh god oh god im burning the tapes make it stop he's here he's watching me H̵̅̀͗̀̃ͨ͒̕*******̦̠͍͓̜Ẻ̡̨̤͔̘͇̯̮L̴̵̴̜ͫ̎̾̽̾͋ͨPͪ̉̆̎ͣ͂̆̚********̘͜ ͭͣ********̨͓̫̖̯̕Ṃ̵̬̝̺͚̞͋̽ͬͅE̷̾́̽̇̌̓͜*******̪̩͎̺͎̬̝ͅ
Im too much of a pussy to watch any slenderman video. What is it?
[QUOTE=Red3000;18602993]Im too much of a pussy to watch any slenderman video. What is it?[/QUOTE] Bratz
[QUOTE=Nintendo-Guy;18603000]Bratz[/QUOTE] As in these? [img]http://images.theage.com.au/ftage/ffximage/2008/05/20/bratz_wideweb__470x302,0.jpg[/img] Holy shit im never watching the videos, EVAR.
[QUOTE=Red3000;18602993]Im too much of a pussy to watch any slenderman video. What is it?[/QUOTE] A guy saying "umm" on a beach.
Why is facepunch in the tags?
nice camera, but you/your friend is a terrible actor, your "plot" is stupid as hell (hmm dedicated to don detrick i wonder what that means in correlation to the plot), theres no incentive to follow the series, and its just a god awful excuse for a slender man tribute also, PLEASE dont use the excuse "ive never made a video before in my life", if that were so, then that should be all the more reason to put actual effort into this, or not make a movie at all.
The dolls have scarred me for life. :suicide:
You need to make the video distortions at some point, then have a flash of him in the video :D
Mmmeh. Was alright.
You really need to write a script next time, because the fact that you are going to try to interview him made it really, really retarded. Especially if he is supposed to be a "thing".
Post the other ones. It's pretty interesting, even if it is a Slender man ripoff.
Thanks above two posters, we are actually gonna start over. Thanks for all the feedback. Just let this thread die now, I'll post a new thread/bump this one when we finish a few parts of the new series. Feel free to PM me if you want to help or something.
Hey, I'm also an Amature film maker, with a couple of my buddies, and I do like the concept, Some things you need to work on * Work in a Later time of day, all the bright lights and visual scenery doesn't make it that creepy * Record when no one is around, so its more like you're in a woodsy area * The pink blankets and dolls aren't very creepy props, Go to the dollar store, or if you have a store called "5 and below" Good props you can use no more than 5 dollars, spread sheets, and everything, it's great, and if you can, go to a wal-mart or whereever and get black or something dark paint spray, it adds more of a dark ambient kind of tone, I don't know. Comments on dialog When you mentioned who you were looking for you said you wanted to find out "What it was" Like you already knew it wasn't human or anything, you should go in with the search thinking that it IS human, like you want to find out who this man is, not "WHAT this man is" ---------- other comments I do understand that this was only the first video and your visualisation for this thing was much more creative and imaginative, I can see that already, but yeah, Good first try, don't get discouraged with the criticization, it's here to help you improve and become better at things. Good luck and I look forward to other videos
we heard there was this one guy in this park lets go investigate there's this lady at the local coffee shop lets go investigate an old man was seen biking near these apartments lets go investigate
[QUOTE=Cup;18609683]Thanks above two posters, we are actually gonna start over. Thanks for all the feedback. Just let this thread die now, I'll post a new thread/bump this one when we finish a few parts of the new series. Feel free to PM me if you want to help or something.[/QUOTE] so you ignore all the constructive criticism and negative feedback altogether and listen to [B]two[/B] people, rather than the majority that hated it you are destined to fail [editline]07:55PM[/editline] [QUOTE=Jeremyc428;18609969]criticization[/QUOTE] *criticism
[QUOTE=Big Blue;18610660]so you ignore all the constructive criticism and negative feedback altogether and listen to [B]two[/B] people, rather than the majority that hated it you are destined to fail [editline]07:55PM[/editline] *criticism[/QUOTE] I listened to all the constructive criticism, I just chose not to comment on people who said "this sucks" and nothing else. Since there was so much negative feedback I'm scrapping this thing and moving on. If a mod passes by and wants to lock this feel free. I'll take the video down once the thread's dead, but until then I'll leave it up for people who want to see.
so youre not continuing the project? good it wasnt your thing
[QUOTE=Big Blue;18613706]so youre not continuing the project? good it wasnt your thing[/QUOTE] That isn't nice at all. I think it was a good effort, just think things through before going out and filming, trust me, it helps quite a lot.
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