OK. Some of the individual patterns you had going in this sounded pretty rad, BUT you need to seriously rethink your song structure. I know it's really easy for beginners to just make a bunch of patterns and lay them ontop of eachother and think it sounds rad, but you really need to think over the song as a whole. Build up to a chorus, bridge into verses, create variety, etc.
I'd love to hear more from you if you can improve in this area :)
simplism is the key, generally ll you need in a song is a bass line, a lead synth, a drumtrack and some fx. if you get 3 leads or basslines and paste em over eachother it'll sound like a horrible mess like it does halfway through your song
[QUOTE=The Salmon;29692752]OK. Some of the individual patterns you had going in this sounded pretty rad, BUT you need to seriously rethink your song structure. I know it's really easy for beginners to just make a bunch of patterns and lay them ontop of eachother and think it sounds rad, but you really need to think over the song as a whole. Build up to a chorus, bridge into verses, create variety, etc.
I'd love to hear more from you if you can improve in this area :)[/QUOTE]
Yeah I pretty much just make one sample in the beginning and create other stuff that sounds nice together, and then the only real form of variety in the song is stopping/starting the other samples.
I literally know nothing about music though so I need to do some research before I build up a chorus, bridge into a verse, etc.. lol
Either way thanks for the feedback, same to Bobie.
I'll keep it in mind next time I try at this :v:
The melody is cool, but it gets messy when you add so much things on top of each other. And it's just the same loop all over. Like salmon said, think the song as a whole.
Dont boost the bass so amazingly much.
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