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Rip and tear.
Why has the right hand (on the left) have extremely long fingers?
Also it has no little finger.
Tits look weird.
But it's nice to see some watercolour on here, I haven't seen much around.
it doesn't actually, I accidently overdid the little bumps at the base of the fingers. If you think it isn't obvious that the lil one is behind, I'll add it.
General pointers for tits?
[editline]06:49PM[/editline]
I'm suprised you didn't complain about the hips being wider than the world.
I would have done, but I couldn't decide if it was just because of the tits and the angle she is facing
Why would the little one be behind? A hand is like
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i.e. the little finger is on the opposite side to the thumb, and the thumb is next to the body, so the little finger should be at the front
Can't really give you any pointers on the tits other than the one on her right isn't big enough and is too close to the other one
You shouldn't be able to really see the cleavage with that dress anyway
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If anything it should have just been shaded as one line across underneath her boobs
[editline]08:08PM[/editline]
also drawing over your image to show the errors, gimme a sec.
The tits are a bit saggy man they should grow like exponential growth and round out man.
There is plenty of reference man.
Probably not much better, I'm not expert on human proportions by a long shot, but it's a start
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Even those don't look right to me I think they need to be a little higher
Funny, boobs came like that cause I spent too much effort trying not to make them too big.
Thanks for that overdraw, I fixed the hand earlier tough.
[editline]10:29PM[/editline]
*I'll attend to it tomorrow - maybe I can get the top layer of paper peeled away, like I did accidently near the helmet.
And who are those pricks rating me dumb without any explenation for.
Oh and her back curves out a little too much I think
[editline]08:42PM[/editline]
I get where you were coming from with not making them huge but they just looked saggy
still with the boobies... keep tweaking them.
...tee hee, tweaking boobies.
I fixed the boobies, just haven't made picture of the new version.
The top slide of the M1911 should not be wider than the grip.
Also the grip is too short, you wouldn't be able to hold that thing properly as it would be front-heavy.
Right hand thumb/finger parity is bizarre.
Left wrist is bizarrely angular.
Where are her knees?
Tits are too close together, they don't sit like this -> CC unless you're pushing them together. Remember gravity acts on breasts too (unless they resemble two halves of a canteloupe).
Really like your style and colour choices though.
nice bump.
yeah, I agree, I didn't put too much work on the 1911, even tough I'm a bit of a gun nut myself. thumb placement is always a problem, and i'm too lazy to walk to the garage and look how it should be with firearms.
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