Made these lyrics in about 15 mins, there may be( pretty sure there are ) spelling errors and grammar errors, my native language isn't english. Trying to get a dystopia feeling to it.
Also these are the first lyrics I have ever made.
[code]In a world of life
we were born and will live
Wishing this will last
Eternally, forever
we will stop the killing of our own kind
trying to cheat ourselves
theres no happiness with no pain
The gods of our own life
we were, now the power is gone
Changed everything, we lost,
to us, to the superior animal
To a infinity of machines
we were made, to rule the world
Dreams fulfilled in a way not intended
No feelings in this cold world
Destroyed by us, by the machines
Only by becoming them we have
made the whole world numb
No Colors
No Sounds
No Pain
Only white
Only silence
We are numb
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So what do you think?
I think that you could do with a little more rhyme, But your vernacular is fairly decent considering English isn't your first language.
Thanks :)
I'm not so into to rhyming vocals, just into vocals that actually try to make you stop for a second and think of things.
I have a friend who writes horribly awful and lame lyrics so this is at least far better in comparison.
Also, I appreciate it not involving some significant other because it seems like 80% of songs/nub lyrics are about a girlfriend or boyfriend. YAY for deeper meaning.
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