You will critique my shirt design and give me advice

[wazzpinator]

[img]file:///C:/Users/Taylor/Downloads/TaylorTempletonSmithGotBrains%20.jpg[/img]

I sent this off to [url]www.splitreason.com[/url]

And I was told this was not a good enough design. Any tips on how to improve it?

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[boomersocks]

UNSUPPORTED MEDIA

you shirt is.. unsupported

[Kite_shugo]

Lemme see the shirt actually

[wazzpinator]

fixed dummies

[The Epidemic]

Looks very nice.

But where's the shirt?

[camper182]

it still isnt fixed. DUMMIE.

[Mezmer]

You tried to link picture from your mail...?

[Re-Con]

wheres the shit

[h2ooooooo]

Gmail..

[Saikotic]

[QUOTE=wazzpinator;17107292][img]file:///C:/Users/Taylor/Downloads/TaylorTempletonSmithGotBrains%20.jpg[/img]

I sent this off to [url]www.splitreason.com[/url]

And I was told this was not a good enough design. Any tips on how to improve it?[/QUOTE]

holy fuck fail

[Osteoporosis]

TaylorTempletonSmithGotBrains%20.jpg

no he ain't

[GrayronV2]

file:///C:/Users/Taylor/Downloads/TaylorTempletonSmithGotBrains%20.jpg

Oh wow.

[The Epidemic]

Wow.

Look at the link -> file:///C:/Users/Taylor/Downloads/TaylorTempletonSmithGotBrains%20.jpg

[Mezmer]

Holy shit even worse now... Localhost