Me and Keenan collabing, Preview (hardstyle) - General

[url]http://www43.zippyshare.com/v/74389099/file.html[/url] A small peek at a song we are making as a collab

Meh.

It isn't quite my cup of tea in fact I think it may have given me a headache. Kind of just seemed like you were bashing some pots and pans. :ohdear:

[QUOTE=Emz;23153044]It isn't quite my cup of tea in fact I think it may have given me a headache. Kind of just seemed like you were bashing some pots and pans. :ohdear:[/QUOTE] Well, its hardstyle so i cant blame you, its supposed to be "hard"

I really liked it. Can't wait to hear more.

Really repetitive honestly. I didn't hear anything that stood out or sounded any kind of original.

Hey, I'm Keenan, and can I just say I agreed to the collaboration before I knew I was working on hardstyle. I hardly like the genre and would be pretty useless on a collaboration of it :v: Just thought I'd let you guys know.

fuck sake! Keenan bruv, you're a music slut. But you don't deliver the goods.

That kick is horrible, it's too gabbery, but even in gabber it would sound shit. Try going for a punchier kick with a long tail, it'll sound so much better. And the melody is blergh, it's not really hardstyle, most hardstyle these days has cheesy melodies over the top. The arrangement is all wrong too. What is that weird clanging sound you have at the breakdowns?

And you should've called yourself Kel.

[QUOTE=I like cats;23198743]That kick is horrible, it's too gabbery, but even in gabber it would sound shit. Try going for a punchier kick with a long tail, it'll sound so much better. And the melody is blergh, it's not really hardstyle, most hardstyle these days has cheesy melodies over the top. The arrangement is all wrong too. What is that weird clanging sound you have at the breakdowns?[/QUOTE] >Melody >Bassline You make me sick.

[QUOTE=Jimmymi;23234134]>Melody >Bassline You make me sick.[/QUOTE] Where did I mention bassline? And it's constructive critisism, take it or leave it. All I'm saying it, it sounds like ass.

I quite liked it actually.

[QUOTE=I like cats;23244388]Where did I mention bassline? And it's constructive critisism, take it or leave it. All I'm saying it, it sounds like ass.[/QUOTE] Saying that it sounds like ass isnt constructive at all.

The bass is awesome, what program did you use to make the song?

pff nu-style reverse bass hardstyle was far better

[QUOTE=Jimmymi;23253740]Saying that it sounds like ass isnt constructive at all.[/QUOTE] No but telling you to stop making music and focus on poetry is

[QUOTE=Jimmymi;23234134]>Melody >Bassline You make me sick.[/QUOTE] Kick needs more bass, right now it sounds kinda dry And what are you talking about? Hardstyle doesn't need a melody? I call BS: [MEDIA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lqgWD4cnpP4[/MEDIA]