• requesting constructive criticism
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Commenting as I listen. Ok no drums or bass. Guitar is a bit choppy in now parts. Your singing isn't flowing very well with the guitar. Some parts seem a bit random and off but it may just be the lack of drums. The sound quality is very bad, and I don't feel like your voice went very well with the music rhythmically and tonally, but that could just be because of the quality and the lack of mixing and other instruments. I suggest you find a few drum loops online to use and play around with. Also maybe investing in something that allows for better recording. Get a program that you can compose in, like Guitar Pro. I think the best approach for you would be to get into a band, but if want to just play by yourself I'd learn some basic mixing, and get a decent DAW that comes with decent sounding midi instruments.
Oh i forgot to mention i'm in a band, and this was recorded on my sansa mp3 player. Just wanted to know if my voice was any good
[quote]I don't feel like your voice went very well with the music rhythmically and tonally[/quote] So I don't think it was very good. Regardless of the recording quality, it didn't go well rhythmically in a lot of places.
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