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HATE MOUSEPAINTING
Not to be a buzzkill but you'd get better feedback by posting it in this thread: [url]http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1050638-Creative-Work-That-Doesn-t-Deserve-A-Thread-V6-lt-3v3ryb0dy-Hypocrite-Critiques-Edition-gt[/url]
It doesn't look bad though, it's just dull and looks as if no effort was poured into it, try spending more time on your creations and working at a higher resolution.
did u draw your avatar?
[QUOTE=Detlef;28911447]did u draw your avatar?[/QUOTE]
yes
I doesnt good at drawing peoples, need more practice
[editline]31st March 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=kaskade700;28911349]Not to be a buzzkill but you'd get better feedback by posting it in this thread: [url]http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1050638-Creative-Work-That-Doesn-t-Deserve-A-Thread-V6-lt-3v3ryb0dy-Hypocrite-Critiques-Edition-gt[/url]
It doesn't look bad though, it's just dull and looks as if no effort was poured into it, try spending more time on your creations and working at a higher resolution.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for advice, it's important to me.
BR BR
gibbi moni pls
Just cause you add some smoke pilalrs doesn't make it post-apoc, more like anti-smoking ad.
The atmosphere I like, you grasp the concept of air perspective but there's only 2 layers of incredebly flat and undetailed retriangles, that are undetailed buildings.
I'd say it needs more levels of buildings and the buildings could atleast resemble something that real world ones do not be simply retriangles with atennae.
Work higher resolution or if you "HATE MOUSEPAINTING" then what's so bad about pencil and paper?
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