Short 5 min Film.
Let me know what ya think. Made in a few hours.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OSy0oWt7XCw[/media]
You've already posted this before.
Its dull and boring.
it needs sexy ladies in bikinis
The direction is nice but the whole black and white + high-pitched, dissonant piano thing is so dull.
Less shakycam and low-dof ultracloseups/odd camera angles. just that you shot with a decent camera doesn't mean you have to overuse everything.
this 5-minute film has more of those than a 2-hour full feature film
It also has the same amount of credits, intros, etc than a regular 30-minute tv-show - you don't really need to show off "RANDOM NAME PRODUCTIONS" logos every time, or you could make it very short at least.
Overall it has a decent ambient, I'd add a few spoken lines and maybe a second actor there to not to make it overly dull piano soundtrack
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