• My first recorded freestyle
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No preparation and yes....the content sucks but here it is regardless: [video=youtube;Ow-cFnyzZHc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ow-cFnyzZHc[/video]
Get some friends who can play in time and a better mic and this could be pretty cool, the lyrics seemed alright and the delivery was fairly nice.
That guitar part. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J---aiyznGQ[/media]
[QUOTE=chaz13;32489703]Get some friends who can play in time and a better mic and this could be pretty cool, the lyrics seemed alright and the delivery was fairly nice.[/QUOTE] I think my own tempo at the beginning was more of a problem then them. I'm used to using hip-hop beats so it was hard to catch the rhythm right with a much gentler melody. This was also our first time playing together and all parts were improv'd. Thanks for the comment though!
The rapper needs to work the mic better. The hard p's are hitting way too common.
[QUOTE=Pepin;32541738]The rapper needs to work the mic better. The hard p's are hitting way too common.[/QUOTE] As in I need to do less "P" words or I need to adjust my enunciation so that they don't stick out as much? Once again, this was my first time rapping on a mic so I don't expect it to be amazing.
But you should expect criticism. I'm not going to say, "don't worry about the hard p's because it's you're first time", rather I"m just going to give you a list of the issues.
Yeah, for sure. So, what exactly is it about the P's?
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