As suggested by a fellow FP. Here's the second episode with feedback taken into account. Again, constructive criticism will be highly appreciated!
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Mn1klfa0u8[/media]
Thought it was this when I opened the thread.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kTXfAtckS3g[/media]
[QUOTE=Pine Cone;47009933]Thought it was this when I opened the thread.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kTXfAtckS3g[/media][/QUOTE]
As brutal as it is to post a better video on a thread advertising another video, this is actually a great example of what you should do to improve yours, jameslove. Note the timing of the jokes, their facial expressions, the way the concept is played around with, so forth.
From a technical standpoint, only real problems concern the stiffness of animation and sound design. Your voice is sometimes barely audible, something you should try to improve on. Put yourself into it, before animating or recording voice, try imagining how you would use your face and body to really say "That's it, enough, get out of my house" or "I've slept two hours this week, you WILL go to bed". Think about the emotions behind the lines, say them as if you were next to jigsaw, and put your back into the animation to breathe some life into the characters.
Practice makes perfect, and don't be afraid to make mistakes. When you put your best into achieving something, when you absolutely love what you do, it shows, and a fantastic artist plays off of their shortcomings if they can't first overcome them.
Good luck on the next one!
Its just not very funny or well animated really is it?
Good work! the animation is a lot better and it made me chuckle a bit. Also was it my comment?
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