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Well, a couple of months back I asked for help with a series I'm making, called zombie survival, following the story of a man called Joseph Haywood, before and after the infection spreads (each episode following days of infection, such as 5 days before outbreak, outbreak, 2 days etc.) If you can help me with anything from; Helping with story/script Player acting Voice acting Server hosting Or video editing, join our group on steam! Currently (Friday 11th June)A group meeting is currently on, So drop by the chat room and we'll sort things out :) Thanks in advance, Vinz-sa80 [EDIT] How can I forget? the group page is [url]http://steamcommunity.com/groups/vinz-sa80[/url]
No.
jesus christ, fuck no. holy shit no.
Or you could be like the dicks above...
Sorry, no. You really need to sort these things out before posting.
Yeah. But no.
[QUOTE=blacksam;22536697]Sorry, no. You really need to sort these things out before posting.[/QUOTE] How so, I dont understand what i've done wrong.
you mean like a L4D in game movie? or are you actually filming for real?
Sure! I'll help do all the work while you take all the credit from us! Sign me up.
[QUOTE=vinz-sa80;22536691]Or you could be like the dicks above...[/QUOTE] We don't want to help, we must be dicks! Nope. Would probably fall through before it even finished anyways.
[QUOTE=reedbo;22536729]Sure! I'll help do all the work while you take all the credit from us! Sign me up.[/QUOTE] Im not taking all the credit, Im only asking for help. If you dont want to help, dont ask.
[QUOTE=vinz-sa80;22536719]How so, I dont understand what i've done wrong.[/QUOTE] You cant just come up with 3 ideas and expect people to go with it. [b]You[/b] need to be the one writing the script, and editing, and hosting a server. You cant rely on other people to do Your project for you.
Yeah what exactly are you doing?
You'll have some better luck if you post this in the GMOD/Gaming section [editline]11:50AM[/editline] And no
[QUOTE=slinkman;22536785]You cant just come up with 3 ideas and expect people to go with it. [b]You[/b] need to be the one writing the script, and editing, and hosting a server. You cant rely on other people to do Your project for you.[/QUOTE] Im not relying on other people, maybe it sounded that way... I've done alot of the script. The story is sorted, I meant maybe 'refining it'. Plus my vegas skills are crap, and I cant host a server. Im sorry, but I need help.
[QUOTE=vinz-sa80;22536756]Im not taking all the credit, Im only asking for help. If you dont want to help, dont ask.[/QUOTE] He didnt ask numbnuts.
[QUOTE=vinz-sa80;22536691]Or you could be like the dicks above...[/QUOTE] you're a dick, dick.
[QUOTE=tommofandan;22536851]He didnt ask numbnuts.[/QUOTE] Oh I'm sorry! typing error! I mean't comment. Really, you sure showed me.
in a cliffhanger thread? no thanks.
[QUOTE=Fat Joe;22536854]you're a dick, dick.[/QUOTE] Cause going on a thread asking for help, and unnecessarily commenting isn't being a dick.
make me director so I can fire you
[QUOTE=Synelor;22536881]Wrong place to ask help, amigo.[/QUOTE] Thanks anyways :/
[QUOTE=vinz-sa80;22536914]Thanks anyways :/[/QUOTE] Facepunch don't like people asking for help Survival of the fittest.
[QUOTE=vinz-sa80;22536867]Oh I'm sorry! typing error! I mean't comment. Really, you sure showed me.[/QUOTE] What I found funny was, you tried to up your game with better grammar to make me look more of a dick, when you missed the capital after the exclamation point, and meant doesnt have a ' after the "A". If your a retard, Ima treat you like one.
[QUOTE=johnT447;22536936]Facepunch don't like people asking for help Survival of the fittest.[/QUOTE] Im not used to facepunch. I didnt realize that asking for help was such a bad thing.
[QUOTE=vinz-sa80;22536894]Cause going on a thread asking for help, and unnecessarily commenting isn't being a dick.[/QUOTE] If you didn't want people who won't want to help with a zombie film coming into a thread about a zombie film, maybe you should have made it clear what the thread would be about from the title, rather than just making a stupid cliffhanger thread which is bound to annoy people. Also, loads of people ask for help on their project but won't actually do any of the work for it themselves. If you want help with your project, prove you're doing something and prove it'll be a worthwhile endeavour, maybe then people will help.
[QUOTE=Mr_Minion;22537091]If you didn't want people who won't want to help with a zombie film coming into a thread about a zombie film, maybe you should have made it clear what the thread would be about from the title, rather than just making a stupid cliffhanger thread which is bound to annoy people. Also, loads of people ask for help on their project but won't actually do any of the work for it themselves. If you want help with your project, prove you're doing something and prove it'll be a worthwhile endeavour, maybe then people will help.[/QUOTE] I'll post up a extract of the story, to prove that I've done something.
[QUOTE]24 year old male, white, works office job. Member of the NRA, family is killed while out during the early stage of the infection. He boards himself up and starts dealing with the insaity that consumes him. He then snaps, killing himself. It's all a dream.[/QUOTE] Just watching the chat pretty funny.
Heres the story discussed so far, because I really dont like mine (hence the whole, I need help thing...) Raz Deadman has been invited to chat. Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac has been invited to chat. Raz Deadman entered chat. Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac entered chat. Raz Deadman: Gentlemen... Vinz-sa80: mentlegen Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Pyro Vinz-sa80: I have invited you, basically because I want to discuss probably the most import thing of all Vinz-sa80: - the story Raz Deadman: k Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Hm, maybe the story should be like, original Vinz-sa80: well i like what i put on the start Vinz-sa80: that came out of my head Vinz-sa80: isnt that original? Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Well, it has been done before kinda Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Maybe something completely original Raz Deadman: I did like the bit about scavanging with the zombies in the distance Vinz-sa80: done before :S Raz Deadman: yeah Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Like, yeah there could be zombies but it would be cool if the people watching it would be asking where the fuck did they come from all the time Vinz-sa80: something completely original.... Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Not just a disease Vinz-sa80: hm, maybe a documentary style? Raz Deadman: yeah Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: something like, a meteorite carrying shit or something Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: I think a diary-like style would fit Raz Deadman: well disease is the only real plausible kind of explanation Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Mindcontrol? Vinz-sa80: i was thinking like war of the servers for the story i typed up btw, how it follows a main character Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Yeh, that would work Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Narrative would be awesome Raz Deadman: and if it's being done like a personal diary we don't actually have to explain exactly how it happens Vinz-sa80: yeah.... Raz Deadman: we have to figure out who the characters are going to be Raz Deadman: because it shouldn't just be one guy Raz Deadman: i don't think Vinz-sa80: I've actually downloaded a really good swep, that gives the player a camera Vinz-sa80: well it dosent have to be one guy Vinz-sa80: i never said that, just it would be nice if he was looking for pockets of resistance, resident evil style (the movies, not the games) Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: and maybe he meets people Vinz-sa80: like where i said part 4, introduces a new character Vinz-sa80: maybe they could meet Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: You know what would be kinda cool, if the main character would develope a major mental handicap Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Like, he couldn't trust anybody Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: or something Raz Deadman: idk Vinz-sa80: maybe skizofrenia Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Yes Vinz-sa80: however the fuck you spell it Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: That would work Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: It would make it interesting Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Split personalities Raz Deadman: we could start out with post traumatic stress and memory loss Vinz-sa80: well i dont want it to be me, myself and irene split personality Vinz-sa80: but maybe he gets like really untrustworthy at some points Vinz-sa80: and maybe like cooperative at others Vinz-sa80: and i like the idea of amnesia and post traumatic stress Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: maybe we could start the series with him in a hospital? his viewpoint from a bedpan, and he looks around and sees sick people Raz Deadman: other types of mental diseases are very difficult to do other than the simple shit like that, though Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: You guys seen Jacobs ladder? Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: The movie? Raz Deadman: no Vinz-sa80: no im afraid Raz Deadman: i hear it's good Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: There is a scene where the main character is being pushed in a cart, and he's like strapped in it Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and he sees all kinds of wierd shit Vinz-sa80: interesting Vinz-sa80: if you've seen terminator salvation, the part where the android is in the bed being wheeled along Vinz-sa80: i was thinking along those lines Vinz-sa80: after he goes into a rebel base and gets wounded Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Nope, haven't seen that one I'm afraid Vinz-sa80: ah shit Raz Deadman: omg Raz Deadman: we should introduce a romantic intrest Raz Deadman: and then kill her Vinz-sa80: i just had a really good idea Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: how about the main character kills her Vinz-sa80: speaking of romantic interest Vinz-sa80: how about flashbacks? im sure you've all seen lost. rather than tell the story, how about memories of how it happened? how his wife died Vinz-sa80: the outbreak Vinz-sa80: so on Raz Deadman: yeah Raz Deadman: that'd be cool Raz Deadman: but not like strait up narratives Vinz-sa80: so that solves the story of the infection problem Raz Deadman: more like actual flashes Vinz-sa80: maybe he fights zombies, and falls asleep and we get small glimpses of what happend Vinz-sa80: happened Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: How about the movie being more about just surviving and running like a bitch Vinz-sa80: i was going for that from the start :/ notice my plot dosent involve much fighting Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Because I don't think everybody is a macho man luggin' m60s blowing a whole armada of zombies down while smoking a cigar Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: the one on the forum Vinz-sa80: thats what i tried to work my way around, guns Vinz-sa80: scavenging from military checkpoints :p Raz Deadman: well where does it take place? Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: how about while the main character is being busy scavenging for food and such, he has to keep himself medicated Vinz-sa80: what do you mean, country wise? or setting wise Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: diabetes or something, I dunno Vinz-sa80: medicated sounds cool Raz Deadman: both Raz Deadman: antiradiaton medication's always fun Vinz-sa80: country wise - im open Vinz-sa80: i havent seen any zombie movies/machinima based on england, but if you guys want it can be in america Raz Deadman: or maybe penecilin because of some kind of unrelated infection Vinz-sa80: mind you Raz Deadman: I don't really care too much Vinz-sa80: there arent really any cities in england, like skyscraper ones Vinz-sa80: i was thinking something to do with his 'mental illness' Vinz-sa80: rittelin - he has add Raz Deadman: maybe Vinz-sa80: ADD* Raz Deadman: haha Raz Deadman: antipsychotics Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Ritalin wouldn't be needed for his survival tough Raz Deadman: perhaps he sees things? Raz Deadman: yeah it wouldn't Vinz-sa80: i was only joking Raz Deadman: haha Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Something very major, like bloodpressure meds or something Raz Deadman: I figured Vinz-sa80: my mum takes iron deficiency pills, how about that :O without iron the disease could spread quickly maybe? Vinz-sa80: maybe no one is immune, but with the right medication and fitness you can overcome it Raz Deadman: well a character like that wouldn't survive Raz Deadman: they need to be at least somewhat able to survive on their own Vinz-sa80: i like the idea of him running out of medzzzzzz and then stumbling around Vinz-sa80: i cant really think of a virus thats not too serious but enough to hinder someone Vinz-sa80: asthma? Raz Deadman: maybe Raz Deadman: i have asthma and I can still do all sorts of shit Vinz-sa80: i have it too, but some people have it bad Vinz-sa80: maybe he needs an inhaler Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: How about we don't actually tell what is wrong with the character Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: or something along those lines Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: but he just needs the meds Vinz-sa80: that sorta crosses the bridge Raz Deadman: It doesn't seem that plausable Vinz-sa80: i quite like the idea really..... keeping it a mystery Raz Deadman: and i don't like stories that use ideas like that Vinz-sa80: hmm Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Like if it's a narrative Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: The character would be practically obsessed with the meds Raz Deadman: i don't think it would look very good say "he needs his medication" "what for" "idk" Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: but he really never explains why he needs them Raz Deadman: hmmm Raz Deadman: maybe it could be something like some rediculous antipsychotic Vinz-sa80: can we have him like really shakey, like he really wants them, and when people are put under fire around him he always finds a way to get away from it all Raz Deadman: and at the end of the series the character goies batshit insane Vinz-sa80: and explodes... Vinz-sa80: like a boomer Raz Deadman: lol Vinz-sa80: for no reason Vinz-sa80: EWWWWW SPITTER GOO Vinz-sa80: okay back on topic Raz Deadman: no like i think it'd be awesome if we developed various characters and at the end of it he just kills them all Vinz-sa80: maybe they join up together, possibly trying to travel to a refugee camp, uninfected like on i am legend Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: That would be awesome Raz Deadman: or maybe kills himself Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: How about he just snaps, and just thinks everybody is infected Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: So he burns everybody Vinz-sa80: with his radioactive-acidic piss Raz Deadman: yeah maybe Raz Deadman: lol Vinz-sa80: FFFFF this is really frustrating Vinz-sa80: i should really be taking notes Vinz-sa80: one second, im gonna copy/ paste all of this Vinz-sa80: and refferr back to it at a later date Vinz-sa80: okay i copied all of it Raz Deadman: or maybe he is just a cigarette smoker? Vinz-sa80: addict Raz Deadman: maybe that's what he's looking for Vinz-sa80: that could be his med problem Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: i dont like the idea of the main character being a coward though, i want him to be able to fend for himself Raz Deadman: because I know that if there was ever a zombie apocalypse cigarettes would be a big concern for me Vinz-sa80: not gung-ho action hero Raz Deadman: right but perhaps he just doesn't really care if he lives or dies Vinz-sa80: OH BEFORE I FORGET Raz Deadman: OMG Vinz-sa80: we are not. I REPEAT NOT. having him visit a conveniently placed gun shop Raz Deadman: right Raz Deadman: he should grab like a handgun and 2 mags off of a cop Vinz-sa80: well army checkpoints Raz Deadman: and only have that for a good part of the story Vinz-sa80: thats my favourite ideas Raz Deadman: right Vinz-sa80: idea Raz Deadman: but those would be too well stocked Vinz-sa80: thats actually a really good idea dude Vinz-sa80: a handgun Raz Deadman: i think it would be interesting to have only like 2 mags for a fair amount of the story Vinz-sa80: maybe he takes common household items, and tries to use them to his advantaaaage Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Weapons would be pretty fucking rare Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: in an apocalypse Raz Deadman: yeah Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: More melee, less pew pew Vinz-sa80: not if the military intervened Raz Deadman: right Raz Deadman: but i still think it would be cool having him like "i've got a total of like 35 rounds" Vinz-sa80: maybe he hears a horde Raz Deadman: and not knowing where he can get more rounds Vinz-sa80: and he checks a mah Vinz-sa80: mag Vinz-sa80: and its on its last couple of rounds Raz Deadman: that'd be cool Vinz-sa80: and the clip is of him trying to evade them Raz Deadman: yeah Raz Deadman: omg idea Vinz-sa80: using pre-set traps perhaps? Raz Deadman: we can have him all like "bwa everyone's dead, I don't care if I live anymore" Raz Deadman: then introduce him to a romantic interest Raz Deadman: and kill her Raz Deadman: the character depth shown would be rediculous Vinz-sa80: accidentally? or cause hes off his head Raz Deadman: like she gets grabbed by a zombie because she's at the rear of the group or something Raz Deadman: oh and we need a leaderly character Raz Deadman: for when there's a group Vinz-sa80: maybe she gets bitten, and theyre alone and he puts a bullet through her head cause he dosent want her to suffer Raz Deadman: yeah! Raz Deadman: that'd be great Vinz-sa80: or maybe he can beat her to death, cause that'd just make my day Raz Deadman: hahaha Raz Deadman: i like the bullet idea Vinz-sa80: you'd think, oh shes gonna die, a quick death im guessing Vinz-sa80: and he beats her with a blunt object Vinz-sa80: HAHAHAHAHAH Raz Deadman: hahahahaha Vinz-sa80: nah bullet is the way to go. Raz Deadman: that'd be hilarous Vinz-sa80: it would, but its not meant to be funny :/ Raz Deadman: yeah Raz Deadman: XD Vinz-sa80: okay so bullet to the head cause she gets bitten Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: How about he lets her live Vinz-sa80: blinx, any ideas? Vinz-sa80: oh ur there Raz Deadman: or maybe knife to the upper vertibrate Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and causes the whole group to get infected Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: or die Raz Deadman: maybe Vinz-sa80: i like that Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: because he's a jackass loving her too much Vinz-sa80: maybe he just tells the group that shes fine Vinz-sa80: but shes actually infected Vinz-sa80: also, how quick shall the infection....infect someone? Vinz-sa80: zombify them Vinz-sa80: days after they're infected? Vinz-sa80: minutes? Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: I like the fast one Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Couple of moments and RAR Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: they're already there Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: how about the infection is in stages Raz Deadman: I'd say give it like 20 minutes Vinz-sa80: but if shes gonna be in the group they need to think that shes fine Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: like, they don't turn into zombies right away Vinz-sa80: so give her time Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: they change bit by bit Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: How about the main character is infected Vinz-sa80: NOT A FLU LIKE VIRUS. Vinz-sa80: end of. Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and is keeping it down with meds Raz Deadman: maybe Vinz-sa80: but if there were meds for it surely it would have been mass produced to pend the outbreak? Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: if thats the route we're taking, then we should have it so he discovered it AFTER the outbreak Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: How about like basic antibiotics Raz Deadman: i still like the fact that the character's just looking for cigarettes Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Like maybe he had some normal disease before the zombie thing Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and he later figured out after he got bitten that it helps to keep it down Raz Deadman: haha that's why i suggested penicillin earlier Vinz-sa80: OOH and he has some meds, but he dosent give her any cause he's a selfish bastard Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Yep Vinz-sa80: so she dies cause of hi Vinz-sa80: him Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: he needs them for himself Vinz-sa80: and he goes mental Vinz-sa80: "apeshit" if you will Raz Deadman: lol Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: How about he runs out of meds and goes mental afterwards Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Maybe she steals them Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: or something Vinz-sa80: knowing he would die Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: I'd be pissed off too Vinz-sa80: and become a zombie Vinz-sa80: lol i'd be more than pissed. Id hunt the bitch down Raz Deadman: haha Vinz-sa80: buttsecks her and leave her to die Raz Deadman: haha Vinz-sa80: so lets see what we've got so far; Vinz-sa80: follows a single character surviving through the oubreak Vinz-sa80: possible flashback Vinz-sa80: s Vinz-sa80: he needs meds Vinz-sa80: we dont know why Vinz-sa80: not yet Raz Deadman: or cigarettes Raz Deadman: lol Vinz-sa80: same difference Vinz-sa80: uhm Vinz-sa80: what after that Vinz-sa80: we need someting before the group Raz Deadman: maybe he finds the girl first Raz Deadman: maybe he like rescues her or something Vinz-sa80: more like an aww fuck situation where he cant decide whether to leave her to die or save her Vinz-sa80: and he saves her and they team up Vinz-sa80: he realizes he loves her Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: and then they join the group Vinz-sa80: a* group Raz Deadman: that sounds good Vinz-sa80: i think the first part should have him talking, like this is the story of my life blablabla Raz Deadman: maybe Vinz-sa80: more like a sort of story following him, and maybe in future if this all goes well a possible side story? following another character Raz Deadman: you have to be really careful with naratives like that, or else the can come off pretty cheesy Vinz-sa80: i want something short and simple for that Vinz-sa80: like this is the story of the infection of etc.etc. Raz Deadman: "niggas are dead!" Raz Deadman: /intro Vinz-sa80: haha thats it Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: How about we just jump right in Raz Deadman: yeah Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: No cheezy this is how I survived Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Just like, shit hit the fan yo Vinz-sa80: yea Vinz-sa80: btw if there are any black characters they get a revolver and a machete Raz Deadman: haha Vinz-sa80: should we have the group split at some point? Raz Deadman: yeah Raz Deadman: that would be cool Vinz-sa80: like there isnt enough food, you're gonna get us killed etc Raz Deadman: yeah Raz Deadman: maybe there's a rumored boat that some people believe in, and then others just want to head closer to the closest city Raz Deadman: omg Raz Deadman: maybe the main characters choose the boat Vinz-sa80: I am legend idea i stated erlier Raz Deadman: and it's the wrong choice Vinz-sa80: a refugee camp Raz Deadman: maybe Vinz-sa80: turns out there is nothing there Vinz-sa80: suicide. Raz Deadman: exactly Raz Deadman: and there's like 3 or 4 of them that go Raz Deadman: main character, romantic interest, and 2 others Raz Deadman: and the two others get killed somewho Raz Deadman: *somehow Vinz-sa80: we cant have action movie deaths though Raz Deadman: and then some thing really shitty eventually happens and she gets infected Raz Deadman: no of course not Vinz-sa80: bitten, back of the group Raz Deadman: maybe even some friendly fire Vinz-sa80: black guy comes into play Raz Deadman: but he eventually has to kill the chick and he's left all alone Raz Deadman: maybe he shoots her with the last bullet! Vinz-sa80: yeah, like a really hard decision Raz Deadman: and he's just left in an empty room Raz Deadman: no like he doesn't even realize Vinz-sa80: let her live, she stays longer but becomes infected - a threat Raz Deadman: or maybe he lost a magazine Vinz-sa80: kill her now, last bullet gone Vinz-sa80: what happened to the other gut Vinz-sa80: guy Vinz-sa80: uhhh Vinz-sa80: time and space guy Vinz-sa80: what do you think Raz Deadman: idk Vinz-sa80: noooooo :L i was talking about the other guy in the chat room Raz Deadman: yeah Raz Deadman: i know Raz Deadman: maybe afk? Vinz-sa80: yeah maybe Raz Deadman: but anyway he doesn't even realize it's the last bullet Raz Deadman: omg Raz Deadman: and if it's a revolver he uses it, points the gun at himself and *click* Vinz-sa80: ooh Vinz-sa80: thats a really good idea Raz Deadman: and he cycles through the entire cylinder and nothing Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Ho, sorry Raz Deadman: he frantically looks for a box of ammo that he though he had or somthing Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: I was playin' minecraft Vinz-sa80: minecraft? Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Yarp Vinz-sa80: anyways back to the subject at hand Vinz-sa80: read the above, and tell us what you think Vinz-sa80: btw i copy/pasted all this onto the facepunch forum Vinz-sa80: give people an idea of what we're doing Raz Deadman: lol awesome Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Haha, cool Vinz-sa80: okay..... Vinz-sa80: any fresh ideas? Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Do we know the cause of the zombie infection? Vinz-sa80: i havent thought it up Vinz-sa80: we were lightly touching it erlier Vinz-sa80: meteor or some shit Vinz-sa80: but i dont like that idea : Vinz-sa80: :/ Raz Deadman: i don't think it's necessary to say Vinz-sa80: i like the idea of a mutated virus - more believalbe Vinz-sa80: believalble Vinz-sa80: ffs Vinz-sa80: believable Raz Deadman: yeah Raz Deadman: the ebola virus is actually pretty close to zombies Vinz-sa80: something like brain cancer (if there is such thing :S ) that mutates that makes people crazy Vinz-sa80: ebola? Raz Deadman: yeah Raz Deadman: it's an interesting disease Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Scary as shit Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Do not want Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: never heard of it :S Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: You become a bloodbag Vinz-sa80: is it kill me now scary? Raz Deadman: yeah Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: everything in you turns into a liquid Vinz-sa80: what Raz Deadman: no Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Yep Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: well not really Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: you just melt into a bloodbag Raz Deadman: there's a lot of bleading Raz Deadman: right at the end Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: your internal organs just fucking die and turn into a soup Vinz-sa80: what like a body hemmorage Raz Deadman: yeah Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and when you're about to die you spazz out spreading infected blood everywhere Vinz-sa80: ffffffffffff Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: It's nasty Vinz-sa80: thats disgusting Vinz-sa80: i dont want that. Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Look up some pictures Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Goddang Vinz-sa80: how do you get it? Raz Deadman: africa Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: You get it by touching ebola infected blood Raz Deadman: there are only like a total of 100 cases of it Vinz-sa80: FUCK ITS A WORM Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: There was that one huge outbreak Raz Deadman: i think Raz Deadman: yeah Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: They made a movie out of it Raz Deadman: but that was only like 60 people Vinz-sa80: thats fucking disgusting Vinz-sa80: okay Vinz-sa80: so mutated ebola? Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: for one part shall we have our main character asking how the outbreak started? Raz Deadman: no Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: I'd rather not have somebody explain it Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: nobody knows Vinz-sa80: ah okay Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and the ones who know are probably dead Raz Deadman: i think that there would be more pressing matters at hand Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: or hiding somewhere Vinz-sa80: i see Raz Deadman: yeah Vinz-sa80: so theres no point in discussing how the virus started then Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: if I heard a mutated ebola broke out Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: I'd fly to mars Vinz-sa80: hha Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and stay there Raz Deadman: lol Raz Deadman: fuck this guys Raz Deadman: peace Raz Deadman: lol Vinz-sa80: u going Raz Deadman: no Raz Deadman: i was just saying Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Seriously, that's what I would do Vinz-sa80: mmmmk Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: " Ebola mutated, you're fucked " Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Then I'd turn off the TV Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: put on my space helmet Vinz-sa80: i've only just learnt of ebole :D and it already scares me! Raz Deadman: lol Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: " Fuck your shit earth, I'm out " Raz Deadman: it should Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and I'd fly to the sunset Vinz-sa80: i like the idea of "its time to take the easy way out" Raz Deadman: XD Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: I feel like I should get a handgun Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: just so I can finish myself off if I catch ebola Vinz-sa80: BACK TO TOPIC Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: it's that fucking scary Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Roger Vinz-sa80: well, theres something else.... Raz Deadman: ?\ Vinz-sa80: Bme pain olympics yourself Raz Deadman: OHGOD Vinz-sa80: thats enough to make you wanna "easy way" Vinz-sa80: or tub girl in your mouth Vinz-sa80: in fact, i want both of you to google image tubgirl Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: Have you guys seen that video where somebody puts a glass jar Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: you know where Vinz-sa80: yep Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and it cracks Vinz-sa80: i've seen all the sick shit Raz Deadman: jesus christ Blinx2:Krizuie of Time and Spac: and oh god there is blood Vinz-sa80: watch kids in a sandbox Vinz-sa80: guy gets a dildo IN his dick Vinz-sa80: it like split Vinz-sa80: s Raz Deadman: whaaaa?! Vinz-sa80: yep Vinz-sa80: anyways im gonna go now [second meeting] Vinz-sa80: okay Si - Goin Florida: :( Si - Goin Florida: he crashed Si - Goin Florida: give him a seck Vinz-sa80: okay Kiberkiller: CD Key authentication invalid for internet servers. Vinz-sa80: .....? Kiberkiller: never got this error before Si - Goin Florida: cd key? Kiberkiller: let's me see what hell it is Vinz-sa80: gmod dosent even use a cd key Si - Goin Florida: Gmod doesent hve a CD? Si - Goin Florida: yeah Kiberkiller: Informative.... Vinz-sa80: take ur time. ill play single player :3 Si - Goin Florida: Noooo Si - Goin Florida: just get hamachi Vinz-sa80: oh it'll probably be better if i host btw. my gmod is basically just got stuff for filming Vinz-sa80: as in Vinz-sa80: everything we would need Kiberkiller: as in? Si - Goin Florida: Go get hamchi then :P Vinz-sa80: i suggested that erlier.... Kiberkiller: Vinz-sa80: oh it'll probably be better if i host btw. my gmod is basically just got stuff for filming Kiberkiller: like what? Si - Goin Florida: filming equipment Vinz-sa80: oh Vinz-sa80: sorry Si - Goin Florida: Those new Hd camreas Vinz-sa80: new hd cameras....? Si - Goin Florida: Idk lol, im bored :S Kiberkiller: Vinz, how old are you? Vinz-sa80: why Kiberkiller: just wondering Vinz-sa80: you seem slightly hostile towards me right now Vinz-sa80: if you must know im 14 Si - Goin Florida: kiber how old are you? Kiberkiller: 18 Kiberkiller: how so? Vinz-sa80: hahaha i think im the youngest in the group, yet im running it Si - Goin Florida: and I am 15 Vinz-sa80: sucks being young, no one takes you seriously Kiberkiller left chat. Si - Goin Florida: I know that feeling xD Vinz-sa80: and he left. Si - Goin Florida: :S wanker Kiberkiller entered chat. Si - Goin Florida: welcome back Vinz-sa80: what was that about Kiberkiller: reflex Kiberkiller: sry Si - Goin Florida: Lol? Vinz-sa80: okay i got hamachi running Si - Goin Florida: sweet Si - Goin Florida: whats the channel and pass? Vinz-sa80: channel is the ip-like number im guessing Vinz-sa80: i dont use hamachi :S Si - Goin Florida: Oh right Si - Goin Florida: in that case hold tight Si - Goin Florida: Ok Si - Goin Florida: VinzFilmGroup Si - Goin Florida: is the channeel Si - Goin Florida: and the pass is Si - Goin Florida: 1234 Si - Goin Florida: Look at the hamchi thing Si - Goin Florida: find the network drop down Si - Goin Florida: press it Vinz-sa80: done. Si - Goin Florida: and click join exisiting Vinz-sa80: i made it right after you told me to do the password :P Si - Goin Florida: Lol Si - Goin Florida: Ok whats the name etc? Vinz-sa80: gay, Vinz-sa80: i thought you told me to make it Vinz-sa80: so i did the same credentials Si - Goin Florida: No lol Vinz-sa80: ill join you then Si - Goin Florida: I made one xD Si - Goin Florida: VinzFilmGroup Si - Goin Florida: 1234 Si - Goin Florida: kiber u there? Vinz-sa80: done Si - Goin Florida: wince-pc is in Si - Goin Florida: Ok Kiberkiller: i'll pass with gmod thingy Si - Goin Florida: now host one Si - Goin Florida: Were using hamachi now Kiberkiller: i'm doing voice acting...remember? Vinz-sa80: yeah but when theres only 3 of us Vinz-sa80: kiber was it you that went on mic to me Kiberkiller: what are we going to do? Vinz-sa80: the first episode, the introduction Kiberkiller: as in, filming? Vinz-sa80: yep Si - Goin Florida: wait Kiberkiller: where is the camera man then? Si - Goin Florida: were filming now? Vinz-sa80: starts off with panning over a city, seeing zombies at a distance Kiberkiller: ^my though exactly Vinz-sa80: focuses on main character Si - Goin Florida: I thought this was a meeting? Kiberkiller: informing would be nice Vinz-sa80: right its a meeting then, even after you told me to download hamachi and i've been stating that we'd be running a server Kiberkiller: you said that you needed the server Si - Goin Florida: Well you originaly said you qwere gonna get it Vinz-sa80: so what, these past 15 minutes were for kicks and giggles then? Kiberkiller: since you didn't inform anybody Si - Goin Florida: Well you never mentiond filming Vinz-sa80: i thought it was obvious Kiberkiller: emmmmm Si - Goin Florida: we can't film with half the crew anyway Vinz-sa80: im sorry, if you arent comfortable with filming never mind Vinz-sa80: so this is a meeting now then Kiberkiller: so, what is this meeting about? Si - Goin Florida: The film id guess Vinz-sa80: the story i suppose Si - Goin Florida: So we can decide a story Kiberkiller: fine, what do we have so far, Vinz? Vinz-sa80: well the basic outline is: (dont interrupt me) Vinz-sa80: the story follows a single character, male, background unknown Vinz-sa80: what we do know is bad, his family is dead Vinz-sa80: he's got a mentall ilness (unknown as of now) Vinz-sa80: and he's living on the streets Vinz-sa80: the first scene shows our character walking through streets in the daytime (less zombies in day) Vinz-sa80: scavenging food and useful items Vinz-sa80: every now and again he'll find something interesting, but discard it Vinz-sa80: uhhhhh Vinz-sa80: oh yeah Kiberkiller: Is that all? Vinz-sa80: he goes to a military checkpoint, and finds a pistol with only 2 clips Vinz-sa80: a medical kit Vinz-sa80: and a flashlight Kiberkiller: I mean, do we have any kind of organized script? Vinz-sa80: its now getting dark Vinz-sa80: and he needs to find shelter Vinz-sa80: i havent even finished the whole story yet :/ Vinz-sa80: ill do the script when there are more people, and we've got a decent story Vinz-sa80: any ideas so fare Vinz-sa80: far Si - Goin Florida: Wil it be first or third person? Vinz-sa80: third Vinz-sa80: camera follows the character Si - Goin Florida: will there be a narrator?? Vinz-sa80: but i was thinking maybe firstperson setpieces Kiberkiller: you want to film and you don't even have the script? Vinz-sa80: if there would be it would most likely be him Vinz-sa80: if you listened Vinz-sa80: i said just a camera panning over a city Vinz-sa80: -.- Kiberkiller: you =/= script Kiberkiller: are are you? Vinz-sa80: what Vinz-sa80: i dont understand =/= Kiberkiller: =/= mean not Kiberkiller: opposite of = Vinz-sa80: i havent got a script. Vinz-sa80: ugh im gonna get something to eat. be back in a bit Si - Goin Florida: Ok cya Kiberkiller: well the first thing we need to to, obviously, is a script Si - Goin Florida: well no Si - Goin Florida: we need a 100% sotry first Si - Goin Florida: to make the script about Kiberkiller: well script = story Si - Goin Florida: I meant like uhh, what happens Si - Goin Florida: then you make the script for what happens Kiberkiller: yeah, the script Kiberkiller: ugh Kiberkiller left chat. Vinz-sa80: okay im back Vinz-sa80: that guy = dick Si - Goin Florida: welcome Si - Goin Florida: back Si - Goin Florida: Why you say that? Vinz-sa80: i dont want to make a script without a solid story Vinz-sa80: if he dosent like that well tough Vinz-sa80: i take it you disagree Si - Goin Florida: Well, I don't see that he has done anything wrond :S Si - Goin Florida: wrong* Vinz-sa80: everything that i said he had to contradict Vinz-sa80: maybe im just being irritable Vinz-sa80: where did he go Si - Goin Florida: uhh dunno Si - Goin Florida: I just reinvited him Kiberkiller entered chat. Si - Goin Florida: hes back Vinz-sa80: kay Kiberkiller: yes? Vinz-sa80: seing as you want a script so bad maybe we should work on it Kiberkiller: sure, who's writing? Vinz-sa80: all of us, seeing as i cant think of the first thing to put Vinz-sa80: or do you mean taking down what we put Vinz-sa80: cause ill do that Kiberkiller: okay Vinz-sa80: .....well? Vinz-sa80: i've told you what the first episode is gonna start out like Kiberkiller: well, first off Intro, what's going to happen? Vinz-sa80: problem is its mainly a introduction, he isnt gonna meet anyone Vinz-sa80: maybe he'll mumble to himself a bit Vinz-sa80: but i dunno Si - Goin Florida: Maybe thats part of his mental problem Kiberkiller: Intro, what is going to happen. Si - Goin Florida: talking to himself? Vinz-sa80: what should we call our main character Vinz-sa80: i havent even thought of a name Vinz-sa80: and should we start off with a narrative Kiberkiller: That says? Vinz-sa80: describes his story, what happened to earth Kiberkiller: and more in detail? Si - Goin Florida: His name could be: Joseph Haywood Kiberkiller: sure but back to narration Kiberkiller: what shout it say Vinz-sa80: my name is joseph haywood and this is my story is too corny Vinz-sa80: but i cant think of how it should start Kiberkiller: every time you do that i have less and less left for this project Kiberkiller: * less initiative Vinz-sa80: well im sorry, i cant think of how to start it Kiberkiller: well i guess that should be the homework 'till meeting Vinz-sa80: anyways what do you mean I have less and less for this project? we havent finished the story, and we've started the script. you can go around acting like you're the backbone of operations Si - Goin Florida: Maybe it starts off with a new report on a tv? or something like in shaun of the dead? Or a radio broad cast? Kiberkiller: Vinz-sa80: my name is joseph haywood and this is my story is too corny Vinz-sa80: well it is Kiberkiller: act a little bit more mature, thank you Vinz-sa80: im giving a fucking example Vinz-sa80: besides i dont see you giving ideas. I simply stated that we arent having that 'this is my story' type of dialouge Si - Goin Florida: oh boy Kiberkiller: and your point is? Vinz-sa80: that you're being a dick and if you dont have something nice to say dont say it. im frustrated that no one is bothering to join the chat, and it seems like every idea/statement i put across has to be contradicted by you Kiberkiller: since you're acting like a five year old prick Kiberkiller: oh well we can solve it the simple way Si - Goin Florida: Guys please Si - Goin Florida: Just shh Si - Goin Florida: Now the opening Si - Goin Florida: What are we thinking Si - Goin Florida: Was my idea any good? Vinz-sa80: what, the shaun of the dead etc Kiberkiller: Narration in the intro is the standart Kiberkiller: we should go for it Vinz-sa80: i like that, with a tv broadcast Si - Goin Florida: yeah Si - Goin Florida: or we could fo like Si - Goin Florida: do* Si - Goin Florida: A narration thats kinda like a broadcast Si - Goin Florida: that slowly zooms in on a tv or radio? Si - Goin Florida: then our main doode runs past being chased by zzombies? Vinz-sa80: maybe the audio of several semi-overlapping tv boardcasts whilst video plays over the city, already infected Vinz-sa80: such as reports of violence etc, yet everything has already gone to shit and everythings already happened Si - Goin Florida: yeah kiber? Kiberkiller: why are we doing this in GMod then, btw? Kiberkiller: would L4D be better Kiberkiller: ? Vinz-sa80: and i like the idea of main character running past, possibly have just show his legs run past, then a couple of seconds later a group of infected Si - Goin Florida: Well in gmod you can have all of l4ds stuff Vinz-sa80: because gmod is more flexible, easier for us to control Kiberkiller: but yeah it's probably better to use GMod and l4d npc's Si - Goin Florida: and you cant realy use l4d for it Vinz-sa80: i dont have the first l4d anyways Kiberkiller: ofcourse you can Si - Goin Florida: when compared to gmod? Si - Goin Florida: (bear in mind i've never played l4d) Vinz-sa80: i think we should just stick to gmod Kiberkiller: Kiberkiller: but yeah it's probably better to use GMod and l4d npc's Vinz-sa80: sorry i missed that. Vinz-sa80: so what are we thinking for the narrative then, are we sticking with the tv reports over camera panning? Kiberkiller: why not both? Vinz-sa80: such as Si - Goin Florida: brb Vinz-sa80: when you say why not both.......? Kiberkiller: first pan with broadcast voice then the broadcast itself Vinz-sa80: yeah okay Vinz-sa80: then have our character run past Vinz-sa80: with infected in pursuit Vinz-sa80: what do you think......? Kiberkiller: yeah sounds good Vinz-sa80: okay ill put that down.... Si - Goin Florida: bak Vinz-sa80: okay Vinz-sa80: where did you actually get Joseph Haywood from Si - Goin Florida: I picked two of my friends names at random and mixed em up Vinz-sa80: ah okay Kiberkiller: sry guys i have to go now Si - Goin Florida: ok man Si - Goin Florida: cya later Kiberkiller: see ya Kiberkiller left chat. Vinz-sa80: wow he left before i could say bye Vinz-sa80: Main character = Joseph Haywood (only in depth character in part 1) [camera starts panning over city, News broadcast(s) playing in background, some overlapping then switches to just broadcast, then changes to camera showing a fixed point, where main character runs past, roughly 8 seconds later group of infected run past camera too] Joseph Haywood: Shit, shit shit!! [continues running, fumbling around pockets] Joseph Haywood: come on, come on where the fuck are you?! Vinz-sa80: what do you think Vinz-sa80: thats the script so far Si - Goin Florida: sounds good, what is he looking for? Vinz-sa80: i was thinking a gun Vinz-sa80: but now that i think about it he should have one yet Vinz-sa80: possibly a home made weapon? Si - Goin Florida: nO Si - Goin Florida: Car keys Vinz-sa80: really? Si - Goin Florida: well Si - Goin Florida: maybe his car ran out of gas Si - Goin Florida: and he has like a photo or something in the car Si - Goin Florida: that he realy wants Si - Goin Florida: OR Si - Goin Florida: The pills you were dusccisng that he had? Vinz-sa80: maybe he ussses car to escape? Vinz-sa80: i dont think we should introduce pills right at the VERY start Vinz-sa80: im thinking after we learn a bit about him Si - Goin Florida: Or maybe its a camera? Si - Goin Florida: Have you seen the film Si - Goin Florida: Cloverfield? Vinz-sa80: yeah Vinz-sa80: fuck yeah Vinz-sa80: amazing movie Si - Goin Florida: maybe he could be documenting the whole thing as he goes Si - Goin Florida: Like in cloverfield Vinz-sa80: i have a swep that gives the player a camera, and we could do a set piece, first person in a dark house and his only source of ligh it the camera Vinz-sa80: light Vinz-sa80: that could scare the viewer Vinz-sa80: like shit its too dark in here, Vinz-sa80: gets his camera Vinz-sa80: looks around Vinz-sa80: and zombies. Vinz-sa80: lots of them. Si - Goin Florida: night vision camera Vinz-sa80: yeah Vinz-sa80: :D Vinz-sa80: u seen I AM LEGEND Si - Goin Florida: and maybe he could be playing the broadcast from the camera? Si - Goin Florida: Oh yes Si - Goin Florida: One of my top 10 films :D Vinz-sa80: well that bit where he walks into that reall dark room Vinz-sa80: first person, with a camera Si - Goin Florida: Oh yeah Si - Goin Florida: Like in doom Si - Goin Florida: at the end Vinz-sa80: havent seen/played doom Si - Goin Florida: oh well at the end of the film Si - Goin Florida: a guy goes into like a first perosn mode kicking ass Vinz-sa80: ah Vinz-sa80: Main character = Joseph Haywood (only in depth character in part 1) [camera starts panning over city, News broadcast(s) playing in background, some overlapping then switches to just broadcast, then changes to camera showing a fixed point, where main character runs past, roughly 8 seconds later group of infected run past camera too] Joseph Haywood: Shit, shit shit!! [continues running, fumbling around pockets] Joseph Haywood: come on, come on where the fuck are you?! [Pulls out a small keyring, with a single car key] Joseph Haywood: haha got you now... [continues running until comes along a muscle car, where he enters the car and unlocks the door, fumbles around with the ignition before setting off, camera pans out at this point over the city with Joseph Haywood driving away and the ZS title appears] Si - Goin Florida: Sounds good Si - Goin Florida: But he cannot keep the car Vinz-sa80: yeah Vinz-sa80: maybe runs out of petrol and he ditches it Si - Goin Florida: maybe he runs over another survivor? Vinz-sa80: hahaha Vinz-sa80: that would make me piss myself laughing Vinz-sa80: cause im just sick like that. Si - Goin Florida: xD Vinz-sa80: so should we really have that? Si - Goin Florida: No lol Vinz-sa80: i think just runs out of petrol Vinz-sa80: or maybe blocked road? Si - Goin Florida: or gets distracted and crashes? Vinz-sa80: yeah maybe Vinz-sa80: or cause he dosent take meds spazzez out and gets forced off the road Vinz-sa80: ?? Si - Goin Florida: I dunno Si - Goin Florida: Maybe he has a flashback Si - Goin Florida: and it shows a recording Si - Goin Florida: of like his friend getting killed Si - Goin Florida: then when he looks up he has to swerve out of the way of something Vinz-sa80: yeah, or maybe like a breif flashback of his family dieing Vinz-sa80: i just thought of a problem Vinz-sa80: how are we gonna make a tv like sound, you know how tv's sound, they're slightly muffled Vinz-sa80: when we do the recording for the broadcasters/anchormen Si - Goin Florida: Music editing software
Wow, so you just copied and pasted a steam chat. GREAT STORY YOU HAVE THERE!
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