• Trying my hand at writing kinky erotica
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The stories that I have written so far seem to get a good response, I know they have there issues and I am only just starting out in the whole writing field, so I welcome all constructive criticism and any helpful hints or books I should read to help boost my skill level. WARNING, my stories cover a lot of kinky BDSM type stuff. These first few stories took about 30 mins each to write as I was writing it for someone at the time: Dark Passageway [quote] your walking down a long dark underpass, there's faint lights so you cant see very far, you are oblivious to anything that's happening more than 10 meters away. from behind you, you hear a noise, like a dark growl, you turn around and you see blackness, the lights turning out one by one. you panic and start to run down the underpass. you run faster and faster but the darkness approaches, when suddenly something grabs your ankles and wrists. whatever just grabbed you lifts you into mid air, and forces your arms and legs to be spread-eagled tightly between them. the things that grabbed you are warm, and slimy, but are gripping you with enough force that you cant escape, no matter how much your thrashing panicking and screaming. the darkness fades away revealing a half man half beast monster with currently 8 tentacles coming from his back, 4 of them attached to your limbs. your frozen in fear at the sight of him. and the evil smile he has on his face. his tongue comes out and is a foot long, you know what that look he is giving you is now, he wants you, he wants your body, and your powerless to stop him. several of the free tentacles make there way towards you, you scream and thrash but its no use, they reach your t shirt and the slimy warm tentacles go up under your top and slide there way around your chest, wrapping around and around, tightly until they reach your breasts, they wrap around them really tight squeezing them, just as if they were tied by rope, the ends of the tentacles then arch over from around your tits and start to rub and prod your nipples you didn't notice another tentacle approaching you and a few more appearing behind him, the tentacle approaching you goes under your t shirt where the others did, but comes out the neck area and then violently rips your shirt off, leaving you topless. you scream really loud trying to escape still, but his grip is too strong. the tentacle that ripped your t shirt off makes its way to your neck and wraps its way around, you know the grip of these tentacles, your trembling in fear, is it going to choke you? you let out slight whimpers while saying no, please don't. you then feel the end of the tentacles at your lips, now you realize what it wants, you refuse to open your mouth, but the pressure of the tentacle just keeps mounting and mounting until your lips and teeth are overpowered and your mouth is forced open, the hot slimy tentacle quickly slides its way into your mouth and starts thrusting, your screams mumbled your throat being fucked by this nasty tentacle. you feel another 2 tentacles over your body, crawling up your legs underneath your tight jeans, slowly wrapping themselves around your legs, getting closer to a nice wet spot where your legs meet. you try to scream and shake your head but the tentacle around your neck and in your mouth prevents you. the tentacles around your legs get closer, there thicker than the one in your mouth, the thickness starts to rip your jeans but before you know it, the tentacles were wrapping themselves around your knickers after shredding your jeans off, and then it happened, your knickers and jeans were ripped off, leaving you naked and vulnerable to this tentacle man beast. you feel the hot thick tentacle press against your wet exposed pussy. you again try to scream, thrash and escape but no no avail. not much force was required, the tentacle pushes itself in and starts to fuck your pussy hard and deep, you are being raped by tentacles, but you love the pleasure, its driving you insane already. all the other tentacle play, the mouth rape, the clothes ripping off has acted as adequate foreplay. you already feeling like your close to an orgasm. the man beast walks closer to you and uses his tongue dripping in his saliva to lick and play with your clit, sometimes burying his tongue deep in your pussy with the large tentacle fucking you hard and fast. then it happens, you feel an overwhelming wave of pleasure, your body convulses and you shake and scream, you cum hard, and keep cumming. but the tentacles don't stop, they keep going even after that orgasm fades, you feel another building. you feel another slimy tentacle, the one you forgot about pressing against your ass hole, you panic and try to scream again, fruitlessly as it slowly pushes past your hole and fills your ass up. once its slimness has lubed up your ass hole it starts to fuck you hard and fast in that hole too. now all three of your holes are getting fucked hard and fast, with orgasms heading your way every minute now making your scream, squirt and quiver. suddenly you hear and loud roar from the man beast and you see bulges travel down each tentacle that's invading you, the first one reaches your mouth. and suddenly you find your mouth filled to the brim with hot sticky cum, too much to fit in your mouth, most of it was forced directly down your throat from the pressure of the blast, then in rapid succession your pussy and ass are filled up with even more cum than your mouth, each hole now feels really full. you think to yourself, finally is that it? is it over? but just as quickly as he stopped thrusting to cum, he starts up again, that same evil look in his eyes, you know, this is going to last much much longer than you thought. suddenly you spot 2 people walking passed the underpass entrance and stop at it, you scream and cry and try to get there attention, it looks like there lighting a cigarette. but they don't notice you. you wonder why they didn't after they walked off, but what you don't realize is that from there point of view, there was no underpass, it was just a blank concrete wall, for the man beast that's raping you right now is a demon, and your in its dimension. trapped maybe for entirety of rape, nobody knows, nobody has ever found a demon and escaped to tell about it. [/quote] No Words Needed [quote] you enter the house, the house of your master as you have done many times before,on your hands and knees. no words are exchanged between you and your master, he knows what is expected of you and you know what to do. you crawl towards him, exaggerating your movements, making your hips swing side to side with ever move forward until your at his feet. you bend down and start to kiss and lick his feet and toes before slowly using your tongue licking higher and higher up his legs until you reach his big hard heavy cock. without hesitation you slowly open your mouth and slide his cock into your mouth, covering it in your hot saliva so it slides in and out smoother, you look up into his eyes, what you get back is a look of pride, pride in you, for constantly doing what is expected and living up to what a slut you said you would be. he puts his finger on his belly, you immediately know what that means, no words are needed, it means touch your nose here. you immediately push hard down on his cock, making it force its way down your throat and giving causing you to want to gag, but being such a good slut, you overcome it and hold his cock down your throat. your nose touches hi finger, but you do not withdraw, as long as his finger is there, so will your nose be. the thought of disappointing your master is to great, you would rather pass out on his cock than take it out of your mouth without permission. you start to choke and gag, and you look up at your master with eyes that beg to be allowed to breathe. tears starting to form in them, he moves his finger and allows you to pull off. but before your mouth is off his cock. you feel his hands at the back of your head, you can now breathe but his cock stays in there. he starts to force your head down to that position and back again and again, force fucking your throat. your pussy drips with juice as you gag and choke on cock. suddenly you feel a pair of hands run its way up your legs and touches your hot sensitive pussy making you moan as a tremor of pleasure shakes through your body. you hear the doorbell ring and you finally hear your master speak, "get the door bud, that should be the guys, were having this slut tonight, all 10 of us" you start to moan, in pleasure and in fear. you look up at me again, your eyes, your look. they tell me "thank you" and my look tells you "your welcome slave, your ready for this" through out the night and following few days, your forced to do anything and everything under the sun, beg, scream, crawl, suck, fuck etc. and it takes you 3 days to wear all 10 of us out. the beauty of it isn't you sweating, covered in spit and cum and out of breath in chains on the bed, the beauty of it is that no words were ever spoken between you and your master, because no words were ever needed. both knew exactly what needed doing and when. and that's the day when no words were needed she truly understood that she is his forever. [/quote] Captured & Used [quote] you walk home from uni, you have had a long day and you decide to take a short cut through the woods. you fail to notice that 2 darkly dressed people follow you in a hundred meters back, all you feel is the brisk cold on your breath. and all you hear is the music playing from your mp3 player. the men are now 50 meters away. you feel a shiver down your spine, you know something wrong, the end of the woods is only 300 meters away, you speed up, you don't dare look behind. the men are 25 meters away. you break into a jog, you feel your breath freeze. you know you made a big mistake. the men are now 5 meters away. you panic and break into a full sprint, but its too late, you feel a hand grab your arm and another grab over your mouth, allowing only a short squeak out. the 2 men wrestle you to the ground, you feel the cold ground and there warm hands everywhere. they push you face down and pull your hands behind you, one of them is controlling your head, keeping you from screaming, the other binds your hands tightly. then moves on down and binds your legs together. the man who tied you up now with his warm hands, invades your trousers and grabs your knickers, having a quick feel of your surprisingly wet pussy. he rippes off your damp knickers and pulls them from beneath your trousers and hands them to the other man, the other man sniffs them and says "mmm very sweet, your going to taste very nice when we have you secured" he then legs go of your mouth, you open it to scream but he shoves the knickers in and uses duct tape to seal them in keeping you gagged. the man who tied you now approaches your face. he sees the tears running down your cheeks, he licks them off making you pull away, his rough hot tongue violating your skin. he then slips dark pillowcase over your head and duct tapes it on so your blind. still struggling and moaning into the gag you feel yourself being carried away through the woods, for far longer than each path entrance would have taken. you then here a car trunk open. you know what's coming, you try and appeal, beg, scream, thrash and fight, but its all useless, the men hardly notice your efforts and squeeze you into the trunk. hours pass as you go from tarmac road as speed to dirt roads, you hit the wall of the trunk to gain attention but nobody does anything. you then feel the car stopping and you hear the car doors open. you feel it in your gut, you know these people have done this before, your in real trouble, they obviously have gotten away with it. the trunk opens and your hauled out and made to stand on your feet, your mask is removed and a bright light blinds you, it takes about 10 seconds for your eyes to adjust, you didn't even notice the heat from the sun, its already mid day the next day. your sight returns and you see a farm with a barn. you look closer and you can see the farm is a working farm. but there's no animals here, your shocked and your eyes open wide as you see naked women doing the work of animals, pulling small plows, tied up in cages. and treated like dirt. your frozen in fear and shock, you jump when you hear a voice, you! hop over here NOW!. you don't hesitate and you hop over with your legs still tied. the whole situation is very overwhelming. i have some news for you slut, your fate can be like those women over here, destined to work the farm until they die. or you can come to the mansion and pleasure all the guys, if you do a good job, you will be rewarded and not punished like all those failed sluts. one of the men who took you grabs your hair and sniffs your odor, I like this one he says, I am taking her now. you recognize his stench, he is the one who violated your skin last night. but now he is going to violate you, and there's nothing you can do about it. you struggle and moan but he drags you to the mansion and to his room. he grabs a knife and you scream through your gag. keep still bitch and you wont get hurt, he starts to cut off your clothing, first your top and bra. then your trousers, he slips off your shoes and socks leaving you fully naked and bound. he then cuts your arms free and overpowers them on the bed. binding them to each bedpost. you scream through the gag at him, you fight and try and hurt him but nothing you do helps. he then cuts your legs free and ties loose ropes to your ankles. you start to kick at him and he withdraws across the room to some ropes attached to the wall, he then pulls on the ropes and your legs start to move towards the same bedposts that your arms are chained too. you panic and try and struggle against it but its no use, your pussy is now wide and exposed, dripping wet and glowing red. the man finishes pulling your legs nice and tight and then ties off the ropes fixing your legs in that position. he then come over to your struggling body and without warning, buries his tongue in your pussy. you scream and thrash but its no use, his rough tongue that violated your face is now violating your pussy. you feel it riddling, exploring, probing. you feel his bot breath exhale onto your wet juices. you hate what's going on but you cant sop yourself moaning from the pleasure, his tongue getting wilder. and before you know it you are involuntarily arching your back. and you feel a deep wave of pleasure pulsate throughout your body, you think to yourself, is this what its going to be like from now on? is this going to be my new life? the waves get deeper and you get out of breath. your pussy is now on fire with pleasure, his rough tongue making you squirm. he pushes his tongue in as deep as he can and despite your disgust, you feel a irresistible pulse make your body quake, you let out a loud scream. and you feel that pleasure wave as you cum. but something is wrong, your still cumming, he is still using his tongue, and you cant stop yourself. will it stop, your mind panics, you cum harder and harder, the pleasure sky-rockets, you body shakes violently. and then he stops using his tongue, and your mind blowing orgasm slowly dissipates leaving you a quivering sweating mess on the bed. he takes the gag out of your mouth and asks you, did you like that slut. your not panicking any more, your fully satisfied for the first time in your life, you have found your inner slut, who would have thought that all it would take is you being tied and tongue-fucked. you whisper, yes i did like that. he says, you will address me and all the others here as sir, and you will address our leader here, Mr demon as master, do you understand slut? you whisper, yes sir. good little slut, now id love to pull my cock out and show you what a real fuck is, but that is reserved for the master. I walk into the room to see the mess that he has left you in. well well well, what have we here? a new acquisition, this one looks amazing, I see you have her your special tongue again? nice one, now leave us please. we have a long night ahead testing out my new toy. the man leaves leaving you still buzzed and shaking from your orgasm. I come over to you while stripping, I am naked by the time i reach you, i slip my cock in and bend by head down next to yours, you here me whisper, your mine now slave. i thrust my cock in deep and your shocked as it takes away your breath. I thrust harder and harder, deeper and deeper, you feel that feeling again, like the tongue only stronger. while that's building, you feel by hand cup your tits, squeeze your nipples. I bend my neck down and take your nipple into my mouth, sucking and nibbling them. then you feel my hand work its way over your throat, and feel it squeeze a bit, you feel the fear build but I don't squeeze too hard, just enough to let you know, I am in control slut you feel the need to cum again. you start to thrust your hips at me to make me fuck you harder and deeper, I feel the urge to cum from your tight, wet, hot pussy. both of us are building to a huge orgasm. you start to scream, yes master cum in me. I then thrust harder again. you hear me grunt and then you feel me shoot pulse after pulse after pulse of hot thick cum inside of you. this makes your back arch like it never has before, your pussy becoming so tight it clamps my cock and forces you to cum so long and hard that you almost pass out. I release your legs from the tie, your legs falling back to the bed and a amalgamation of my and your cum dribbles out of your pussy, your entire body shaking ad i lie next to you. i whisper into your ear: "welcome to your new life slut" [/quote] This next story is one i wrote today using a few new methods that a few writer friends recommended: A Shocking Surprise [quote] Alan worked long and tiresome days at work, he would leave at 6am and be back around 9pm. He is a happily married man of 6 years to his gorgeous wife, Judy. Judy's days were filled with housework and running a small flower shop business down the road from where they lived. She has always felt that he takes on too much to provide for there comfortable lifestyle. This has also left her feeling a bit inadequate since she was never able to find such a high paying job and match the effort he puts into his work. In Judy's guilt over the workload situation, she hatched a plan, she was going to surprise him, by being spread, naked, tied, wet and ready when he walks through the door after work. She has informed him that she was into this kind of thing before they married but that side of the relationship never left the ground. She thought to herself that she was going to have to plan carefully to get the right time for the best surprise. she picked a very rare long weekend that he has off work to surprise him on. And it was a month away so she had plenty of time to prepare exactly what she was going to do to make his jaw drop. She started to spend a few nights up on the laptop in bed after he had fallen asleep and she started to browse some sex toy websites and started to place orders for rope, chain, padlocks, gags, vibrators and a sensory deprivation hood. She was getting very wet from ordering all these items, she couldn't wait to try them out, she slipped a finger down her underwear and into her pussy, she started to rub her clit with her thumb as she slip two fingered sown into her pussy and started to thrust them in and out rapidly, she started to moan as she got wetter and tighter, she opened her legs and grabbed her breasts, pinching her nipples hard before the pleasure overcame her and she let out a long muffled moan as she attempted to conceal that she was climaxing. Over the next couple of weeks all the items she ordered arrived at her flower shop all in discrete packaging and Judy rushed them home to hide them where Alan will never find them. And as the day approached she started to become more and more excited, horny and nervous at the same time. Her plan was to tie herself up in a revealing and usable position half an hour before Alan was due to walk through the door. Judy wakes up next to Alan at 5am, this is the day, his last day at work for a long weekend. She got up for her normal routine, made him and herself breakfast, turned on the TV and laid out his work clothes. She kissed him goodbye as he left for work, she does every time he goes to work accept this time, she whispered into his ear, I will have a surprise waiting for you when you get home darling, have a good day at work. The door closed and he drove away from the house. she rushed to the cupboard where she had hidden all the toys. She opened all the packaging sprawling the toys all over the bed. She was incredibly horny thinking of what's going to happen later and thinking of playing with the toys now. She looked around the house for a spot she could tie herself to for later and she found a ideal one in the main hall. There was a radiator both sides of the hallway and a thick wooden beam that crosses above her head. Judy was really wet, thinking of how she is going to be tied with her legs spread ready for him. She started to finger herself right there in the hallway, she fitted her new large lockable ball gag tightly in her mouth and locked it on. She then decided, to tie herself up then and leave herself helpless, bound waiting for her husband to walk in. She wrote a note and left it just inside the front door, it said my dear husband, I know you work so hard to provide for us that I could never properly thank you, let me thank you with my body, to use and abuse all weekend. Judy gathered all the toys she was going to use in the hall, she stripped off all her clothes revealing a freshly shaven smooth pussy. She tied onto her waist a forced orgasm harness and fitted a Hitachi magic wand into it. She then tied the power cord down her leg and plugged in the wand next to the radiator using special attachment that would turn the socket on and of randomly. She was shaking in excitement as she tested the wand, turning it on briefly she jumped out of her skin, the vibrations were very intense and the harness kept the wad firmly on pussy and clit. She tied a rope around her supple 34D breasts making them perk out of her chest, she then attached a set of nipple clamps to them making them sting with every little movement. She then tied her ankles to both radiators spread wide across the hallway. She was panting in excitement of what she was about to do, she then some chain over the wooden joist above her head and fixed the chain around using a padlock. With a little bit of left over chain dangling down, she fastened a set of handcuffs to them using another padlock. And finally she slipped over her sensory deprivation hood and fastened it tightly with a collar, she was now blind. Judy was almost ready to lock her wrists in the cuffs. She felt her heart race, she was so wet and horny, she moaned into her gag and hood and to her delight, she could barely hear her muffled moans. She reached down for the final time to turn on the magic wand onto highest she then turned on the random plug socket and grabbed a handcuff key. She quickly stood up and cuffed her hands above her head, locking the double lock cuffs with the back end of the key. Now bound helpless to the magic wand awaiting her husband, she counted down from five in her head. At one she let go of the handcuff key letting it drop out of her reach and truly trapping her for hours of torment. A couple of minutes passed and the magic waned kicked in, making Judy jump and moan into her gag, she stated to uncontrollably squirm as the vibrations rocking through her whole body drove her insane, she came hard and fast, and she was already exhausted from the power of the orgasm but the wand didn't stop, it kept buzzing. She started to squirm, testing her bonds and screaming into her gag. But there was no give whatsoever. She was trapped to endure this torture. She came again but this time, the wand turned off just afterwards. She felt re leaved, it was far more intense than she had bargained for. Judy had just recovered her breath from cumming hard twice when the wand started up again, she screamed and struggled as she was forced to cum like this again and again for hours. With the hood she had no idea how much time had passed, what felt like hours was in fact only an hour had passed. She started to zone out and accept what's happening to her, she felt like she was loosing her mind but didn't seem to care. Her legs were running with cum and pussy juice and her body was covered in sweat from all the struggling After several more hours of torture, Judy was interrupted from her torturous trip in subspace by a phone call, the phone rang to the answer phone and she heard Alan's voice. He said to the machine, hello honey, just to let you know I have been asked to work overnight tonight, its time and a half so I said yes, ill be home tomorrow at lunchtime, I hope you have that surprise for me, I am really looking forward to it, thanks honey, bye. Judy was in a panic, she was screaming, and thrashing her body around, trying her best to escape, but the wand turned on again, helpless against its unrelenting vibrations her legs collapsed leaving her hanging by her wrists. Judy gave up. There was nothing she could do but moan and struggle fruitlessly against her bonds. She felt waves of despair at her situation and then overpowering waves of arousal due to how tightly she was bound and the unrelenting stimulation that the wand is giving. Hour pass by and Judy has no idea how much time has elapsed, it felt to her like days or even a week of constant sexual torture, when suddenly she heard the door open, she moaned and begged into her gag, trying to get Alan's attention to let her go. Alan walked into the house and picked up the note, he read it as he walked down the hallway to her, when he got a proper look at her bound naked body and the streams of juices running down her legs his face lit up like a kid in a candy store, he touched her arm and she jumped, she was so over sensitised any little touch made her jump or cum in pleasure. He whispered to her, I love my surprise, thank you very much dear, I am going to go take a shower and a quick nap, then I am going to come and use you all weekend just as your note says. Judy screamed into her gag and shook her head, her body hurt from being in that position for over 24 hours and she has had enough. He grabbed her head pressing his body against her from behind and whispered into her ear, struggle all you want, I know you like it, thanks again for the gift, I am going to really enjoy playing with it. He unplugged the wand from the random power and plugged it into a normal socket and flicked it on, he walked out of the room closing the door behind him, just before the door closed, he muttered to her enjoy. [/quote] Finally this is a small section of a much longer story I am writing: [quote] Sat at her computer desk Katie immediately spread her legs in the air, grabbed her breasts and squeezed them hard. She slid a hand down into her underwear, lightly gliding over her wet pussy. Katie let off a slight moan as she slowly slid a finger in between her pussy lips, coating it in her own juices and running it over her very sensitive clit. She was surprised at just how heightened her senses were and how pleasurable it felt. Katie decided to see how much more pleasure she could get from her newly heightened sensitivity before she came. So she slid two fingers deep into her pussy and used her other hand to strip her nightclothes and underwear off. Then she removed her wet fingers from her pussy to masturbate her clit, rubbing on and around the area. Her other hand went to work deep inside her pussy with three fingers thrusting back and forth. Katie started to moan loudly, as she thought about being taken by a stranger in her new hooker fantasy. She started to breathe heavily and moan uncontrollably as she felt her body constrict and waves of a deeper pleasure began to surge through her body. She arched her back and started to come. But this time was different from all the others, it felt much more intense. It was as if another force was trying to get out. She decided to relent and not fight it. Her pleasure levels skyrocketed as spurts of liquid ran from her pussy. All her muscles clenched as wave after wave of pleasure pulsated through her body. Katie collapsed into her chair, completely exhausted from the amazing intensity of her orgasm, and her first experience of squirting. As she lay there catching her breath, she decided that if the orgasms from realising her fantasy were half as good then it would be well worth the risk. And right then and there, she decided to go through with it. [/quote]
Isn't "kinky erotica" redundant [editline]30th December 2014[/editline] also your punctuation could use some work [quote]He whispered to her, [B][/B]I love my surprise, thank you very much dear[B].[/B] I am going to go take a shower and a quick nap, then I am going to come and use you all weekend just as your note says.[B]"[/B][/quote] I added punctuation in bold also [quote]She arched her back and started to come.[/quote] i believe "cum" is the correct spelling in this context, although I'm not 100% sure since it's a verb and not a noun in this context hope that helps [editline]30th December 2014[/editline] also don't use contractions unless someone's actually talking, it makes things look a bit better for example [quote]She started to zone out and accept what's happening to her, she felt like she was loosing her mind but didn't seem to care. Her legs were running with cum and pussy juice and her body was covered in sweat from all the struggling[/quote] should be "she started to zone out and accept what was happening to her, blah blah pussy juice blah blah" also you forgot some more quotation marks
Thanks for the feedback, for me, the term kinky describes things of a BDSM nature and not plain vanilla, thus why I said that XD You're right about the punctuation, its just going to take time for me to learn how and when to exactly do it right. your also right about the come, it really should be cum. its an easy miss, nice pick up. and finally, I can see what you mean with the contractions, and your right, it does make it look and more importantly flow a lot better. very helpful, thanks for the feedback.
[QUOTE]your walking down[/QUOTE] I'm sorry, I just can't get horny when there's "your" instead of "You're". I am not kidding. [editline]31st December 2014[/editline] Eh, it's okay, you need to work on your grammar, make it look more like it's a text. Also more descriptions of character's appearance would be nice.
Thanks for the feedback, grammar is definitely one of the areas I really need work on. when I get a few hours next I will edit the stories to the correct grammar thanks to both your tips. what do you lot think about the stories in general, the crescendo and with proper grammar, the flow?
[QUOTE=Super Saiyan Yerbs;46840159] what do you lot think about the stories in general, the crescendo and with proper grammar, the flow?[/QUOTE] Maybe you should expand your stories a little? Have some kind of build up, a prestory than getting straight away to the action.
I guess it isn't horribly written, grammar needs some work, but... Why on facepunch? There are probably more appropriate places to post this kind of thing. :v:
I have posted in those places too, I posted here because I appreciate that FP has a diverse community with people who know and have experience in writing. and those who just want to give there opinion about it as every little thing helps. and at the end of the day, I see it as you would any other book on any other subject (minus text books, grrr) as an art form.
It was Autumn, and the leaves had turned the color of pumpkins and spun gold, when I put my penis in her ladyparts. Her hair shone in the sunlight, a gossamer tangle of candyfloss, fluttering in the breeze, resting lightly on her shoulder, as her eyes beckoned me. I took her boobs in my hands; they were big and bouncy, and squirted milk in my face. I laughed as she moaned. "Yes," she cried, "squeeze my stupid big boobs, you big penis mancake." I grinded my big penis, which was large, against the shapely, jiggling mound of her womanbutt. She gasped, arching her back, as my man dick poked her womanly fudge button. Women like penises in their butts, I knew, and soon, my penis would be in HER butt. I took off her pants, and put my hand on her vagina. It was a nice vagina, and was hairy, like an angora rabbit. "Yes," she moaned, parting her lips slightly. "Stick your large penis in my butt. Do me in the butt with your large penis. Fill me with your goopy man sauce." I was more than happy to oblige. I spit on her butt, and put my penis in her. I had put my penis in lots of women's butts. Like, TONS of butts, so I was an expert at butt sex. My balls started to hurt, and I began to pee milk in her hot, wet butthole. I pulled out my penis from her butt, and peed milk on her leg so she wouldn't get pregnant with a butt baby. I had gotten this one girl pregnant once when I peed in her, and didn't want another baby. My penis popped out of her butt. It had a little poop on the end, but I didn't care. I wiped it off on her shirt. She smiled. "You are so good at having sex with butts," she said. I nodded. It was true, because I had put my penis in a lot of butts, like all the time. The end. Edit: Please be kind. This is my first time writing a kinky erotic story. If people like it, I might write more, because I have TONS of past experiences with doing the sex to write about.
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