[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WhgbDiLRkro&feature=feedf[/media]
Starring Danz Newz, Ben Chambers, and CrownedDaemon.
Written by MangaMan.
Directed, filmed, and edited by myself. Constructive feedback is welcome and encouraged.
I uh. Well it got boring... But you have a potentially good idea on hand.
Mind elaborating on what exactly got boring (I just like to know what, specifically needs improvement)? Otherwise, I think I can see where you're coming from - it was a lot of random chit-chat lol.
Too much dialog lol wow.
Yeah way to much dialog.
The writer was planning on having the script for Ep4 done sometime by the end of December (we're both just high school students who do this in our spare time). I'll be sure to drop the note to him, since I, too was sort of getting the same feeling while editing it.
So far so good; any other feedback would be appreciated.
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