I would love to get some positive or constructive criticism on these videos. I have mainly taught myself, and I am probably going to be uploading Knights of Cydonia by Muse today so I will add a link.
I have 6 Videos so far, but aim to continue making them, but was wondering if I could see what people thought of them.
Through the Fire and the Flames
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5iI4X9LfIwU[/media]
Butterflies and Hurricanes
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WVXSII8gEWM[/media]
Knights of Cydonia
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utWGFlMn77w[/media]
thats really cool! some pro skills there :)
upload knights of cydonia!
I just need to work out a solo for myself :) Then add some more epic bits to the tune, just about to go practice :D Thanks for the comment :D
Holy fingers!
Nice videos :)
Dang- you're really good!!!
Keep up the great work, man. :D
You're going way too fast, but still, it's really good.
Which video is going too fast Zero? See I haven't noticed that, which is why I wanted to post them on here so I could be told :)
Come to my house and teach me how to play butterflies and hurricanes
try to learn fly me to the moon
:3
Video will have to wait until tomorrow for Knights of Cydonia, needs more practice. Tried to record about 30 times and it kept going wrong :(
I'd really like to learn that Butterflies and Hurricanes! But i do not read notes so that's not an option for me.
Anyways, nice job keep it going. You're really good! =)
The lower octaves are louder than the higher ones, so when you play stuff like TTFAF you can barely make out the melody. Other than that, it's great.
Great job, I really enjoyed listening to Butterflies and Hurricanes, but try and get a better mic for the problems critical described.
Yeh I have noticed that, I just don't know how I am supposed to make it quieter, I automatically put the same amoutn of pressure on each hand :/
Dude, more Muse stuff please. The Butterflies & Hurricanes one was [I]awesome[/I].
I'd kill for piano talent :(
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I checked your channel; you've already done Hysteria :buddy:
That's the only song I can play on the piano - only because I can play the bass riff :)
Pretty good.
I CHALLENGE YOU TO A PIANO BATTLE.
[QUOTE=Pandamobile;16816166]Dude, more Muse stuff please. The Butterflies & Hurricanes one was [I]awesome[/I].
I'd kill for piano talent :(
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I checked your channel; you've already done Hysteria :buddy:
That's the only song I can play on the piano - only because I can play the bass riff :)[/QUOTE]
Awesome :D I am going to practice Knights of Cydonia today, should record it within the week. Then will be learning Time is Running out ^^ Muse are my favourite band, I have done Starlight as well :)
Awesome Butterflies and Hurricanes. I play bass and time is running out is so fun to play.
Im too used to listening to jazz pianists that this just makes me feel lost. Play jazz, every musician should try it out!
I do like Jazz, but just haven't had the skill to play it. I would love to be a good jazz/blues pianist, but then again, only 15 and alot of time to practice :)
You were trying too hard to play "Through the Fire and Flames" fast that it sounded a bit sloppy.
Thanks for that feedback :) It is an extremely hard song to play at that speed and unless I have warmed up I end up spraining my wrist if I try play it at the right speed. I am going to "try" learn Space Dementia next :)
I was hoping for classical music, oh well nice I guess.
[QUOTE=RatherAnnoyed;16821493]I do like Jazz, but just haven't had the skill to play it. I would love to be a good jazz/blues pianist, but then again, only 15 and alot of time to practice :)[/QUOTE]
Blues isn't to hard though, i had a teacher but i quit cause i wanted to learn blues and she didn't know any blues (not much jazz either), so i started to learn some basic blues myself and i'm much better now... The thing is i'm still only on the basic. Really hard to move on without someone teaching you, haha.
Belive me it's really fun and not hard at all to start up with blues! You should really try it!
I shall give it ago :) I just recieved several PMs saying that I should start doing album covers ^^ I would love to, but would not know where to start. I would probably do a Muse album first, but wouldn't know where to go with the recordings :) Would someone be able to help me out there?
2:45 on Butterlfies and Hurricanes needs more OOMF.
Otherwise awesome.
Do you mean the slide, or just generally the arpeggio solo? Thank you for your comment, and I will try put more "OOMF" (I am assuming more energy) into it if I ever perform it :)
The solo, it's like it builds up to it then it just comes in at the same volume as the rest of the song if you get what I mean. Not important really.
Nah, I was thinking about re recording it actually with better sound quality :) So I will try do that, I tried to build it up as much as I could. Just hard to make it louder as I was concentrating on getting the right notes as it is all over the place. But now in my more recent videos I have incorporated that arpeggio solo into general playing so am more used to it. So basically after practice I think I can make it better ^^
haha dude that is really crazy, you're good
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