This is an outline for a Fantasy Action film I did a short movie about. I am interested in mostly feedback about the Logline, concept, the story and the characters.
[B]Logline: [/B]
After saving a captured girl, a lone hunter decides follows her through the territory of a brutal tribe to find a gateway into a mysterious paradise.
Link below:
[URL]https://docs.google.com/document/d/190_9F6D6VhMgPurdfYssFvdQKe-KjeNpVT3xGcLcqjU/edit?usp=sharing[/URL]
uru, eh? now that's a fresh and unique title i've never heard of before
[img]http://i.imgur.com/giIipCZ.png[/img]
[editline]26th April 2017[/editline]
also I'm not sure what in the fuck is going on in that outline, you forgot the intro and setup and went right into the halfway point of the movie. the logline explains nothing about the film - the logline should be conceptual and not a plot description. you have to think of the logline as the one sentence that is going to make people want to watch whatever you're making
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