That first one was really badly edited, it has like 5 different tones and is wildly inconsistent and not good. Also that sort of music is so out of place holy shit.
Second one is better in that regard but goes on for way too long, there were a couple of spots it would have been better to end it.
These are not very well made, i could probably do better
[editline]29th November 2016[/editline]
like the audio that sounds like breathing is from the revenant trailer and i have yet to find or create a version of that breathing that doesnt sound like trash. its an effective set when the beats of thje breathing are timed to transitions and have buildup but this had none of it and it then immediately moved onto star wars music which pisses me off
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