Hey dudes, this is my first time posting outside the Rust forums. Before this it was mostly lurking. If you'll oblige me I'd like to share with you the first video in a series I plan to do reviewing/critiquing shitty or otherwise bad commercials. Admittedly there are some things I could have done better with this first video but considering I planned and then recorded it all in about 2 hours I think it went better than anticipated. I'll take whatever feedback is given, good or bad.
[video] [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nT88rQSYY9M&x-yt-cl=85114404[/url][/video]
P.S. I peeped the sticky rules and didn't see anything this thread would disobey, if I missed something important than I accept full responsibility and sincerely apologize.
Your personality is too pompous and your video brings nothing to the market that isn't already available from 1,000 other channels, which are equally annoying.
You speak the obvious and act it like you're the first person to think it.
[QUOTE=darunner;47043567]Your personality is too pompous and your video brings nothing to the market that isn't already available from 1,000 other channels, which are equally annoying.
You speak the obvious and act it like you're the first person to think it.[/QUOTE]
Yeah I picked a pretty easy target for the first attempt. Does it sound too rehearsed? It's kind of hard not to sound pompous as a critic, at least when reviewing something I'm just gonna bash on. Any recommendations for improvement?
Damn you sound even more pretentious than the ad. Commercial critic? That by itself sounds silly as hell. Your video has no beef, there is no point in watching it or listening to what you say.
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