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Bottom one is better.
The text in the top one is too bloated & hard to read as a result
bottom, the first one is too hard to read from a distance and too hard to make out when you actually do look at it carefully. the second one is clear and understandable.
Bottom one. First one looks like a custom-brush spam.
Yeah, bottom one is cooler. Looks great!
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Also the font in the first one, while cool, is almost impossible to read.
top poster font is rubbish, hard to read.
bottom poster... ftw
Anymore feedback, i agree with everyone so far.
Bottom one for sure. Really looks good. Nice job.
HATE CRIME
Second one is best.
Second one by far, first one is too hard to read the important information (times etc.)
Also, on the second one, you spelt fascism wrong, you put "fasicsm", and celebrate, you put "celerbrate", and oppression, you put "oppresions" (at the top)
Other than that it is excellent, well done.
Clearly the second one. I don't like that the word "HATE" is pink though.
First one looks better, but not even close as easy to read than the second picture. And racism ftw.
Second. But I remember seeing the bottom one last year..
I see you don't follow through on your word. Although what used to be "the first poster" in the quote, is now the second poster in this thread.
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[QUOTE=HeroicPillow;18775073]I only notice two more things, and they are both in the first poster.
Racism, at the top of the poster where the main title is, almost looks like Bacism. There is no connection at the top-left half of the R, so it messes with my mind.
"LoveMusic,HateRacism" at the bottom left of the poster. The top part of it is yellow, and completely blends into the background. If you made that little logo for it, how about changing the yellow text to black/white like the bottom part. Like so: (Bold = black, nonbold = white)
[b]Love[/b]Music
Hate[b]Racism[/b]
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Good ideas, i'll try em out. That logo wasn't done by me, but i don't think they'll mind a bit of tweaking.[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=Klownox;20192017]Second. But I remember seeing the bottom one last year..[/QUOTE]
You mean on a thread i made?
[QUOTE=aero1444;20189835]Second one by far, first one is too hard to read the important information (times etc.)
Also, on the second one, you spelt fascism wrong, you put "fasicsm", and celebrate, you put "celerbrate", and oppression, you put "oppresions" (at the top)
Other than that it is excellent, well done.[/QUOTE]
Yeah all the words are just filler.
Thanks for the kind comments all, i agree with you all, i'll stick with and develop the second one.
Cheers :3
[QUOTE=HeroicPillow;20192164]I see you don't follow through on your word. Although what used to be "the first poster" in the quote, is now the second poster in this thread.[/QUOTE]
I follow my word, but i wanted to try some more unique designs before i sort out the fiddly stuff. Seemed sensible to try a tangent design. I also didn't think 2 threads over several months was overkill.
band multicultural BAND BAND band band
(second is better)
Why is the second racism black and with drips on it :/?
[QUOTE=Perfumly;20211758]band multicultural BAND BAND band band
(second is better)[/QUOTE]
Yeah don't know the lineup yet.
[QUOTE=RedSponge;20214977]Why is the second racism black and with drips on it :/?[/QUOTE]
Cause racism is bad and so is drips rite.
the first is almost unreadable because of the font, so I'd say the second one.
Second one, but you said Katrina & Alex twice?
[QUOTE=RedSponge;20214977]Why is the second racism black and with drips on it :/?[/QUOTE]
Cause racism is caused by blacks :rolleye:
[QUOTE=Gnome1;20223467]Second one, but you said Katrina & Alex twice?[/QUOTE]
Yeah still don't know the lineup so all the words are temp.
Thanks for the advice and suggestions people :)
I love both, the only thing I couldn't read on the first was the time, which I now seem to have deciphered as 6pm?
The 2nd one has much more of music festival feel to it however. The 1st would suit a club or DJ more.
Defiantly the second one. Nice typography by the way.
OH MY GOD OP.
I live in Kenilworth too!
top one is so generic
[QUOTE=Mortson;20250087]OH MY GOD OP.
I live in Kenilworth too![/QUOTE]
HOLLLLy FUUUUUUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
[QUOTE=Perfumly;20250736]HOLLLLy FUUUUUUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK[/QUOTE]
Seeing that only 26,000 people live here in a world with over 6 billion people in it, I would say that it's pretty remarkable.
26000/6000000000 = 0.0000043% of the worlds population.
So yes. Holy fuck.
What about racist music?
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wd63P7mYXzo[/url]
updated OP
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