i'll try my best to translate this, sorry for any mistakes, i'll post the first part, i'll keep updating later
i like to think that someone like sam rockwell could be the main protagonist lol
didnt know if it was friday or monday, it felt the same anyways, that old putrid smell of a wet apartment in winters mornings.
But today it was special, my uncle who i never met died last month and as i was the closest relative i became the owner of his stuff.
Old farm man with no hobbies wasnt someone who had a lot of fun things or anything not some kind of related to work from 8 to 8, but his house, his location...it meant a new life opportunity, i mean, like...who gave a fuck, if i wanted to move on and left everything
i was kind of worried about it was something i could easily decide and be proud of it.
So i did it, i moved on. Nice country style place to live till i get used to it.
The "moving" was kind of pathetic, almost nothing to bring...i mean, i left everything, lots of crap i didnt need like my tv, or my stereo....things that end up owning you.
So the first day i just made a place to put my bed and that was it, i wanted to look around the house first so i could try to feel any kind of connection with the only relative i knew about his existence, but...nothing at all.
The next day i was visited by an old friend of him. He told me that he was a good man, like the ones you dont find easily, but he was focused to much on working instead of anything.
He was his only friend
-"nobody tried to" he said.. "he didnt look like a charming nice guy so i dont blame them, but once you knew him, you could tell him pretty much everything"
i just listened to him (like i had anything to say)
after a couple of minutes, he said
"i know its pretty damn soon, but i'll just tell you that i need men to finish a job in is town"
"what is it" - i asked
"after the twister we had years ago, the church went down like paper and the owner of the lands said he wasnt going to give any green paper to work on it, so if we wanted to do anything, we should buy the place and then continue"
"what an ass"
"yeah, you know, after having the money for the lands, we needed the other money for the actual reconstruction of it, thing that we accomplished thanks to a very generous donation from your uncle"
"you want me to help you guys with the reconstruction of it?"
"we are not talking about money here, so dont get it wrong, i mean, you are a pretty young man and the lack of workers is terrific around here, and...a mans has to keep his mind busy, dont ya think?"
indeed, i received a lot of money from him, so there wanst really a reason to start worrying about it.
"if my uncles was into this, i think i must continue with this project"
"come around 2 o clock next Wednesday and we'll tell you what you can do"
"thats fine"
i went bed and tried to get some sleep.
I usually just slept like 2 hours per night, not like i was too busy, it is just that i like to think when im resting, think, think, think about absurd world hunger solutions and shit like that, its funny how pretty much doing nothing the whole day i had so much stuff to think about.
i dreamed that night, i dreamed that a weird proportioned person gave me a big meal in a metallic plate, and ate it like i wanted to, but deep inside me i just wanted to run and cry.
After the last bit of it i woke up all sweaty and scared, ran to the bathroom and looked myself to the mirror, but i didnt expect to see my face on it, i cant really explain the feeling of it, but after seeing my face i didnt know why i was expecting somebody else.
i will continue tomorrow.
So what exactly is this?
ever heard of the word
continuity?
Multiple grammar mistakes, capitalization, capitalization, capitalization. The use of cuss words and the phrase " I usually slept for like 2 hours." Is very out of place and just destroys any immersion I had with this. Overall its pretty badly written, and I had to slow down my reading to comprehend what it was saying.
[editline]12th February 2012[/editline]
Now just realized that your first language isn't English but still, if your going to write something in English you have to at least know about basic capitalization.
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