This story makes my eyes and brain ooze out of my nostrils. - General

My friend showed me this story, and I couldn't stop crying/laughing at some points. I warn you grammar nazis out there, you are about to see a travesty of the English language (if it is English at all...). There are some directions: 1. Go to this link: [url]http://profile.myspace.com/Modules/Applications/Pages/Canvas.aspx?appId=100629[/url] 2. Go to the search bar and type in "Good life gone wrong" 3. Click the one with the title "Good life gone wrong" (fifth one down for me) 4. To view one of the chapters, select your choice and then, at the bottom, hit "Submit Your Answers" 5. Laugh/Cry 6. Rinse and Repeat Post comments including your favorite/most hated sentence, and your pains/laughs. My personal one is: "no vince i cant no mattter how good of friends we were before u hurt me and im leaving starting over new" Ouch...

Gah I have to add an app or something to read it. Maybe it's a good thing I'm not able to read it. Anyone care to paste the story here?

Chapter 1: Hi my name is macy and this isnt one of u normal lovey dovey storys there is love but its compilcated anyways insead of talking to you about the story I might as well just tell it to u ok here it goes it all stared my freshman year i was soo excited to finnally be in high school i had great friends i was the most popular girl in the freshman class and a awsome boyfriend i loved very much my macy wait up my best friend amanda called out hey mandy whats up omg macy theres this awsome party going on tonight and u have to come idk mandy i have alot of homework tonight apart from being the most popular girl in the freshman class u also had the best grades oh come one macy it will be fun and u can do ur homework befor or after come on plz plz plz ok ill go yay see u later i have to go get ready u walked to vinces car and he drove u home you going to the party tonight babe yeah mandy begged me to go lol thats awsome ill see u there once u got to ur house u kissed vince and went inside Chapter 2: when u went inside u saw ur mom eating luch it was her lunch break hey mom hi baby how was school today great as always thats good hey mom i theres this party tonight and i was wondering if i could go it starts at 8 sure honey go have fun just make sure u get ur homework done k thanks mom and u ran upstairs and started ur homework once u were finished it was 5 so u started to get ready to go u took a quick shower blow dried ur hair strighted it put it up in a pony and put a ribbon around the pony tail then u got dressed in ur leggings and ur mini skirt over it then u put on ur pink strapless top u painted ur toe nail pink and put on ur pink flip flops then u got in ur red convertible and drove to the party when u got there the house was almost shaking the music was so loud u walked in and u looked around for amanda and casey and the rest of u friends once u found them u went over to talk to them macy u came i told u i was going to be here lol yea but i thought u were at least going to be late nope have u seen vince umm yea i think he went to go get some punch so u went to go look for him but u didnt find him so u asked the girl by the punch bowl have u seen vince yea i think he went into that room there thanks so u opened the door and ull never guess what u saw Chapter 3: you saw vince and stacy the girl u hated more than anything having sex in the bedroom u slamed the door shut and ran out of the house crying ur eyes out u ran right bye ur car and kept running until u collapsed u just sat on the road crying until u heard vince macy and u got up and started running again but he was alot faster than u cuz he was the courter back of the high school football team macy plz stop struggling no let me go macy plz listen to me no im never going to listen to u again i hate u which was a complete lie u still loved him even after this but u hated what he did macy plz im srry what u saw was a complete mistake that girl she was my ex and she tried to get me to do stuff and i wouldnt so she held me down im srry i dont belive u that girl was tiny u could easily get her off of u after u told him this u kneed him in his spot and he fell over and u started running towards the party this time u ran to ur car and drove home ur mom wasnt home yet which was really weird but u didnt think much of it so just ran up to ur room and cryed ur eyes out and eventually feel asleep Chapter 4: the next morning u woke up and ur mom still wasnt home so u made breakfast when u noticed and unread message on the answering machine u played it and played it and then u stared crying answering machine: im very srry to have to be the one to tell u this miss parker but u mother cathleen parker has died in a car accident a solcial worker will be bye in two days to take u to ur dad plz be ready and again i am very srry about ur loss u ran up to ur room and stared packing and crying at the same time when u came across a razor in ur room u have never once thought of becomeing emo and why would u everything in ur life was amazing but now all that was gone so u stared with a scrape but then it felt good so u went deeper and deeper thats when u noticed ur window had opened so u turned around to see vince standing in ur room looking like he had seen a gost what do u want macy what the hell did u just do why do u care and u threw the razor in ur suit case macy were are u going my dads you dont even know him and what about ur mom u cant just leave her once he said ur mom u broke down crying and shouted MY MOM IS DEAD and u kept crying vince came over and held u while u cried into his shirt no matter how much u hated vince he was still ur best friend since u were 4 so u just stayed there and cried when u stoped vince asked u are u sure u have to leave u can come live with me if u want to no vince i cant no matter how good of friends we were before u hurt me and im leaving starting over new that might include cutting to i thought to myself ok well i said im srry but u do what u have to do macy and i dont care what u say just rember ill always love u yeah right k well i love u to u lied and he left u and u stared packing again and when u were done u picked up the razor again and u cutt urself again and u really liked it but then the door bell rang and u put ur stuff in the car and the social worker drove u to ur dads house and ull never guess what u saw Chapter 5: u saw the most beautiful house u have ever seen in ur life i was pissed my dad had the most beautiful house and hes never paid any child suport i really hated my dad and i never ever wanted to meet him after he left me and my mom when i was 2 i never really rembered him and now i was going to be liveing with him might as well get this over with so i walked inside and the little butler person took me to my dads office macy u finnaly made it he came over and hugged u and u gave him a ackward hug back umm hi dad how are u good and macy its great to finnaly meet u are so beautiful yea u would of known if u were there its great to meet u to dad umm were is my room jeff take her to her room dinner yes sir come with me bye dad and jeff took u to ur room and u put all ur stuff in ur room and then u found ur razor u started crying becuz i made u think of ur mom so u cutt a couple of time then got ready for dinner jeff said it would be soon so after u put on ur sun dress u went down stairs and u didnt just see ur dad there was a table full of people macy this is ur step brother micheal and u step sister bella and ur step mother maddiline when he said step mother u ran up to ur room crying then u heard foot steps and it was bella macy are u ok no just go away macy were sisters just tell me whats wrong mymom died and i just cant stand having any other mother figure ohh macy im so srry i didnt know im sure daddy didnt either its fine but if u dont mind i like to be alone sure and she left and u fell asleep and u had the weirdest dream dream: u were running down a street u havent seen in ur life and u realized u were in kentucky were ur dad lived no wonder u didnt know the street it all seemed so real then out of nowhere a guy appeard he was really hot and emo and ussally u didnt like emo guys but there was something about this guys then he started talking to u macy plz dont be scared i came here to warn u warn me about what u asked terrifided about him about who u asked but before he could answer he was fading away and u Chapter 6: its been 5 months since the move and me and my sister bella went to the sallon and the mall and we changed are looks she changed her emo look into preppy and i changed my preppy look into emo school starts in a week im really nervous im going into my sophmore year and im deathly afriad becuz of what happen in my freshman year macy come on were gonna be late macy if u dont get ur butt down here were leaving ur step brother called up to u im comming u said and u were wearing ur black skinnys with a green cami and a gray tummy sweat shirt with black converse u were soo scared about going to a knew school u ran down stairs and u and ur sister and brother got in the car and drove to school when u got there the school was huge and really pretty u got out tof the car and ull never guess who u saw Chapter 7: it was the guy from ur dream but he didnt see u so u just walked into the school thinking theres no way that could be him its not possible so u just walked to ur first class and he was in it u walked in to give ur slip to the teacher class we have a knew student today her name is macy paker please make her feel welcome macy u may take a seat by mr.sanders alex please raise ur hand and the guy that raised his hand was the guy from my dream so i took my seat and he started a note note: hey umm hi so u new here my name is alex as u already know umm maybe i could show u around the school and after maybe the town umm that sound great thanks np then the bell rang and u went to put ur stuff in ur locker and grab what u needed for u next class it was the last period of the day and u were super excited alex was a complete gentelman he walked u to every class just like he said he would finally the bell rang and u ran to ur locker got ur books and u turned around and alex was right behind u ready to go yep lets go so he showed u the town and u guys a great time but the more time u spent with him the more he looked like the guy in ur dream but u didnt ask him about it becuz u didnt want to seem weird so u just let it go for now at least Chapter 8: your half way through ur sophmore year and u and alex are best friends now and u havent had another dream like u did before since u met him but u were completely in love with him except know he has a girlfriend and she really mean to u and gets really jelious of u when u guys hang out so u were going to try really hard to avoid him becuz she was starting to be really mean and u didnt want any drama so when he trys to walk to ur locker to talk to u u just walk away when he calls u u ignore them it hurts u but again u dont want drama it was time for lunch and u didnt want to sit with alex and u saw this new kid in the back of the lunch room so u sat with him hi umm hi my name macy whats urs cameron wow i love that name u and cameron talked all day and u were kinnda starting to like him at the end of the day u were getting ur stuff together and u were walking to ur car when cameron comes up and asks u macy i was wondering if tonight u would maybe like to go to dinner with me sure cameron that would be fun where do u want to go its a surprise just bring ice skates k k and u ran home to get ready u were so excited Chapter 9: u ran into ur house and up the flight of stairs into ur bedroom and bella came in and helped u with ur hair and makeup when u were done u painted ur fingernails neon colors picked out a black dress and ur black converse u grabed ur ice skates and it was almost 730 so u and bella wached some tv till eight then cameron picked u up and drove u into the forest u didnt know where u were going until u came to a frozen over pound and a little picnick and a blanket it was soo beautiful wow cam were did u find this place well me and my brothers were walking in the forest and we found it here wow its really pretty thanks well do u want to skate sure so u guys skated and skated u fell on ur butt like ten time and u were sure u were gonna have a huge bruise the tommorrow once u guys were done eating he drove u home and thats when all the drama happend Chapter 10: on the way home cameron was running his hand up ur leg he was gettin close to ur personal spot when u pushed his hand away what are u doing nothing i thought u liked me i do but i dont want u to touch me thats when he stoped the car u were really freaked out he got out of the car and came over to ur side and hitt u then he dragged u out of the car and u were in the middle of now were he knocked u on the ground and started feeling u out when his hands were busy trieing to finger u u kneed him in his spot and he fell over u ran and ran when he was out of site u were looking at ur phone trieing to find someone to call when alex called u answered it macy y havent u answered my calls latly alex listen to me he could tell u were crying so he shut up macy whats wrong alex cameron is trying to rape me and i dont know were i am weres the last place u rember umm the deli how far away are u like right at the turn off ok i know were u are ill be there just keep running ok u shut the phone and looked back to see were cameron was and he was like two feet from u u started to run but he caught u bye the arm and hitt u u fell to the ground and he go on top of u this time holding ur hands down with his knees he took ur dress off and ur bra and thong then he took off his pants and boxers and then he grabed ur hands and u were screaming but u know nobody was gonna here u this far he started licking u and u screamed louder still knowing it was no use but u had to try then he stoped and u knew what was coming next he was just about to slip into u when out of knowhere a car drive up and a man gets out get the fuck off of her or what thats when he shoved him slef into u u cried out in pain and he was still going really fast u knew then u saw alex right behind him mouthing the words srry and he pulled him out and he cummed all over u and then u relized y he said srry cuz when he pulled him out of u it hurt like hell what the fuck cameron said as he hit alex in the face then alex hit him in the stomach u then before u knew it camron was unconious u were looking for ur cloths and all u could find was ur bra and underware u put them on macy get in the car but i cant find my clothes i dont care just get into the car u ran to the car and he got in the other side he almost ran over cameron when he turned around then speed off thank you your welcome but know u have to tell me y u were ignoring me for so long it hurt me macy im srry its just that casey doesnt like us together and i dont want u guys in fights so i just left im srry well u could have told me i broke up with casey like two weeks ago she was to controling the rest of the drive was really quiet then we stopped but we didnt stop at my house alex were are we Chapter 11: where at my cuzin maribels cabin what are we doing here where gonna clean u up and u can call ur dad and tell him u are spending the night at lisas house lisa is another one of ur friends but u dont talk very often ok and u went upstairs and he cleaned ur cutts and then he left u to take a shower while he got u some clothes when u got out u wrapped a towl around u and went into the bedroom and put the clothes on that he gave u then u strightened ur hair and grabed ur purse and put on ur eyeliner then u called ur dad hello daddy macy where are u ive been worried sick srry i forgot to call u is it ok if i stay at lisas tonight sure hunny just be home early ok we have a big ball tomarrow u need to get ready for ok bye dad i love u bye hunny i love u to after u hung up the phone u ran down stairs and told alex that u could stay and u guys put in a movie and then u guys started talking macy i have to tell u something i love u i have since the very first time i saw ur face in my dream omg he had the same dream alex in that dream who were u talking about cameron macy oh well u could have told me that i know and im srry oh and alex i love u to always have thats y i let u be id rather u be happy with cassey then not be happy at all but before u could say anymore u were interupeted bye him kissing u with so much emotion u could hardly belive it was real but the kiss never broke and u were being carried up to the bedroom still kissing then he nicely set u on the bed and got on top of u u guys made out for a long time and eventually he put his hands up ur shirt and unsnapped ur bra then u took off his shirt and he took off ur then eventally all of ur clothes were on the ground and he was slipping into u and he started slow then he went really fast so fast u were screaming and moaning then u felt him cumm and fall right next to u u put ur head on his chest and fell asleep Chapter 13: (Chapter 12 was a double post of Chapter 1 xD) u looked everywhere for alex but u still couldnt find him u went outside into ur tree house that u and ur dad built he wanted to make up for not being there when i was little lol so u climb up the latter to depressed to go to the party when u saw alex up there and he was crying baby whats wrong macy i have to tell u something but im not sure how to alex just tell me macy im moving where are u moving to u asked almost crying alaska thats like on the other side of the world u said crying now macy im srry plz dont cry how do u expect me to not cry when the guy i love is moving half way across the world macy im srry i love u soo much im just not old enough to stay here bye myslef and my dad got a better job there but as soon as i turn 18 ill come back for u i promise ok but promise me u will write me every day ok ok i promise so umm when are u leaving tomarrow night alex how long have u known about this since last week how come u didnt tell me sooner one i couldnt get ahold of u and two i couldnt hurt u again u were crying so hard that u ended up falling asleep on his chest that night the next morning u woke up alone but there was a note hey baby i had to go home and pack but ill come bye before we leave to say goodbye i love u so much and im still really srry u ran out of the tree house crying knowing u couldnt say goodbye to him u were really starting to think u were cursed like u couldnt love someone with out them hurting or leaving u but u hoped alex would keep his word and come back to u it was 8 oclock when the door bell rang u opened it and it was alex hey macy hey well i came to say see u later i dont want us to say goodbye becuz there is no goodbye there just see u later alex i love u and ill see u later u kissed him with everything u had in u and u held him for an hour then he told u he had to go he kissed u again and walked out the door leaving u crying u could tell he was to u didnt know what u were going to do now Chapter 14: u fell asleep crying that night the next morning bella was shaking u macy wake up huh um y whats going one macy we have new nabors in town and there both emo and ur age maybe they will help u get ur mind off of alex bella no one can do that but ill meet them so u went downstairs to meet them hi im Rheanon and this is my sister Monique were new in town um hi im macy were did u guys used to live we used to live in a little town in new york really i used to live there before my mom died yea we now u used to go to school with us but u never talked to us omg i now who u are wow yea but me and Rheanon are going to the mall wanna come umm sure that sounds cool its been 1 month and u have figured out that u were prego with alexs kid and u had no way of getting a hold of him but on the bright side u Monquie and Rheanon were best friends now u guys did everything with eachother that is until u and ur dad had a talk sweety we need to talk about what dad sweety daddy got offered a new job and were moving to hawii what dad we can alex is coming back and i have to be here i have to and what about my friends dad plz u cant do this sweety im srry but were moving tommorrow and thats that jeff has packed most of ur things but u should go help him fine u said running away crying id like to thank the contest winners for letting me use there names trust me this isnt the last time ull be in the story Chapter 15: while u were packing all u could think of is what if alex comes back and im not there we will never be together again you were crying soo hard u couldnt see right once u were done packing u went to be the next morning u helped load the truck and headed of to new jersey great the whole ride there u step mom and ur sister kept trying to chear u up but it didnt help when u got there u ran up to ur bedroom and cried u were now 3 months prego and u could tell now u just cried urslef to sleep the next day you went for a walk to the park these guys were looking at u all funny so u turned around and took the alley home then u saw the same guys hi beautiful whats ur name stay away from me or what thats when he grabbed u and threw u on the car all u could think about is ur baby then he ripped off u pants and took off his and he was about to rape u when u heard wheels screaching omg who is it i need 45 comments till next chapter oh and i made changes to chapter fourteen (She had 56 comments)

i tihkn i my iq just dropeed fa few pointsssss

what is this i don't even

[B]What did I saw????[/B]

i jst red da 1 chpter n i thnk my bran jst died

book of the year

oh god di fhte she just change points of view oln the sdecond chaapter?

also the entire thing is one sentence

nvm im stopid

[QUOTE=SHoGuNN3R;17141914]wat does dat mean?![/QUOTE] no one cares shut the fuck up.

[QUOTE=Jessesmith1;17141923]no one cares shut the fuck up.[/QUOTE] *switches to literate* I was hoping I wouldn't be ninja'd replying to pie. Twat. Seriously, I have no clue was he's on about.

:350: Woah.

I'm not even going to bother trying to read this.

wtf were are all dah peeriuds

[QUOTE=SHoGuNN3R;17141949]*switches to literate* I was hoping I wouldn't be ninja'd replying to pie. Twat. Seriously, I have no clue was he's on about.[/QUOTE] First it's like, "My name is macy and i saw my firend blah blah blah" Then it's like "You went to your room and cut yourself bawwwwwwwwwwww" My you my youserygd

[QUOTE=pie_is_good;17142065]First it's like, "My name is macy and i saw my firend blah blah blah" Then it's like "You went to your room and cut yourself bawwwwwwwwwwww" My you my youserygd[/QUOTE] And kneeing guys in their "spot"

She forgot to capitalize her name which ruined the whole story. [editline]d[/editline] >:(

[QUOTE=Chronische;17142166]And kneeing guys in their "spot"[/QUOTE] I think she means jugular vein.

Waait, I thought they were moving to Hawaii?!

If I didn't have a life I'd work on translating it. I'll start tomorrow.

I think My brain turned into fried eggs..........with a side of WTF fries.

[QUOTE=cheiftiger;17141770]Unholy wall of text[/QUOTE] :smithicide:

Read the first chapter, disappointed she got into high-school.

how could vince do that.

My brain hurts :C

Oh god.. also, she mentions 'contest winners' who get their names in the story: [quote] hi im Rheanon and this is my sister Monique [/quote] Notice the capitals? I bet she fucking COPY-PASTED the names! (I doubt she could spell them right anyway)

I think Good Life Gone Wrong is a pretty cool story. Eh kills grammar and doesnt afraid of anything.

cooli