For some reason I wanted to make a song that had to do with drugs with intention to post it on the DD. So I made it. Meader who posts on the DD has a part in it.
The song is for entertainment, as in I'm not trying to be accurate with the effects of a drug. Lyrics are provided in the link.
[URL="http://soundcloud.com/pepin/pcpepin"]Here is the song.[/URL]
It isn't perfect but I wanted to finish it and call it done because otherwise it would end up in the pile of projects I never finish.
I'd be interested in changing up the lyrics of children's songs to make them drug orientated. Meader and I did this with some Christmas songs and came up with lyrics to Frosty the Pothead and some other parodies that I can't quite remember. So if there is any interest in that let me know because I'm trying to improve my recording and mixing.
Good job, the song is pretty awesome, dl'ed. Favorite part:
[quote]you know the top, like it or not, flop flop, now swap, it's like a prop
give it a bop, and then you pop, karate chop, hip-hop, non-stop,
cough drop and plop, a belly flop, bathing in that red soda pop
Oh, grab that mop, shit I can't stop, quick hit the ground man there's a cop![/quote]
[QUOTE]A tooker [/QUOTE]:frog:
Ah a typo. I'll fix that real quick.
This is awesome, glad it's finished! :D
My favorite part:
[quote] I'm my own, petting zoo[/quote]
To be honest it was pretty much finished like a week or two ago, but I just started working on others things and stuff.
No offense, but the rapping lacked to be totally honest.
Very creative though, i'll give you that. +1 artistic
I'm not quite a rapper. Meader can usually rap pretty well but was recovering from mono and only had one session to record this. But excuses aside I know the rapping isn't too great in it, but that's alright with me because I got the most out of what I can do at this moment.
[QUOTE=Pepin;24989587]I'm not quite a rapper. Meader can usually rap pretty well but was recovering from mono and only had one session to record this. But excuses aside I know the rapping isn't too great in it, but that's alright with me because I got the most out of what I can do at this moment.[/QUOTE]
We were supposed to re-record it, just ran out of time. Damn you time.
Would you guys be interested in partnering up with a producer?
*cough*
Hey man, you may want to get that cough checked out.
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[i]It could be an auto immune disease, like Lupis...[/i]
lupus.
No, I think it's pulmonary edema.
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[I]It's never Lupis.[/I]
It's fuckin Lupus guise.
I came in here to hear shitty amateur music
You've impressed me and earned respect points
[QUOTE=Dan The Man;24992273]No, I think it's pulmonary edema.[/QUOTE]
Doesn't explain the dandelions.
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[QUOTE=Aaronn;24992443]I came in here to hear shitty amateur music
You've impressed me and earned respect points[/QUOTE]
Thanks.
[QUOTE=Rastaboy;24989277]No offense, but the rapping lacked to be totally honest.
Very creative though, i'll give you that. +1 artistic[/QUOTE]
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[i]He was murdered.[/i]
Your lyrics are decent but your flow is weak.
The [I]your [/I]is ambiguous because there were two people rapping. Unless you mean both of ours, which is quite possible.
I liked it Pepin lots of variation and a strong beat it was genre-crossing, really cool and good lyrics but my critisism would be that the flow was pretty monotonous at places and your delivery didn't sound like you were really going for it, sounds like your voice had alot more than you used. :P
A Hip-Hop song I made a few months ago..
I irritate myself when it comes to production, I'll work on an idea save it and when I sit down to work again a new idea will have popped into my head so I never finish anything. I set myself a four hour time limit and this is what I managed in that one sitting.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c1frRnPO5dQ[/media]
[QUOTE=dustbusta;25041339]Your lyrics are decent but your flow is weak.[/QUOTE]
Pretty much this. I actually respect the lyrics but the flow needs work
[QUOTE=Aaronn;25049512]Pretty much this. I actually respect the lyrics but the flow needs work[/QUOTE]
I've been working on it. Any better?
[URL="http://soundcloud.com/meader/white-as-fuck"]http://soundcloud.com/meader/white-as-fuck-colab[/URL]
[quote]I'm a state of Maine resident and white as FUCK
and yet all the pretty ladies ask to pet my duck
Ya didn't think a decent rapper could hail from the North?
well I'm about to light you up like the sky on the fourth
Ya see I have the ambition
I'm dishin out the nutrition
searchin for words on a mission,
your spittin out repetition
so shut ya mouth, stop that bitchin
I'm your congnition physician
get in position for ingition
I'm not askin for permission
You can hate me, or debate me,
immitate me, or deflate me
but you'll never quite equate me
cuz you know that I'm first rate,
see,I'm a mainer at the heart
and if you like my rhymes or not
don't mean no shit to me nuh-uh
because I know I'm wicked smaat
and what it really all comes down to
is just lovin what ya do
no matter whatcha you might accrue,
just let the passion be your glue
With these lyrics I'm spittin
they'll make ya jaw drop, ya smitten
ya see your tongue there, it's bitten
now here's my bro from great britain
Been gettin' fuckin' high since I was 4 years ol'
when you were suckin on a bottle, I was gettin sucked by hoes
I be smokin all my weed just as fast as it grows
With my first breath on this Earth I snorted coke up my nose
I'm a badass mother fucker and I hail from the UK
Now that I'm livin in the states ya know i'm here to stay
I'm so hot they stand around me in the winter like a heater
fuck this shit I'm done my rapping, now it's back over to Meader
What I'm sayin' is we're prayin'
every day and it's the same and
though I'm stayin' in the game
I feelin' beaten down and lame
because society is choking
when you're broke and lying soaked
inside your mind that's bout to croak
ya feel abandoned and revoked
cuz for this test, just like the rest
I've fallen down but I'm the best
I get back up and catch my breath
*sigh*
My story travels on
it's far too long for just one song
so sing along if you been wronged
and we'll toke just like cheech and chong
[/quote][editline]11:59AM[/editline]
I wrote all lyrics and produced/mixed/recorded it. Still a WIP more or less, just wanted you guys to comment on flow if possible.
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