Need help with this picture of a guy shooting his monitor.
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[img]http://i.imgur.com/E3hQI.png[/img]
I'm trying to make a signature for my friend here. He's going to put his name in there eventually.
The only use I can see for it right now is a reaction image. Any way I can make this look better? I'm a novice at Photoshop.
Don't know much about guns but shouldn't the slide be back when it's firing?
-> Muzzleflash is not "interacting" with the monitor
-> The upper part of the pistol should be sliding backwards
-> There is a thick blood rectangle in the gap between the splash and the monitor
-> You should be using motion blur instead of gaussian. (It looks like the gun is outta focus instead of giving the impression of movement)
-> Use some of these crazy mask and glow and shit clichê signature stuff.
That should cover it.
Slide should be racked bwackwards, remove the bullet from the casing or you'll be shooting hot air.
Oh and use a proper blur like johnny said.
[editline]4th November 2011[/editline]
Also trigger doesn't look like it's properly pressed down by the finger, might want to fix that too.
The monitor's steady as a rock compared to the gun, after just being shot. Not selling it
Also missing glass + other assorted debris
[QUOTE=DaveP;33124705]The monitor's steady as a rock compared to the gun, after just being shot. Not selling it[/QUOTE]
Yeah, you want to either have both of them blurred or both of them clear.
[QUOTE=DaveP;33124705]The monitor's steady as a rock compared to the gun, after just being shot. Not selling it
Also missing glass + other assorted debris[/QUOTE]
The monitor is spewing blood and you're worried about glass?
Yeah, glass would be a huge improvement.
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