Even famous youtubers are commenting but only 200 views??
[video=youtube;Zx-lqfgU8mI]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zx-lqfgU8mI[/video]
Did you join just to advertise your video?
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Which has already been posted?
go away
[QUOTE=DudeGuyKT;40964331]Did you join just to advertise your video?
[editline]9th June 2013[/editline]
Which has already been posted?[/QUOTE]
bro ppl sleepin on me and i need to get studio time i cant afford atm but wen ppl look at the views go up and i can get bank rolls
A) That's not a freestyle, B) Guy has no Rhythm. C) Sounds like an idiot at the end with his Sick of these faggot blah blah...
[editline]9th June 2013[/editline]
Oh that's you. Aha, makes it even more hilarious.
[QUOTE=Jamie1992GSC;40964349]A) That's not a freestyle, B) Guy has no Rhythm. C) Sounds like an idiot at the end with his Sick of these faggot blah blah...[/QUOTE]
wow im startin to think u dont know what rhythm is you dont need to RHYME for a good rap my flow is on point
holy shit look who commented on it
[img]http://puu.sh/3c5Dh/e82f758c96.jpg[/img]
if you don't know who that is he made this video
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Hav9IvtchQ[/media]
[QUOTE=HazzaHardie;40964369]holy shit look who commented on it
[img]http://puu.sh/3c5Dh/e82f758c96.jpg[/img]
if you don't know who that is he made this video
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Hav9IvtchQ[/media][/QUOTE]
wow haha thats whats up least i got fans your mad?
Wow seriously you started an account to advertise your video, get banned, then make a new account? You're not gonna get famous by posting your video on Facepunch.
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[QUOTE=QUINCYADAMS;40964357]wow im startin to think u dont know what rhythm is you dont need to RHYME for a good rap my flow is on point[/QUOTE]
Not once did I say the lack of Rhyme was the cause for your lack of Rhythm.
why the hell does it say x7 dumb under my shit you guys are dumb as hell
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[QUOTE=Jamie1992GSC;40964405]Not once did I say the lack of Rhyme was the cause for your lack of Rhythm.[/QUOTE]
k well my shit is on point you dont need to post shit if your talkin mess thoughg
[QUOTE=QUINCYADAMS;40964408]why the hell does it say x7 dumb under my shit you guys are dumb as hell
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k well my shit is on point you dont need to post shit if your talkin mess thoughg[/QUOTE]
You are advertising your work to get views correct? Meaning, or should I say, I'm assuming you are looking for Criticism. I gave you mine, and now suddenly it isn't valid cause it doesn't put you in the limelight. I respect what you are trying to do and such, but if you want to learn how to spit. At-least get a sense to it, and some actual true word play. Check out Wax - New Crack, Apathy - Checkmate, two amazing real freestyles, not written.
OP: "Why u guise rating dumb, you clearly are dumb for not liking my video"
Well done, way to go.
[QUOTE=Jamie1992GSC;40964453]You are advertising your work to get views correct? Meaning, or should I say, I'm assuming you are looking for Criticism. I gave you mine, and now suddenly it isn't valid cause it doesn't put you in the limelight. I respect what you are trying to do and such, but if you want to learn how to spit. At-least get a sense to it, and some actual true word play. Check out Wax - New Crack, Apathy - Checkmate, two amazing real freestyles, not written.[/QUOTE]
Yup just like my shit i started from the bottom and listen to wax n now hes a sellout bitch doin fake freestyles n shit it wont happen to me though stay tuned
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[QUOTE=EskillV2;40964473]OP: "Why u guise rating dumb, you clearly are dumb for not liking my video"
Well done, way to go.[/QUOTE]
stop tryn to be clever with your wordplay bro your not good lmao sit
op stop acting like a 12 year old, go kill yourself you wigger faggot.
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[QUOTE=QUINCYADAMS;40964475]Yup just like my shit i started from the bottom and listen to wax n now hes a sellout bitch doin fake freestyles n shit it wont happen to me though stay tuned
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stop tryn to be clever with your wordplay bro your not good lmao sit[/QUOTE]
I'm not saying he isn't I'm merely stating some good starting points to improve your work. I reiterate. I respect you are trying to get into a artform of sorts, and be creative, but unless you can take criticism and actually listen to people, without jumping on people who don't like it, won't get you very far.
And lose the whole toking and cussing people out during it, it makes you look dumb, people don't listen or want to listen to you for your attitude, they should want to listen to your work, because it's creative, and catchy, and well done.
[QUOTE=Jamie1992GSC;40964525]I'm not saying he isn't I'm merely stating some good starting points to improve your work. I reiterate. I respect you are trying to get into a artform of sorts, and be creative, but unless you can take criticism and actually listen to people, without jumping on people who don't like it, won't get you very far.
And lose the whole toking and cussing people out during it, it makes you look dumb, people don't listen or want to listen to you for your attitude, they should want to listen to your work, because it's creative, and catchy, and well done.[/QUOTE]
rap is about attitude bro i preciate you tryna help but you aint been in the game i been doin this for years nad mastered my flow. i aint ganna let a hater talk fckin shit tho i dont play that at all
op you are bad at rapping and its not freestyle when you're reading lyrics off a piece of paper
your flow is mediocre and falls of beat a lot, your lyrics are boring and meaningless and you can't keep a consistent stream of lyrics coming even though you're reading off a sheet of lyrics to begin with
you aren't going to get studio time until you check your attitude and get a lot better at rapping
[QUOTE=MightyMax;40964522]op stop acting like a 12 year old, go kill yourself you wigger faggot.[/QUOTE]
Agreed. QUINCYADAMS you are acting incredibly immature right now. Also get better grammar, your spelling is atrocious.
invites work
hows the 10th grade?
ill b back in an hr stop the hate please just give critisism I KNOW WHAT IM DOIN dont say change my stlye but give me lyrics n stuff ill remember them
[QUOTE=QUINCYADAMS;40964541]rap is about attitude bro i preciate you tryna help but you aint been in the game i been doin this for years nad mastered my flow. i aint ganna let a hater talk fckin shit tho i dont play that at all[/QUOTE]
Let me put this in terms you might understand.
An attitude portrayed into a art form is entirely different to an attitude portrayed generally. One is there to invoke a sense to a song or freestyle or written. To stimulate and bring forth emotions pertaining to it. An angry attitude in a song, is there to convey anger, or distraught.
The other is merely just a sideeffect of you. If it isn't channeled correctly. Why would we want to hear someone cuss out people just because he thinks that's how it should be.
As for mastering, as stated above, I respect your acts, but you haven't mastered it. Far from, and you are proving my point. Simply by being aggressive and somewhat arrogant, without taking what people advise, you won't improve, holding up a facade of self righteousness would not entice listeners. Nor any target audience. Making your advertisement of your work, somewhat redundant.
[QUOTE=QUINCYADAMS;40964603]ill b back in an hr stop the hate please just give critisism I KNOW WHAT IM DOIN dont say change my stlye but give me lyrics n stuff ill remember them[/QUOTE]
Here's some lyrics:
Dicks
My favorite food
Dicks
All day in my mouth
Dicks
Can't get enough
Dicks
Spooge on my face
I figure these are right up your alley.
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