Yeah I know proportions suck ass:
[img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/733/nazizombieswip.png[/img]
Arm and shoulders look wrong... face is good for a WIP.
The subject is demonstrating the correct emotional response.
Since it's a WIP, I'm assuming this is the roughest of drafts.
Left shoulder is deformed, and if I paid attention in history, they would have an SS pin on the collar.
Yeah need to look at some references and tutorials to get it right. It's all out of place.
Why are the lines so badly done? They're just scribbles.
You'll get a real form if you lay down some lines for the skeleton and them box everything out.
fingers look like sausages or something, he's carring an M1 helmet instead of the kraut standard, everything is horrendously misproportioned and anatomically incorrect. All the jewerly and details feel incredebly flat. You didn't even break down into basic shapes.
I won't even treat you with overdrawing, you try and learn to see things for yourself. Look at references and tutorials and start from scrap. Post a new version of lineart and we'll see.
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