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[media]https://youtu.be/6IingVWSnlY[/media] Don't know how accepted self-promotion is on here, but I made this. It's my first time doing any real video editing, let me know how shit I am at it.
i would have turned the video off in the first 3 seconds if it wasnt 1:30 minutes and i knew you made it. No shit you're not gonna like it if you don't like VNs or Cyberpunk but that's a given. The game has a very consistently good visual aesthetic and it manages to build the characters pretty well considering it's purely dialogue and it takes place only at the bar. Also turn down the fuckin contrast
[QUOTE=ashxu;51526729]i would have turned the video off in the first 3 seconds if it wasnt 1:30 minutes and i knew you made it. No shit you're not gonna like it if you don't like VNs or Cyberpunk but that's a given. The game has a very consistently good visual aesthetic and it manages to build the characters pretty well considering it's purely dialogue and it takes place only at the bar. Also turn down the fuckin contrast[/QUOTE] Aside from the contrast (and the shitty script) do you have any other critiques? I legitimately would like to improve.
[QUOTE=FeartheMango;51526745]Aside from the contrast (and the shitty script) do you have any other critiques? I legitimately would like to improve.[/QUOTE] dont open your video with a moan
I like the tempo, your editing style, and your wonderful voice. Not exactly interested in the game but w/e. Keeeeeep it up.
[QUOTE=FeartheMango;51526745]Aside from the contrast (and the shitty script) do you have any other critiques? I legitimately would like to improve.[/QUOTE] in my opinion (this is just my own taste) drop the immature jokes/anime references, don't bother mentioning the obvious either if you're going for quick snappy videos. It being a Cyberpunk game is literally in the title and you can tell from footage it's a VN. Maybe try mentioning something in the game that stuck out like a snippet of in-game dialogue or a character. You don't mention anything about the game that you can't figure out from looking at any footage of it. You say it's cute and it has lovable characters and then you mention very typical VN stuff (and for the record it has two endings, the main one and a game over. The other "endings" you can scoop up all in one go and view them in one play through) You keep talking about the sex robot but funnily enough you don't show any footage of Dorothy or talk about the game's characters that shows you actually played it. Who you play as, a brief rundown of the characters etc. (You show game footage sure but this isn't anything the viewer can't do themselves by going on the storefront page) Mentioning the devs being Venezuelan I'll give you credit for though because their plight to finish the game in those conditions is actually an interesting fact.
[QUOTE=KillRay;51526770]dont open your video with a moan[/QUOTE] Noted [Quote=ashxu] -criticisms-[/quote] Thanks, I figured the humour might be hit or miss. As for the character endings, I actually didn't get them all in one go, that's my mistake there. And all the footage was frankly a little hastily captured. It was moreso for varietys sake, when it should've been more relevant to the topics
It's an okay game.
[QUOTE=richard9311;51528306]It's an okay game.[/QUOTE] Yeah I would say it's ~decent~ at best.
Well, that was a fairly decent video, really. You should post more videos, dude.
It was short, sweet, and to the point. I like it. The robot joke at the beginning got me. You don't have to drop all the humor, just make it consistent.
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