Masked Murder - Rockstar Editor (first clip, WIP, and need feedback)

[DEATH FETISH]

This is my first attempt at the Rockstar Editor (using a PlayStation 4). Please pardon the bad video quality, I had to re-capture the video footage from the editor because it wouldn't let me copy my exported project to a USB. That in addition to PS4 being subpar to what high end rigs can render.

I'm new to the Rockstar Editor, so constructive criticism would help a lot.

[video=youtube;DIrlFEGYfuw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DIrlFEGYfuw[/video]
[video=youtube;_uoXO1VVg7c]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_uoXO1VVg7c[/video]