the new creative work thread
how i love that fresh smell.
dicks
A haiku for the creative work thread
[QUOTE=Viper202;39732965]the new creative work thread
how i love that fresh smell.
dicks
A haiku for the creative work thread[/QUOTE]
5,7,5 man.
don't tell me
what to do.
fuck you
Guess I'll repost this from the last thread:
[img]http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/054/7/5/qailee_by_doctornuriel-d5vy3ss.png[/img]
[QUOTE=Kahgarak;39733775]Guess I'll repost this from the last thread:
[img]http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/054/7/5/qailee_by_doctornuriel-d5vy3ss.png[/img][/QUOTE]
I like where the concept is going but I feel like the waist is too tall and the upper torso is too large; something that helps me out with proportion is flipping the image horizontally. The arms seem a bit flat, too. Keep it up though I like it.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/wz3WU4c.jpg[/img]
drawing a dream again or something.
ghhhhh i haven't been able to draw anything for days. I just sit there staring at a blank canvas and end up erasing everything.
[img]http://a1.s6img.com/cdn/0011/p/3257057_1505587_b.jpg[/img]
It had to be done.
[QUOTE=D3TBS;39734235][img]http://a1.s6img.com/cdn/0011/p/3257057_1505587_b.jpg[/img]
It had to be done.[/QUOTE]
You should put this on a shirt.
Hahahaha and you idiots thought this was going to be a normal thing that a sane person would make ahahaha fools
[img]http://puu.sh/29eLr[/img]
But in all seriousness once I have the rest of the stuff blocked out I'm going to abandon it since I've left myself with a super airbrushed face, when I really want to eventually understand and control value well enough that I can do the more rough concept-art style drawings instead.
[QUOTE=D3TBS;39734235][img]http://a1.s6img.com/cdn/0011/p/3257057_1505587_b.jpg[/img]
It had to be done.[/QUOTE]
this thing is gonna follow me to my grave
[img]http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/09/1361995020-futurespeedpainting.png[/img]
Just a speedpainting. Took me something like 10 to 20 minutes to make. I really should try drawing more "dynamic" scenes like this one, it's really hard to render them correctly and it's a good exercise.
What is going on I thought the thread was supposed to be "art hole"
Is everyone good for me posting some lyrics up here? (later on) I'd love to know what people thought of them, I have no idea what I'm like at writing them and I've always wanted to get an opinion.
we dont usually do writing here, but post it, maybe someone will read it
Actually quite a few people post text like poems and short story excerpts. Generally if you're going to want to take feedback and repost it again later for further revisions you'd be better served to make a thread, and that'll also get you more feedback since story feedback can take up a lot of space in the thread.
Is FP back to monthly thread locks again?
[QUOTE=Maloof?;39738514]Is FP back to monthly thread locks again?[/QUOTE]
1000 posts
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;39738458]Actually quite a few people post text like poems and short story excerpts. Generally if you're going to want to take feedback and repost it again later for further revisions you'd be better served to make a thread, and that'll also get you more feedback since story feedback can take up a lot of space in the thread.[/QUOTE]
Ill throw it up hear first and see how that goes, then the revised versions in a thread if anyone is interested :)
[editline]27th February 2013[/editline]
*prepares for hate*
[B]Wall of explanatory text:[/B]
Firstly I just want to say/write that the things I jot down are usually kind of personal to me and barely anyone has ever seen them, but then I started thinking about my views of people who ‘say and don’t do’ and honestly, I don’t want to be one of those people. Anyway here is some stuff, the ideas and expressions of them will probably seem stupid to quite a few people and honestly I’m expecting a load of ‘Dumb’ ratings, but I’m tired of constantly not knowing what I think about what I write. If you don’t like songs (punk, hip-hop, ska) that can go on about why the world isn’t that great some of the time then you probably won’t like this stuff.
[B]Back and forth[/B]
(Basically a back and forth argument about people who say and don’t do, one of the main reasons I’m determined to get good at this. This in particular is WIP and just a few things I wrote down earlier.)
I don’t want a place or a grounds
For holy war
I just want money for the people and the wealthy to be poor
I got all these aspirations
But I duno what for
...
Tell me when you get the urge to be
Something more
Serve a purpose
To a higher cause
To be respective and collected
...
Now I know you only wana set the world on fire
But perhaps the way to do that aint a funeral pyre
[B]I’m expecting (to be rejected)[/B]
(don’t worry I’m not that stupid, the slang in this one is there to serve a purpose, I put it in because the song is written about the problems I noticed in my youth, stuff that just hasn’t changed in a decade, and where I came from slang was really common, although I usually grow out of it when I write, it’s still massively prevalent when I talk the rest is kind of self explanatory. I guess this one is the most finished thing I have, but I want to make changes were people think might be good.)
[B]VERSE 1[/B]
Everything I am and everything I do is
Determined and reported, by tha
...local news
You make your accusations and dismiss the thought of patients
This uneases me but it pleases you
Judge me by the fluctuations of my parents occupations
Then you’ll per-determine a life or two
[B]CHOURUS[/B]
How can you say that?
They had a fair chance
Cos they missed an opportunity at dreams that didn’t last
How can you say that
They’ll come around fast
When all you ever did for them was fuck em in the past
[B]VERSE 2[/B]
All I ever thought and all I’ll ever know is controlled and compounded by yah
Social rule
The acceptance of a class regime that aint changed since the introduction
Of the feudal age
Bound to a wall of minimum wage
To only be released by maximum rage
[B]{CHOURUS} [/B]
And now our only chance
To turn it round fast
Is the power of a government that’s flyin half mast.
You guys take more than digital work, right?
[t]http://i.imgur.com/o4ZSI0m.jpg[/t]
[sp]It's SCP-050[/sp]
[t]http://i.imgur.com/ZGrze.jpg[/t]
It's meant to look like it's flailing about in a small basin of water, does it give that impression?
I never got the hang of clay/ceramic type stuff, so this is awesome to see :) nice job especially the monkey, maybe go back on the hands though, they seem a bit stiff and unrealistic.
[QUOTE=ElectricSquid;39739965]
[t]http://i.imgur.com/ZGrze.jpg[/t]
It's meant to look like it's flailing about in a small basin of water, does it give that impression?[/QUOTE]
I think if there were ripples radiating from the base of the tendrils/eye it would make it look much more like water.
[QUOTE=Mr cake fingers;39740033]I never got the hang of clay/ceramic type stuff, so this is awesome to see :) nice job especially the monkey, maybe go back on the hands though, they seem a bit stiff and unrealistic.[/QUOTE]
It probably speaks of my own level of experience with clay (or my patience) but those hands were devilishly bothersome. I tried making good ones and they kept falling apart in some way or another, and I got fed up enough that I went with the noodle arms seen in the picture. Might have had something to do with the scale I was working on though, or maybe the moisture level of the clay.
[QUOTE=Anax;39740152]I think if there were ripples radiating from the base of the tendrils/eye it would make it look much more like water.[/QUOTE]
It's hard to see but there's something to that effect in there.
Does anybody have a link to any of those collaborative paintings where people take turns to make the painting? I'm trying to find them to show a friend but I can't find them anywhere
[QUOTE=Maloof?;39738514]Is FP back to monthly thread locks again?[/QUOTE]
I don't think we were ever there, everything got locked and remade once then nothing happened and everything was called X: The February Thread for months :v:
[QUOTE=Mr cake fingers;39738650]text[/QUOTE]
ska punk is some of my favorite shit but you're sounding a bit too much like Linkin Park, that's not a path you wanna go down.
I suggest writing a song with no rhyming - don't even worry about the lines being similar in length. Then if some lines lend themselves to rhyming WITHOUT sounding clichéd and juvenile, try them out. Otherwise leave them alone.
[editline]28th February 2013[/editline]
Also try asking on /ic/ maybe Mal, I don't go there but I know they've done that sort of thing, ask people to post collab gifs and I'm sure they're deliver
[T]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/54024108/DERP%20WIT%20PAWT/dem%20doodleooddles/bad%20photographs%20of%20bad%20art/its%20not%20that%20cat.jpg[/T]
Did a scratchboard drawing of a cat: 15 hours or so tops
[sp]real men don't use erasers[/sp]
[IMG]http://puu.sh/29Cvg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;39743548]
ska punk is some of my favorite shit but you're sounding a bit too much like Linkin Park, that's not a path you wanna go down.
I suggest writing a song with no rhyming - don't even worry about the lines being similar in length. Then if some lines lend themselves to rhyming WITHOUT sounding clichéd and juvenile, try them out. Otherwise leave them alone.
[editline]28th February 2013[/editline]
Also try asking on /ic/ maybe Mal, I don't go there but I know they've done that sort of thing, ask people to post collab gifs and I'm sure they're deliver[/QUOTE]
"Linkin Park" Well, shit i didn't realize it was that bad :P but thanks helps lots to have a reply. What exactly are "/ic/ Mal"? No excuse, I just have no idea what they are.
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