As some might have noticed, I've been working on something that I would call a comic.
I've decided to create a thread just for said comic since it's probably going to flood up the other thread (drawings that doesn't need it's own thread) and because I would like a place to have them all right now.
They have so far gotten atleast some recognition, as I've posted them in the LMAO-thread in the fast thread forum, gaining a couple of funny ratings.
So here it is, Any Given Sunday (I can't make up a better name, sorry).
[B]The Characters[/B]
[IMG]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/1373/charactera.png[/IMG]
[B]The Place[/B]
[IMG]http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5479/comicstore.png[/IMG]
[B]The Comic[/B]
First One
[IMG]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/7081/comic1a.png[/IMG]
Second One
[IMG]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/3689/comic2.png[/IMG]
Third One
[IMG]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/6971/comic3y.png[/IMG]
Fourth One
[IMG]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/8847/comic4.png[/IMG]
I'll update this OP with new comics as I make them.
So, do you like it or is it crap?
I think the concept is fine, i guess.
It may just be me but I didn't get any of the jokes made in any of the comics.
They're great.
[QUOTE=Craftsman;22486049]They're great.[/QUOTE]
Thank you! :)
[QUOTE=Inv3rted;22486002]I think the concept is fine, i guess.
It may just be me but I didn't get any of the jokes made in any of the comics.[/QUOTE]
The first one is about a game that is played here in sweden (and I think there's game like it in other countries) where you're a couple of friends, and one says "a ships comes sailing with..." and usually he/she decides a theme, let's say it's birds.
Then the others must say "a ships comes sailing with <bird type>", if they can't they 'fail'.
And well, it's a small jab at what's been happening in Israel with their failed boarding on a boat destined for gaza with necessary supplies for the palestinian people.
The second one is about how certain people always must maintain this aura around them that is making them hip and individualistic, calling people sheep for listening to music that's commercial or whatever.
The third one is just a jab at how racists always use stupid arguments to validate their bigoted views, in this case the guy hates on immigrants and how they steal "their" jobs when they can prove to be just as competent (or even better) at the job.
I'm not yet quite sure what theme(s) that I'll adress in this comic, there's plenty of gamer comics so I'm probably not going to adress that theme unless I get an idea that's hilarious.
I sense some potential in these. Keep working on the jokes and it should be intense.
[QUOTE=Run&Gun12;22488858]I sense some potential in these. Keep working on the jokes and it should be intense.[/QUOTE]
Thanks, yeah I still haven't found the way I want the text to be and all, and the execution on the jokes (and the jokes themself) are at best sub-par with what I want.
This has a good chance of becoming a web comic.
Nice. Keep working on them, this has potential.
Can you change the facial expressions and poses a little?
[QUOTE=Crossu88;22497550]This has a good chance of becoming a web comic.[/QUOTE]
Not planning on it though, the pictures take way too much space (40-50kb) and I'm going to have to cut it into half atleast before that's a viable option.
I'll probably just keep them here for the time being.
[QUOTE=Silber;22497723]Nice. Keep working on them, this has potential.[/QUOTE]
Cheers :)
[QUOTE=DoneZ;22499028]Can you change the facial expressions and poses a little?[/QUOTE]
If you won't mind, could you pinpoint what bothers you about them, so that I can make sure I don't do the same mistake again? :)
he means like more than one expression
[img]http://media.comicmix.com/media/2008/10/14/ctrl-alt-del.jpg[/img]
one facial expression = quality
B^U
[QUOTE=Retyuoligkl;22520640]he means like more than one expression[/QUOTE]
Ah, yes that's a valid point, I'll work on a couple of facial expressions and their body positions (I'm thinking shocked, disgusted, joyful and casual will do for now).
In the meantime, enjoy the latest one ;
[IMG]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/8847/comic4.png[/IMG]
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