Luna-sea a space themed track for my GCSE music coursework
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Hey all made this for my music coursework.
It's based on music for stage and screen and it's space themed.
(ignore the 2-3 mins of silence at the end)
I would love feedback because i'm gonna continue on with music at a level and anything that will improve my compositions is welcome.
[URL]http://soundcloud.com/cai-jones/luna-sea[/URL]
Not bad. There's some slight dissonance in the synths around 1:17 and onward, not sure if that was intentional or not. The melody around 1:42 doesn't seem to be completely on-time either. The other sections are fine though. Just work on a couple of the melodies.
[QUOTE=Z3r0747;30648989]Not bad. There's some slight dissonance in the synths around 1:17 and onward, not sure if that was intentional or not. The melody around 1:42 doesn't seem to be completely on-time either. The other sections are fine though. Just work on a couple of the melodies.[/QUOTE]
Indeed, need to work on the timing by there but at that point I was using Garage Band 08 and timing was not my strong point with that program, confused me so much.
All of the melodies start to clash somewhere in the middle, and the drum doesn't fit at all.
It's also very quiet and lacks depth (it's all centered)
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