• Feedback on my graffiti?
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hi, i just recently started doing freehand graffiti of the last 4 letters of my name, my nickname also. BURL. Heres some of my stuff, i dont have many to show it to so id like some feedback if thats ok :3 [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/9cPlR.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/lUdwS.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gOcvq.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/rkoX5.jpg[/IMG] Last one is huge, so ill link it [url]http://i.imgur.com/lfKE5.jpg[/url] They're all freehand in pen on 14x17 drawing paper
Looks nice, i'd enjoy seeing this on someone else's property.
They're all not really finished in my mind, they could all use some meticulous touch ups and darkening.
very cool stuff man, keep it up. lettering is extremely interesting to look at, give it some fill and outlining, it looks incomplete as of now, finish it and it looks great
I really like the first and the third ones. The second and fourth not so much, they don't seem to have as much of a sense of design and movement to them, they just seem kind of jumbled together uncertainly.
Work on your perspective / 3d blocking, it looks all jumbled and I can't tell what's what etc.
I think they all say Burl right? Though I could only make that out because of the first one. If not, I wouldn't get the last one really. But anyway, theres a street art thread, why don't you try there? Anyway, it's ok, but you should work a bit more on your perspective, and give it some color or something
i read burl on all of them, even without seeing his description, they're perfectly legible in my opinion.
GOD DAMN! Make them more readable dammit.
I personally find them really boring. They are just flat shapes extruded. Atleast add some real depth to them like various sizes and maybe holes in the sides or something more 3d...ish. I personally can't read any of them, but that's besides the point.
You got a really nice style. I really like the first one.
the first, third, and fourth are really great.
I wish..I had talent for this
sorry pal, these are just not very good. if you spray painted these on buildings i'd consider you a vandal not an artist.
Those are very creative, but should be polished way more. It makes the idea in general look bad.
[QUOTE=gra;33049575]sorry pal, these are just not very good. if you spray painted these on buildings i'd consider you a vandal not an artist.[/QUOTE] That's not how it works. If it's illegal it's vandalism, whether it's good or not. It's also art, whether it's good or not. It doesn't have to be one or the other.
[QUOTE=gra;33049575]sorry pal, these are just not very good. if you spray painted these on buildings i'd consider you a vandal not an artist.[/QUOTE] Over here in So Cal its pretty common for people and businesses to pay graffiti artists to do their work on their property
[QUOTE=gra;33049575]sorry pal, these are just not very good. if you spray painted these on buildings i'd consider you a vandal not an artist.[/QUOTE] you obviously don't know what your talking about
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