So, My friend Corbin and his dad have this rap group and I figured I'd try making a beat for them. What do you think?
[MEDIA]http://soundcloud.com/n00bmaster00/symphonic-rap-beat-revision-1[/MEDIA]
not bad, but something feels off. i'm not sure what, but something about it just isnt right
the only real thing you could fix is that the hi-hats are a bit loud
keep at it
Woah! Cool track! Heres a symphonic rap track I made a while back!
[url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/56075800/AstralGrasslands.mp3[/url]
In my opinion, the bass is the root of all evil here; the long-tailed bass doesn't fit into the track at all and the notes on the bass seem to be all over the place sometimes.
However, there are redeeming qualities in here; I think the orchestral stuff and the drums sound good and fit together.
That's my two cents about this one. If someone with more composing experience thinks this criticism sucks, feel free to correct it.
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