[url]http://soundcloud.com/planet-c/1-tribute-pt-1[/url]
CnC much apprectiated. Give harsh critique if necessary.
Hope you enjoy! :)
intro too long and boring
No more feedback to be given?
Well, it seems to me that the whole track consists of repeated ideas and note patterns. I mean, when the intro started, I instantly thought that it was recorded off of a broken record machine :P.
But, that's not to say it wasn't good. Strangley catchy, actually. ^^
I really like the drumline, the horn sample is cool too.
The intro can be improved, making it sound less "broken", and for the later sections it would probably enhance the music if you changed the balance of some of the instruments. You also need to either finish the song, or make a good coda for it (not sure if it's still a WIP). Other than that, it's pretty catchy and sounds good!
Also, what software did you use to create this?
Aight, now it's remastered and generally finished up.
It was made in ableton with samples from a song by Clarence reid.
Your feedback is really useful people, keep feeding me words! :)
The "wah wah wah wah wah" thing got on my nerves very extremely fast. Other then that I liked it. Especially the 1:10 - 1:25 part.
Intro should have some action.
Weird instrument choice.
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