• Days and Nights with Way - Night 2, Debut! PLEASE help me fine tune this show! Critique!
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Welp, I've reworked it (re-edited from last time)! Anybody, anybody want to take a peek? :frown:
Well, it made me chuckle few times, but other than that, it was kinda boring. At times, it makes you feel a bit awkwarded, and that's not a good thing, try to be more yourself. And please, 6 minutes is a bit too much.
[QUOTE=ChaosWolffy;20402626]Well, it made me chuckle few times, but other than that, it was kinda boring. At times, it makes you feel a bit awkwarded, and that's not a good thing, try to be more yourself. And please, 6 minutes is a bit too much.[/QUOTE] What parts did you find boring? Also, working on the awkwardness. And future episodes will be 5 minutes or less! Unless they're particularly awesome. Thanks for the feedback. :)
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