WHAT ABOUT MY AIM !? [SFM] - General

[B][I]Hello everyone ! [/I][/B] It is my first video of animation on Counter Strike GO. It my set quite a lot of time but I hope that it is going to please! If you have questions, said! I would answer. [QUOTE]I intend to continue (no mlg next time) :dance:[/QUOTE] Thus if you have suggestions !? :wink: [B][U]The video :[/U][/B] [video=youtube;zQj-eUTMA60]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=zQj-eUTMA60[/video] [B][CODE]THX FOR WATCHING ![/CODE][/B]

That was really awful. I want my 10 seconds back.

[QUOTE=itisjuly;47938816]That was really awful. I want my 10 seconds back.[/QUOTE] Seriously ? :suicide: Why ?

Sooo, did i just watch a typical FPS 360 No scope montage video, but dubbed in SFM or was this all SFM? I guess the real question is though, does it all really matter. Mostly because this, and those types of videos were equally as obnoxious..

not very good at all

It was bad, dumb an re-used joke. There was hardly any animating to begin with other than silly dank memes. (I'm sorry, but this is true but I atleast tried to watch your video but couldn't even get halfway through it. )

Oh ok i am sorry ;(, [B]next time i try to be better[/B]

It's great that you're putting work into this kind of stuff, but you really need to make much clearer narratives. I had no idea what I was watching. I think you should make a lot of practice videos before you actually start putting them online.

Don't be discouraged, keep creating stuff and improve.

[QUOTE=Chi_DE;47939278]Don't be discouraged, keep creating stuff and improve.[/QUOTE] Exactly. Everyone's first few videos are shitty, and when you post a video on Facepunch it better be top-notch. So take a few more cracks at SFM and don't take the harsher critics the wrong way. They've just got a "show me good content or nothing at all" attitude. Some people are more willing to bear with beginners' work than others. The best way to get good at animation and comedy is to keep trying. Figure out the techniques used by people you admire and try to develop your own style based on them

[QUOTE=BigJoeyLemons;47939873]Exactly. Everyone's first few videos are shitty, and when you post a video on Facepunch it better be top-notch. So take a few more cracks at SFM and don't take the harsher critics the wrong way. They've just got a "show me good content or nothing at all" attitude. Some people are more willing to bear with beginners' work than others. The best way to get good at animation and comedy is to keep trying. Figure out the techniques used by people you admire and try to develop your own style based on them[/QUOTE] Thank you guys ! I am really sorry for this video ! [B]When one make a video, we always have the impression which is "BRILLIANT" and then we fall again fast ^^[/B] I will make better vidéos i promess .

Yo you need a seizure warning on that video

i really liked the part where my eardrums burst

[QUOTE=Skinn0x;47939912]Thank you guys ! I am really sorry for this video ! [B]When one make a video, we always have the impression which is "BRILLIANT" and then we fall again fast ^^[/B] I will make better vidéos i promess .[/QUOTE] Your willingness to learn is cute and will serve you well.

[QUOTE=Skinn0x;47939109]Oh ok i am sorry ;(, [B]next time i try to be better[/B][/QUOTE] You should have seen me posting my first GTA IV video.

[QUOTE=Skinn0x;47938834]Seriously ? :suicide: Why ?[/QUOTE] You need to put in more animation in a video instead of just flinging the camera around. Also, if you want a good SFM vid, get rid of the dumb no scope 360 stuff, seriously nobody likes it. Also, nobody has animation at all, in other words, not really good.

next time try making a video that doesn't leave people's ears ringing at 20% volume thank fucking god I didn't have it at 100%, otherwise this post would've been way more aggressive

pro-tip, if you're doing slow motion audio go into options and change it so it actually pitch bends the audio and sounds "slow motiony"

[QUOTE=Skinn0x;47939109]Oh ok i am sorry ;(, [B]next time i try to be better[/B][/QUOTE] greeting skinn guy,,do not get feel down! your video good! other guys here don't know what good video make! up the good work,,keep you! thanks,, haloguy

[QUOTE=haloguy234;47944038]greeting skinn guy,,do not get feel down! your video good! other guys here don't know what good video make! up the good work,,keep you! thanks,, haloguy[/QUOTE] it's just not the same

I read quite your messages! I am sorry about the sound, and I thank all the criticisms! I work on another video, I think that she(it) will be ready in 2 weeks:p

[QUOTE=Skinn0x;47947921]I read quite your messages! I am sorry about the sound, and I thank all the criticisms! I work on another video, I think that she(it) will be ready in 2 weeks:p[/QUOTE] Its nice to see that you are willing to listen to criticism, but please don't feel like SFM is like a race. [video=youtube;0ppaiQ6mhbE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ppaiQ6mhbE[/video] Art is never done over night, a lot of it is really time consuming. Don't try to rush out a video on our account, please try to take some time at really making the best you really can.