Red Skies - A War Thunder Machinina - General

Hey Guys! I made this machinima in War Thunder in tribute to the RAF and those fighter pilots who fought for their country in those terrible three months. It's not too long, but it is my first "fully" sound edited piece. Every sound you hear in this video was put in by me. Anyways, let me know what you think. I REALLY want some criticism, because it's just going to help me get better. If you like this video, subscribe or something! I plan on making a couple more. I REALLY want to make a machinima on the pacific theater with the Japanese and Americans. Anyways, Enjoy! [media][URL]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8TumFfUQVgw[/URL][/media]

Loved the effort you put into the sounds. Very nicely done

Love it!

Incredible, well done man! +1 sub for you!

Thanks a lot guys!

This honestly reminded me of something that mozzaman would make. Great work, dude!

really good effort with this. sound design is a bit jarring though. the balance is odd in places. some of it is way too loud

Loved the classical music. The slow motion with the rockets was perfect.

Only thing I don't like about it was the use of Ave Maria (Don't ask, I just hate it), and the rockets - pretty sure they weren't around in a big way during BoB, nor would they be used in air-air combat. The planes also come way too close to each other but I suppose they have to for the sake of quality shots. Other than that though, very well done especially the sounds. [editline]8th November 2013[/editline] Also, the title made me expect eastern front, possibly lampshading the massive boner everyone including the devs has for russian planes in that game

I also thought that you should've used another piece of music for the slow motion bit, Ave Maria is overused as hell. You should've used something like this [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u2Q0nlrarBk[/url] I also didn't really like the voice clips of the pilots talking, just seemed out of place. But other than that I liked it.

[QUOTE=Sharker;42793672]I also thought that you should've used another piece of music for the slow motion bit, Ave Maria is overused as hell. You should've used something like this [URL]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u2Q0nlrarBk[/URL] I also didn't really like the voice clips of the pilots talking, just seemed out of place. But other than that I liked it.[/QUOTE] You're right, Ave Maria IS overused to shit. I was kinda feeling it for some reason...also I used it because I wanted to make sure whatever I was using had the proper licensing so I can throw it in a portfolio or something. Next time i'll try and use something a little less overused. I agree with the voice clips too. Next time i'm going to definitely have a script and stick to it with voice acting. [QUOTE=Morbo!!!;42793330]Only thing I don't like about it was the use of Ave Maria (Don't ask, I just hate it), and the rockets - pretty sure they weren't around in a big way during BoB, nor would they be used in air-air combat. The planes also come way too close to each other but I suppose they have to for the sake of quality shots. Other than that though, very well done especially the sounds. [editline]8th November 2013[/editline] Also, the title made me expect eastern front, possibly lampshading the massive boner everyone including the devs has for russian planes in that game[/QUOTE] I was waiting for someone to point out the rockets!! Haha yeah I pretty much just threw them in for a little dramatic effect. And yeah I completely agree, the planes are way too close to eachother. Next time I'll try and zoom in a little bit more and increase the depth of field instead of physically having them closer to each other Thanks a lot to everyone commenting.

Too bad the actual game doesn't play like that. Normal rounds are ramming, engagements where it's 4 bogies on your ass and your team is off 13KM the other way for some odd reason. Good video though, good effort into it. I like the slow motion bits.

I really enjoyed it :)