First ableton song (Go berserk)

[FurrFagsMurr]

First ableton live song, i spent about three hours making the song and a few samples are mine.
All synths are made by me and made with operator.
I used some rap from Kick in the bass by 2 Brothers on the fourth floor.

[url]http://soundcloud.com/lashawndraniqua/go-berserk[/url]

C&c please

EDIT: I forgot to say but i only have a subwoofer and a left speaker, right ones blown.

[despo]

For your first song, it's very good. There are some very nice ideas in it. The vocals are sometimes too loud compared to the wobble bassline. Furthermore the drums are barely hearable and simply dont have enough "oomph". I suggest sidechaining and layering the drums. My subwoofer stayed way too quiet throughout the whole song, the wobble bassline simply didnt have enough power in the lower frequencies.

And I noticed you used the same patch for the wobble the whole time. If you really want to make your basslines kickass, I suggest creating a lot of different patches and switching them out a couple of times every second. kinda like this: [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzQljZVWumA[/url]

[FurrFagsMurr]

Thanks man, instead of fixing that other song I just made a new one because you gave me an idea.
I thought this time instead of completely relying on the wobbles low frequencies I just made a bassline with mostly low frequency but not too much. For some reason though, every time I load a song to an uploading site it cuts a load of the low frequencies in the wobbles out.
Here it is
[url]http://picosong.com/HBr/[/url]