Machine Terror - My 45 Second First Frooty Loops Song - General

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0bndyvzRtPQ&feature=channel_page[/media] Yeah, my first Frooty Loops song. Constructive criticism only. [b]Edit:[/b] Haha, I just realised it still says Comp 1 4 for the title. Teehee.

dont quit your dayjob just yet....

What the fuck was that.

It sounded like my computer had a lot of errors and crashed. In other words, it's just a jumbled mess of sound clips.

Lol

learn what a musical scale is please oh and rhythm too or just quit

[QUOTE=One Long Sausage;17415186]learn what a musical scale is please oh and rhythm too or just quit[/QUOTE] Meh, I think I'll learn. I did it at like 3AM. Big mistake.

pff, I could pull off something better at that time

[QUOTE=One Long Sausage;17415260]pff, I could pull off something better at that time[/QUOTE] Yes, but you have used Frooty Loops before ( I presume ), so yeah. This was my first song. [editline]12:04PM[/editline] Hey, at least I made my own beats. Unlike this guy! [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=806988&highlight=frooty+loops[/url]

Only thing I'm hearing is out of tune synths + 'FX' and drum samples that come with Fruity loops randomly placed all over the place. Good job.

[QUOTE=healthpoint;17415934]Only thing I'm hearing is out of tune synths + 'FX' and drum samples that come with Fruity loops randomly placed all over the place. Good job.[/QUOTE] No premade drum samples. At all. I am not as lowly as that.

Dude, I recognise the fucking awful clap and hihat sounds. They sound so horrible that I recognised them instantly. [b]Edit:[/b] Anyways, as far as criticism/advise goes: Never upload your first 'track'; and never use anything that came with Fruity loops, unless it's a sound you designed/engineerd yourself using one of the VsT's that came with FL studio. (aka, not a preset)

[QUOTE=healthpoint;17416471]Dude, I recognise the fucking awful clap and hihat sounds. They sound so horrible that I recognised them instantly. [b]Edit:[/b] Anyways, as far as criticism/advise goes: Never upload your first 'track'; and never use anything that came with Fruity loops, unless it's a sound you designed/engineerd yourself using one of the VsT's that came with FL studio. (aka, not a preset)[/QUOTE] dunno about that, 3xosc is perfect for basses man

Sounded like a huge mess. Keep working though.

[QUOTE=chugolug;17420042]Sounded like a huge mess. Keep working though.[/QUOTE] [QUOTE=healthpoint;17416471]Dude, I recognise the fucking awful clap and hihat sounds. They sound so horrible that I recognised them instantly. [b]Edit:[/b] Anyways, as far as criticism/advise goes: Never upload your first 'track'; and never use anything that came with Fruity loops, unless it's a sound you designed/engineerd yourself using one of the VsT's that came with FL studio. (aka, not a preset)[/QUOTE] Finally two helpful posts that tell me what I am doing wrong, what to do better, ect. And not "[b]LOL[/b] ur gai"

[QUOTE=Re-Con;17417373]dunno about that, 3xosc is perfect for basses man[/QUOTE] Did you even read what I wrote? I said you shouldn't (ab)use samples and/or [b]presets[/b] that came with FL Studio and its vst's. Nothing wrong with using vst's like 3xosc, but for the love of god don't just use the presets instead of actually making something yourself.

That could really be used as a virus! Make it play the "song" over and over again, and it will be the most feared virus ever!

God this is horrible, where are the effects, where are the original sounds? I'm not even sure what genre this is. Oh well, good luck.

I thought it wouldn't be so bad, then OH GOD JESUS.

Lol, Your 11. Also, Stupid video is stupid.

;dluashdjhdcviodnrgyuinjkdnjvlkanysuohdwyuebfdhasmndkjlasdhakjhfkjdl How do you like my post so far? Pretty and spammy right? That's how I felt about your song.

what the fuck is shit i dont even words [highlight](User was banned for this post ("Why Reply/Encourage and Advise" - Perfumly))[/highlight]

Not THAT horrible, but it's pretty bad. Rap over it and you'll have a #1 song in minutes, especially if you rap about wanking. (Anyhow, try using different sounds. DUHNUHNUHHUHHUNNNHHN isn't interesting or fun to listen to.)