I think the main synth needed more modulation at the start. It sounded a bit too piercing and monotone.
I'm no expert, but I liked the wubs. Although I didn't like the crushing effect you put on them at 0:53.
I liked that 'wow' sound with the delay that you used at the start of each phrase- it would have more impact if you used it less, it kind of blends in too much.
Drums definitely need improvement. They sound too quiet in the mix, and are quite weak (the snare especially). Some treble percussion, such as hi-hats or shakers, would be good.
Abrupt ending too. It just ends at the end of the synth pattern without any real finish.
It's got potential though. And I do like your wub. I'm just being especially critical because you asked for it :v:
Rated artistic.
[QUOTE=Kaburorne;22906705]I think the main synth needed more modulation at the start. It sounded a bit too piercing and monotone.
I'm no expert, but I liked the wubs. Although I didn't like the crushing effect you put on them at 0:53.
I liked that 'wow' sound with the delay that you used at the start of each phrase- it would have more impact if you used it less, it kind of blends in too much.
Drums definitely need improvement. They sound too quiet in the mix, and are quite weak (the snare especially). Some treble percussion, such as hi-hats or shakers, would be good.
Abrupt ending too. It just ends at the end of the synth pattern without any real finish.
It's got potential though. And I do like your wub. I'm just being especially critical because you asked for it :v:
Rated artistic.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for the tips, and even more thanks since i really need them!
Sounds awesome, any chance I could get a D/L?
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