Release release etc. Not sure if I'm fully happy with the final product, but I'm seriously lost for finding anything to add or subtract to or from this song. Oh well, way too much time lost to not release it, so here goes. Vocal samples from Florence and the Machine's "Kiss with a Fist".
[media]http://soundcloud.com/sameiru/kissfist[/media]
Feedback greatly appreciated :)
I liked this its really groovy stuff man! the only thing I did not like was the outro, could have been longer.
An alternate pattern here or there might make the intro a little less repetitive.
I really started nodding my head when that big kick came in at 0:52
The vocals kind of made me jump at 1:00, I think they stand out a little too much in the mix, compared to the intro.
That high synth that plays around 1:30, I think it should be used again somewhere in the song- maybe in the outro when the kick goes away?
I found myself losing interest a little after that lower synth repeats so much in the middle. Maybe the vocal samples you used in the intro could be used somewhere around the middle too?
Really nice though- an example how you can make a good track with a few great elements.
[QUOTE=Pea;30257520]I liked this its really groovy stuff man! the only thing I did not like was the outro, could have been longer.[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=Kaburorne;30258189]An alternate pattern here or there might make the intro a little less repetitive.
I really started nodding my head when that big kick came in at 0:52
The vocals kind of made me jump at 1:00, I think they stand out a little too much in the mix, compared to the intro.
That high synth that plays around 1:30, I think it should be used again somewhere in the song- maybe in the outro when the kick goes away?
I found myself losing interest a little after that lower synth repeats so much in the middle. Maybe the vocal samples you used in the intro could be used somewhere around the middle too?
Really nice though- an example how you can make a good track with a few great elements.[/QUOTE]
Cheers, I'll look out for this next time :)
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