"Ahoi" Vector Picture

[FellowChive]

I've made this with Illustrator CS4
Hope you like it :)
[IMG]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/115/7/8/ahoi_by_JDestiny.jpg[/IMG]

[Beartato]

It looks good but her shirt looks weird with the white spots.

[aero1444]

I think your nose shadows need to be darker, she looks like she just has 2 holes in her face. (at a glance)

And her arms and legs have no shadow

(but I quite like the lens flare type things on her shirt, it's a different way of using that effect)

[onox37]

I love the color palette used.

[Captain Forever]

This is really cool, looks 80s

I think you should keep the bokeh things on her clothes.

[icypenguin]

Looks great.

[dgg]

I would work on making the body shapes actually go inside the clothing, the legs also bend inwards at the end when they are supposed to go inside the sweater, straighten them out so it doesn't look like a round blob at the bottom, but rather an actual leg.

I would also reduce the sharpen amount by 50-25%

[Healthpoint]

Where are her pants.

[Bourbonrogers]

I took them off her! :v:

[3v3ryb0dy]

Why shade the face and leave rest of the body unshaded?

[FellowChive]

Thanks so far, I've seen the mistakes, too but I was too hurried to release it :D
I've made a second one, I will upload it later (it's different to this one)