Hello there, thanks for taking the time to look at my thread. I have created a web comic, which I hope you will like. It is created with Garry's Mod, and hosted on ComicFury.
It is set in the Half Life era, and shows you the life of Zak Freeman, Gordon Freeman's cousin, who is sent to be trained as a Rebel. With many missions and adventures, he wonders why there is even a war. Are the Combine so bad, and would he prefer being one? Is his cousin Gordon just a hyped up coward?
Can he, Zak Freeman, save the planet? Probably not, but he can sure try!
Please take a look, if you think it will be any good, it was fun to make, and I hope it can get quite good.
Thanks.
Oops, just realised I forgot to post the link! Sorry, the link is here...
[url]http://hlschool.thecomicseries.com/[/url]
Link would be nice. But depends on your posing in gmod
My posing isn't that bad, I hope. But my Face Poser Tool in GMod doesn't work, so until I have a fix there will be no facial expressions, sorry.
It's slapstick humor I presume?
It's just supposed to be quite well, silly, really. If I could have sound effects it would have the CSI: Miami "Yeah!" on the 4th panel, as the guy is falling/jumping, and when something terrible happens, it would be that famous "Wah, wah... wahhhhh..!" sound. Hehe.
Sorry for the bump, but I have new comics up if you want to see! Please look, thanks.
This is not remotely funny. OP, how old are you?
Have you read them all? Or did I not upload the Ravenholm one?
I read them all. None of them where funny. At all. So how old are you now?
Why?
And I'm sorry you don't like them. If you have any suggestions, please let me know!
Thanks!
[QUOTE=TCB;19554187]Why?
And I'm sorry you don't like them. If you have any suggestions, please let me know!
Thanks![/QUOTE]
I suggest you answer my question and stop agreeing yourself.
Me, the creator of the comic? I'm 11, but my mum and dad made this account for me, and I don't go on the adult stuff. By that I mean, I'm allowed to be around swearing, but I don't do it myself, but I just don't go on like, the naked ragdolls and stuff.
[QUOTE=TCB;19554965]Me, the creator of the comic? I'm 11, but my mum and dad made this account for me, and I don't go on the adult stuff. By that I mean, I'm allowed to be around swearing, but I don't do it myself, but I jsut don't go on like, the naked ragdolls and stuff.[/QUOTE]
:frogsiren: UNDERAGE USER ALERT :frogsiren:
No, like I said, my parents made the account, and then they decided to let me use it. They read the rules, but they check through my history, to make sure I follow our little agreement.
:frogsiren: DUMBASS UNDERAGE USER ALERT :frogsiren:
THE PERSON USING THE ACCOUNT IS UNDERAGE
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[QUOTE=Kawaii;19555484]:frogsiren: DUMBASS UNDERAGE USER ALERT :frogsiren:
THE PERSON USING THE ACCOUNT IS UNDERAGE[/QUOTE]
hurr make a thread about it durr
I have to agree, they aren't very funny, but that's no surprise, no ones funny when they're 11, you'll grow into humor OP.
Oh noes!
Well, Parakon, I'm sorry that you didn't like them. I've showed them to my friends, they kinda gave me suggestions... so... yeah you can probably see what I'm getting at.
And I'm having a rough time lately, so I need something to cheer me up a bit.
Oh, I just saw that Kawaii made a thread about it. Really? I mean really? And did you see the replies you got? I think your mistaking the members of Facepunch for people that actually care about what you post.
[i]WHAM![/i] You lose debate.
[QUOTE=Kawaii;19555484]:frogsiren: DUMBASS UNDERAGE USER ALERT :frogsiren:
THE PERSON USING THE ACCOUNT IS UNDERAGE[/QUOTE]
Excellent, worthwhile post. :rolleyes:
Seriously, I don't see the problem. He's got correct grammar, he seems to be alright in the head, why exactly is him being eleven such a bad thing? Half of the users on facepunch were probably the same age when they joined.
Feedback on the comic though. I like it, generally. Posing overall is decent, jokes could use a bit of tuning up, but overall, it takes after Concerned nicely.
V3nom, thank you. I try my best with grammar etc. (I'm dyslexic, you see)
And thanks for the feedback. The jokes, I know are bad. But the Ravenholm ones I have planned are pretty funny, in my opinon. And yeah, I originally read Concerned, it's what inspired me, and I try my best not to copy him and rip off his stuff. Apart from the same model, but I've always used Male_07 for my testing ragdoll and playermodel.
Thanks again.
nice comic for age/expirience.
Also, Kawaii, you're an idiot. he's not doing anything wrong.
Thanks. I really enjoy a bit of feedback, so I can work from what I get wrong. I know it's not the best comic in the world, but if some people were to help me out here and there (site design, coding, etc.) it would be greatly appreciated. I do like constructive critisism.
If your wondering why I reply to the people who post, it's because I like to say thanks, or express my opinion. Also so they know I at least acknowledged their post, and not just skipped it.
I take it your real name is Zak?
No, my best mate at my school is called Zak Freeman though. I just thought "Zak [b][i]Freeman?[/b][/i]" When I was trying to think of an idea for a GMod comic, and I guess it just stuck. Pretty cool.
[QUOTE=Matt09;19556181]I take it your real name is Zak?[/QUOTE]
It says 'created by Tyler Brown' in the top left quarter of the comic...
That kawaii guy is an idiot. I would be willing to bet that he's no older than 14.
I never noticed.
Hehe, yeah, Faunts. My middle name is Christopher, named after my dad. So my initials are TCB. But my closest friends (Zak, including) call me by my initials, which I like.
If you like them, or want to see how I improve, or even want to help, then feel free to subscribe, so you are kept up-to-date. I don't have any yet, and I would feel very happy, and be motivated to carry on.
[QUOTE=Kawaii;19555484]:frogsiren: DUMBASS UNDERAGE USER ALERT :frogsiren:
THE PERSON USING THE ACCOUNT IS UNDERAGE[/QUOTE]
Stop being a cunt, he's more mature than you are.
Just because you just turned 13 doesn't mean you can look down on everyone else.
As for the comic I can see that you're vastly inspired by the Concerned.
I'd say you swich the ugly green for something more pleasing. Experiment with different colours, find out what works the best.
Posing needs some working and the humor... ehh, I don't know how to improve that. Either wait a few years or ask a friend or something. some jokes were cool, like the one where Zak smacked that combine and put on his mask rapidly.
But it's really good for someone your age.
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