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Machines. Their bodies are made of cold metal. Their hand holding tight grip on alien weapons. Their eyes are glowing green. There is nothing that can escape them. They are death. They are the bringers of doom. Stripped of all life by their masters, Necrons posses only hate for all living. Ancient machines, immortal beings that once where the most powerful race in the Universe.
We are many. We are elite regiment of the Imperium, purging the heretics by the will of the Emperor himself. Commander gives the order to fire. A battalion of mighty Leman Russ tanks fires their battle cannons, obliterating all alien machines in their sight. Silence.
The machines are down, broken, vaporized, annihilated.
Suddenly, among the broken machines dark skeletal figure made of metal. It’s body is covered in the arcane writings of the long gone race. It’s right hand wields an ancient warscythe capable of cutting through anything, it’s left hand holding it’s grip on arcane artifact. It’s glowing green. Lighting charges passes through it’s body, the metal reforms, recently obliterated machine rises once again.
Commander looks confused, he orders the Guardsman platoon to charge and fire at will.
Men of the Emperor run forth, discharging a barrage of lasergun shots at the Necron Lord.
The shots doesn’t even leave a mark on his metal body.
One of the squads comes close enough to the enemy to assault him, the fools. Seemingly slow Lord suddenly makes a lightning fast move. Faster than eye can see, he cuts Guardsman closest to him in half with his warscythe, from waist to the shoulder, in one move. He turn his head in our direction, there is nothing in his eyes but death and destruction. Guardsmen, the Men of the Imperium, stand still, paralyzed by the horrors of death.
Necron Lord raises his left hand. Blinding flash and a lightning discharge. Lightning bolts jump from the artifact to the fallen Necron Warriors. Deformed, destroyed, obliterated bodies start to rebuild themselves, slowly, one by one, Necron Warriors resurrect back to the unlife. Their weapons with long green glowing tubes, constructed by unknown technology, aiming at the Guardsmen squadron. Discharge. Emperor save us all.
Screams echoes through the battlefield as our whole army being disintegrated, layer by layer, into dust by alien weaponry. Commissar Rhydek that stands next to me tries to stop our squadron from fleeing, executing Guardsmen one by one until a green lightning bolt delivers his death to him.
The shot from a Gauss Gun first flays his skin, disintegrating it atom by atom, then flesh, Commisar Rhydek still screams in pain, then it turns the skeleton and everything else that is left into the dust.
Infantry tried to flee only to be sent to their deaths by the enemy. Battalion of the Leman Russes, fires their Battle Cannons at the enemy. Explosion. From nowhere Necron Lord appears behind a Leman Russ and slices it with his warscythe, making the ammunition in it explode.
Fallen Necrons rise again, one by one, they can’t die, they do not live, they are the death itself.Blinding green flash, i feel the horrible pain, my whole body in agony, then it’s all black.
Emperor save us all.
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Comments and [i]Constructive[/i] Criticism are welcome.
Nice story, apart from some grammar mistakes. I probably couldn't do better, though.
[QUOTE=Joazzz;20377965]Nice story, apart from some grammar mistakes. I probably couldn't do better, though.[/QUOTE]
Could you probably point out the mistakes?:fuckyou:
Unholy bump of my own thread.
Just another bump, no more, i promise.
That was pretty cool, seems more of a description of what happened rather than a story, unless that was what you were trying to do.
I remember then i collected warhammer, memerios..
[QUOTE=Van.;21399594]That was pretty cool, seems more of a description of what happened rather than a story, unless that was what you were trying to do.[/QUOTE]
I tried to describe a small battle.
Alright then.
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