My first foray into computer-based music.

[MartianDiplomat]

[URL="http://soundcloud.com/poororca/luftmensch"]This is the first song I've ever made electronically[/URL], I'd love some feed back or questions.

[JoeyZ]

Very chill, I like it.

There are a few things off, like the cymbals after 1:54 sound out of place, but all in all pretty good for a first piece.

[Slithersoul]

[media]http://soundcloud.com/poororca/luftmensch[/media]
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[MartianDiplomat]

Haha Thanks I guess.
I don't really know how to work this.
Or logic, really.

And the cymbals?
Yeah I kind of agree, I made a loop in esx24 and fucked with it a bit and that's what came out, i kind of like it, but i see where you're coming from.
I've since discovered how to use Ultrabeat and I'm having less trouble with the drums, I'd like to find some 3rd party stuff that might be even better.
haha, I've got a long way to go in this.