[b]Just noticed a typo in the title :P It's wiesmann [/b]
I always make video's but i'm filming with a 550D / 5D Mark II sometimes i can't resist trying to take a few pictures.
Just wanted to hear some responses and see if this is any good :)
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The framing is off in every shot. You are consistently clipping key parts of the subject over the edges. You also need to work on keeping the scene level.
I've gone through and quickly highlighted the biggest mistakes.
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Thumbnails are broken, so I had to quote it. Right click -> View image.
Oh, and 'macro' car shots are rarely interesting. You need to use shallow DOF to [i]compliment[/i] your subject, don't rely on blurred-out bokeh backgrounds to make your shots.
I say all of this objectively to help you, so don't take it personally. :smile:
Also remove the watermark.
The framing is bad to be honest. I know it's hard to get good pictures of cars, in ugly environments, but you should rather have an ugly background, than oddly cropped photos.
Also, contrasting everything isn't artsy, do you have any unedited pics where you can see the entire car? I'd like to give it a go with editing.
what exactly is your association with [url]hartvoorautos.nl[/url], I don't see this set on their site but the work there seems to be submitted by photographers with a different style than your own.
Key word of advice, show off the car if you're shooting for a car site/magazine/etc, you're just using bits of the car to get artsy shots right now.
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