I decided to take a shot at some Garry's Mod skits...

[TonyTheBean]

note: don't watch these, now that i realize it they are bad and i should just stick to doing on-spot stuff because that shits hilarious.

[video=youtube;lqI_mQv5Z1Y]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lqI_mQv5Z1Y[/video]

Bloopers:
[video=youtube;Ge_x1JwUP0M]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ge_x1JwUP0M[/video]

[FreddiRox!]

Well then,

[FalconKrunch]

Are you serious?

[Barlow]

..Why?

[genyus]

The rage is building inside of me.

[TonyTheBean]

Up in 5.

[gt118]

Dis is gun be...bad.

[Jetblack357]

It's been five minutes, where the [B]FUCK[/B] are they?

[TonyTheBean]

Done.

[editline]13th July 2012[/editline]

[QUOTE=Jetblack357;36759074]It's been five minutes, where the [B]FUCK[/B] are they?[/QUOTE]

I CAN ONLY RENDER SO FAST :(

[HoodedSniper]

None of it was funny, im not saying that too be mean, thats straight up criticism.

I really mean none of it was funny, nothing even close to being funny.

[l337k1ll4]

Why did you feel the need to make the thread before the videos were uploaded?

[editline]13th July 2012[/editline]

[QUOTE=HoodedSniper;36759145]None of it was funny, im not saying that too be mean, thats straight up criticism.

I really mean none of it was funny, nothing even close to being funny.[/QUOTE]

Also that ^ Like, it was just, not funny, at all. It didn't even seem like it was really trying to be at parts then some scenes would happen that would seem like a desperate attempt to be funny and were not funny.

[TonyTheBean]

[QUOTE=l337k1ll4;36759150]Why did you feel the need to make the thread before the videos were uploaded?

[editline]13th July 2012[/editline]

Also that ^ Like, it was just, not funny, at all. It didn't even seem like it was really trying to be at parts then some scenes would happen that would seem like a desperate attempt to be funny and were not funny.[/QUOTE]

They were already uploaded, but i put the videos up one by one, not just one entire video.

[genyus]

you are a gold member and yet you dont know that facepunch is a really STRICT community
ESPECIALLY when it comes to Garry's mod.

Please just sit back for 1 minute and think about the whole situation.
You made a thread whitout content and then you added the videos later.

Also it dosent look like you put a lot of effort in these.
Maybe add some audio ? like Music or something to set the mood.
Right now It looks like something out of a RP server.

Allright.
Put the time and effort Dont rush on that because facepunch is a unforgiving place.

[TonyTheBean]

[QUOTE=HoodedSniper;36759145]None of it was funny, im not saying that too be mean, thats straight up criticism.

I really mean none of it was funny, nothing even close to being funny.[/QUOTE]

Honestly, the only skit I had a part of besides acting in it is the Peanuts skit, which was still changed drastically. It was a good project thingy anyways. I'll just keep to doing The Field for my skit thingys. Its better unscripted anyways.

[editline]13th July 2012[/editline]

[QUOTE=genyus;36759318]
You made a thread whitout content and then you added the videos later.

[/QUOTE]

Like I said, it had content, but people were all pissy so i compiled them all into one.

[Jetblack357]

[QUOTE=genyus;36759318]you are a gold member and yet you dont know that facepunch is a really STRICT community
ESPECIALLY when it comes to Garry's mod.

Please just sit back for 1 minute and think about the whole situation.
You made a thread whitout content and then you added the videos later.

Also it dosent look like you put a lot of effort in these.
Maybe add some audio ? like Music or something to set the mood.
Right now It looks like something out of a RP server.

Allright.
Put the time and effort Dont rush on that because facepunch is a unforgiving place.[/QUOTE]

Gold =/= good.

[Crash15]

[QUOTE=TonyTheBean;36758741][video=youtube;lqI_mQv5Z1Y]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lqI_mQv5Z1Y[/video]

Bloopers:
[video=youtube;Ge_x1JwUP0M]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ge_x1JwUP0M[/video][/QUOTE]

Quoting incase he snips

at any rate, these are just awful

[TonyTheBean]

[QUOTE=Crash15;36759427]Quoting incase he snips[/QUOTE]

ONLY PUSSIES PULL OUT

[genyus]

[QUOTE=Jetblack357;36759412]Gold =/= good.[/QUOTE]

Sadly I witness this too often.

[Crash15]

[QUOTE=TonyTheBean;36759454]ONLY PUSSIES PULL OUT[/QUOTE]

implying you won't pull out

[TonyTheBean]

[QUOTE=Crash15;36759479]implying you won't pull out[/QUOTE]

Nah, I made a mistake, I take responsibility for that mistake.

[theshagged]

I enjoyed when Mcfly flew in that's the kind of non sequitur I enjoy.

[Lol-Nade]

[QUOTE=TonyTheBean;36759528]Nah, I made a mistake, I take responsibility for that mistake.[/QUOTE]
People generally prefer more 'natural' approaches to humour in videos, and Facepunch is generally very harsh on Gmod vids seeing as there have been hundreds posted here. With your video, the comedy just seems too forced, it sounds too much like everyone's reading off of a script. Then again, it IS a skit, but it's still too forced to hold any humour.

I wouldn't call it a mistake posting it here, and now that you have some (mostly) constructive criticism under your belt, you should try to apply that to any future videos you happen to make. Everyone's had to learn sometime, mostly the hard way.

And another thing, some effort goes a long way. Adding a soundtrack, video effects or whatever can help with making your videos more enjoyable.