new website with daily comics and more. We just launched it today so give me some feedback on the layout and ideas so we can keep it growing.
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To be honest they aren't very funny and it seems as if no effort was put into them.
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;23470908]To be honest they aren't very funny and it seems as if no effort was put into them.[/QUOTE]
we are trying to keep them simple and cheesy. We all have different senses of humor so we will have a lot of different types of comics and we are pretty new to this so go easy on us.
here are some newer ones:
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It looks like you've just tried to rip off a bunch of other comics, but with terrible artwork and jokes of very poor quality.
no didnt rip off any comics, artwork is cheesy on purpose and b/c we suck at drawing so it's stick figures or nothing. Anyone have real suggestions?
Jokes are groan worthy
[QUOTE=adamthegreat;23472784]no didnt rip off any comics, artwork is cheesy on purpose ([B]i find comics gay[/B] when a comic tries to be artistic) and i bet you couldnt come close to getting jokes of that quality you turd face.[/QUOTE]
:frog:
[QUOTE=adamthegreat;23472784]no didnt rip off any comics, artwork is cheesy on purpose (i find comics gay when a comic tries to be artistic) and i bet you couldnt come close to getting jokes of that quality you turd face.[/QUOTE]
I'm sure you'll get great followers acting like a complete 12 year old.
The jokes are not funny and the artwork is "5 second shit" in MS Paint.
You might want to try drawing real people instead of stick figures as you don't have the wit to fall back on like some people would do (and no not me but FP has some talented people.)
The artwork isn't cheesy it is lazy.
[QUOTE=adamthegreat;23471118]we are trying to keep them simple and cheesy.[/QUOTE]
Just an excuse to be lazy.
[QUOTE=chamon;23475290]Just an excuse to be lazy.[/QUOTE]
appreciate the tips but im not an artist and i think my comics would look worse if i spent time trying to draw them. ill tell the other guys stick figures are not as appreciated.
mainly i am looking for criticism on the layout and what to add to the site, hopefully we will get better as we continue doing comics/videos/blogs/tshirts
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