• Rochelle
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got drawed [URL=http://img4.imageshack.us/i/scan001ig.jpg/][IMG]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/96/scan0001ig.jpg[/IMG][/URL] C&C the fuck out of this.
She looks really pissed off. The bit of hair on the left looks strange. Also, theres a strange dent and then a bump on top of her head. Her collerbone area is strange, since it's just a line (which looks slightly offset.
Is that hair or blood running down her face?
Hair I wish I had a tablet so I could paint it. [editline]12:26PM[/editline] [QUOTE=DoctorSalt;18316209]She looks really pissed off. The bit of hair on the left looks strange. Also, theres a strange dent and then a bump on top of her head. Her collerbone area is strange, since it's just a line (which looks slightly offset.[/QUOTE] Yah my eraser sucks when erasing the hair, I tried to make like her hair was loosening from the bun hence the denty look I guess, also oops on that line.
[QUOTE=fnj;18316756]Hair I wish I had a tablet so I could paint it. [editline]12:26PM[/editline] Yah my eraser sucks when erasing the hair, I tried to make like her hair was loosening from the bun hence the denty look I guess, also oops on that line.[/QUOTE] Couldn't you use real paints?
I got some crayons.
That looks really nice. Good work drawing the dreadlocks her lips look abit too fat :p no nosebone in sight but nobodys perfect ;) 7/10
I have no problems with the hair - it seems apparent people are picking flaws with the less important areas of the picture. The hair says it's dreadlocks, it's cartoony. The features I'm particularly drawn to mention however are: 1. The neck, it's far too thick for a woman, and Rochelle's no several hundred pounder so you can guarantee it'll be comparatively skinny. 2. The head is pretty big, as are her features, she looks quite masculine - scale things down, particularly the jaw, the rest of her features could be smaller to, also pay attention to the curves her face takes, especially at this more or less 3/4 angle. 3. Her ear is very thin, most ears do not looks like this, on average they are proportionate between the eyebrow and base of the nose - you've achieved this so well done, but rounden them out and they'll look better. 4. Her nose looks flat, from this view, you'd see some portion of her nostrils. 5. Good work on those petite shoulders, they look fine, but as DoctorSalt mentioned, the collarbones don't look right - they're too angular when they should be curvacious. Also try making them appear with the use of shadow instead of dark lines. Overall a good attempt, all I'd say is reference to correct those proportionate and anatomical errors!
[QUOTE=Tom-ate-em;18363871] 2. The head is pretty big, as are her features, she looks quite masculine.[/QUOTE] Maybe he wants to protray that?
[QUOTE=BlackWind;18363920]Maybe he wants to protray that?[/QUOTE] He wanted to draw 'Rochelle', he didn't mention a 'masculine interpretation of', I was just giving some (what I hope was) helpful C&C because he requested it, and I know it's great to get a variety of such from different people.
She looks like she ran into a wall a few times.
It's a manwoman.
got [b]drawn[/b] :eng101:
[QUOTE=Tom-ate-em;18363966]He wanted to draw 'Rochelle', he didn't mention a 'masculine interpretation of', I was just giving some (what I hope was) helpful C&C because he requested it, and I know it's great to get a variety of such from different people.[/QUOTE] Thankyou for the C&C It's not me who makes the features so weird, my scanner widens out the picture a bit. since her lips aren't that big in paper, making her look squary. But its not like men can't be round right, I mean just look at coach [sp]or Gabe Newell[/sp]
yeah...you should make her nose a tad flatter AND her lips muuuch bigger... jk, notreally
[QUOTE=fnj;18401993]Thankyou for the C&C It's not me who makes the features so weird, my scanner widens out the picture a bit. since her lips aren't that big in paper, making her look squary. But its not like men can't be round right, I mean just look at coach [sp]or Gabe Newell[/sp][/QUOTE] Do you have a graphics program to adjust these errors? Or maybe you have some kind of wrong settings on the scanner or something? The only problems I've ever encountered have been dullness / lack of clarity or too much texture coming through :/ and men certainly can be round! :D and Gabe may be one of the select, but he's a genius.
[QUOTE=Tom-ate-em;18404182]Do you have a graphics program to adjust these errors? Or maybe you have some kind of wrong settings on the scanner or something? The only problems I've ever encountered have been dullness / lack of clarity or too much texture coming through :/ and men certainly can be round! :D and Gabe may be one of the select, but he's a genius.[/QUOTE] Yeah I too get my pictures all faded and shit. I gotta press down on them, but that doesn't help much, and the faint details and shading get blurry. I'll just save up for a tablet and never have to deal with lack of materials, smudgy pictures, or stubborn scanners. Still, no excuse to stop trying.
The pictures aren't there anymore?
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