I made an 8 second ambient loop, critiques anyone?

[Blockjuice II]

[url]http://www.mediafire.com/?x67rq19jgwe3wcr[/url]

I uploaded it to soundcloud realizing that it was 14 seconds long instead of 8 like it was supposed to be, so it's on mediafire here fixed.

[Akvai]

meh..

[Miktor.]

The sounds are uhm, wierd. Also it's way too short to judge anything properly. You should give us at least a minute long sample.

[mynames2long]

This would get annoying sooo fast if looped

[Croix]

Sounds kinda dissonant.

Needs less bass.